This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144 - Page 17

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

loved it Anu. specially the part where Ashu interacts with Khushi. eagerly waiting for next , but the wait is a long one I know.

happy Navratri.

Originally posted by: aarundhati

Superb Anuji...u are just tooo goood...!loved every part of this chapter...love to see this determined and strong Nidhi...can actually visualize KK here...the girl who is so very madly in love ith her man...so committed to him and yet so composed and balnced in front of him...must be taking so much effort to be like she is being...excellent...loved every bit of ur writing so far...plz keep writing...Happy Navratri and take care...!

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Where are you going? 😲

You will be back after 20 days?😭

Till then, no update?🤢

Originally posted by: hilarious44

OMG Anuji..😛.

What an update...alot more worth the wait...👏👏👏

Am just speechless...No amount of praise n appreciation can match the standard of this chapter.😳😳..

For me this is the BEST chapter i have ever read in any FF till date..👏👏👏

Am mesmerized by the purity n beauy of emotions n sentiments portrayed..😳😳😳..

I just loved loved loved ashu-khushi bonding...😛😛..

Nidhi though a little harsh on ashu but is justified in her behaviour...

Nidhi as a mother is just outstanding.👏👏..

The last scene in ashuz cabin OMG OMG...it was simply out of this world...i dont knw how many times have re-read it...still thinking about it...

I dont want nidhi n ashu to unite any time soon...their being so close yet so far n khushi there to bridge the gap is the CHARM of this FF..😳😳😳

Loved rangu-anji part..👏.

Have fallen in love with u all over again..❤️🤗.

U are just MINDBLOWING...👏👏.

Hope to c u back soon...

I dont knw how am i gonna wait for ur updates...but u have given us alot of chapters to cherish till then.😛..

Just cant thank u enough.👏👏👏..

Hve already read this chapter so many times...I LOVE IT😳😳😳

Originally posted by: oaz30

Libra if your other fictions were great. This is sheer genius,I love the way things is going on... The vulnerability in ashu is endearing

More to follow...

Originally posted by: bc123456

What a fabulous chapter loved both the chapters , you are a great writer one can almost feel the emotions , each one's hurt their tentativeness towards each other , you make it alive would have loved to have a serial like this , great going waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: achiever

wow luved it! such an emotional chapter.. bt very true.. bt i hate to c a devdas Ashu.. i know i m eating my words.. i had wanted this.. i wanted him to be punished.. bt its jst so painful to c him this way pining for Nidhi.. bt she is rite in her way v know..

bt khushi is darling.. she is going to bring thm closer!

and y didnt ashu keep a check on her in all these yers i want to knoow!

and yes.. Season of luv puhlesasse.. the first thing afer navratri!

Originally posted by: anjalini

Hi Anu,

Really awesome chapter,Loved every bit of it. Nidhi's dry and rude behaviour is definitely justifiable but it's pain to see Ashu ignorant about Khushi not being Nidhi's biological child.Hope you reveal it to him soon in ur updates.

' This was the first time that Khushi had ever gone to sleep without her. She was a bit jealous' such a cute and true reaction of Nidhi...it's mothers possessiveness

I appreciate Ranga and Anji's efforts to reunite ashni. So exciting that Khushi is going to select her papa...waiting to see how she brings Ashni together.

Loved last seen to core...Ashu lying on sofa and Khushi on his tummy ...such a lovely scene. I am going to read this chapter I dunno how many times.

Thanks a million, Anu. and Lots Of Love dear.🤗