This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144 - Page 90

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

'What a delight! a story that is true to its genre and that transfers us to a world of true love and romance' The chap etches a romantic description of the intense feelings amongst the two main protagonists, . You hv beautifully shown that behind every fulfilled love there is likely to be an unfulfilled one.

Ashu n Nidhi's relation shown majestically! They share a very angelic bond with their fears surfacing again when Mallika suddenly reappears , but then love conquers all ...n together they r ready to face the tornado directed their way.

Complications begin when the two lady characters Nidhi n Mallika, both with a common love interest, come face to face once again. And that's when Mallika's character does tend to become a little predictable. The very usual egoistic n selfcentered Mallika.

Khushi , the operate cooperate episode clearly indicates, she is other meaning of innocence: naive, guillible, and altogether too trusting. She can misunderstand anything other than the most obvious. She can commit offenses unwittingly . 😆 Yet she is adorable

The chap maintains a good pace throughout and end...well a cliff hanger! Why was Mallika shocked when she saw Khushi? Don't tell me she is Mallu's daughter😕

Originally posted by: Libra

Anu,I have been a silent reader of all your FFs and love all of them,specially Ashutosh ki nazar se and This time forever,it is very close to my heart,i have loved all the Ashni moments after Ashu comes back in Nidhi's life and waited withanxiousness for their reunion ,loved these two updates,could imagine SK in all those passionale llove scenes,but yeh end mein kya tha,dont tell me yeh Khsushi aur mallu related hai,please,dont take Khushi away from Nidhi,waitinf for next update and also for update of Season of Love ,take care .

TThankyou so much for this,this is one of my most favorite Ashni moments

Originally posted by: Libra

Hi Aazeen,

Thank you sweetheart for this beautiful review, and lovely compliments. I am so glad you liked the update.

As for the story line and what is going to happen, Sorry honey, you will have to wait till the next update. See, agar maine tumhe bata diya abhi ke you have something to worry or not worry about, toh phir toh meri kahani khatm ho jayegi. Bas wait, and see.😃 I am assure you that when the FF ends, you will remember this story with fondness.😳

Thank you again. I have read the first two chap of your FF. The next two kal subaha, and then I will post the review for all four together.😃

I agree with u, at the suspense part, n understand, what u mean... It was just a reaction, a normal reader would give... But will wait till u update next...

As to my ff, read at ur convinience... I shall deffo wait for ur review... Frankly, had waited for ur review wid bated breath... Had, wanted to know, ur reaction to my dedication... I'm sorry, I took the liberty myselves, widout ur permission.. I hope u won't mind it... Do let me know...
Mere yahan toh night ho gayi hai... Good night...

Lovely to see your update after so long Anu. Hope things ar fine with your family now. I did read your mil was sick but couldnt reply. Its very nice of u to continue with your updates inspite of your family issues, thanks a lot.

Hi Anu good to have you back missed you,what a lovely update just read it , loved Ashni but the cliffhanger

Anuji...u r just awesome...coming back with a bang...superb chapter...2 parts is a great surprise for us...

😛Double dhamaka. read it just now. Thank u for lovely update❤️.Its really ho😉t and good story line.👏The end part is🤣 Detailed review will follow soon. Next HHGA😊 Please...