FF - Pati, Patni Aur Woh!- chapter 17 on page 150 - Page 109

Originally posted by: saibanu

Hmmm ...So now the separation start 😔 !!!!

But seriously Sujatha di , very well written ...I loved it to the core , their SR is very nicely written and the song ashu sang is so Apt ..

Will wait for your next chapter ...😃

Thank you Sai 😳

Glad you liked it

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Mallu's dad called him...hope he doesn't pressurise Ashu...

it spells danger..but then things are never smooth when you go against conventional moral values...hope the lovebirds win the battle

Sometimes, pressure comes from the most unexpected of quarters..

And yes, they have chosen to walk down a tough path...they need to find the inner resolve to handle challenges!

Next chapter when? ???? Now that's a slave driver for you! !!!!!!

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

good sr sujata ji,the rituals make so much diff in thoughts too. Now Nidhi and Ashutosh both seems happy.And the song by Ashutosh,just very fabulous song.I am vry big fan of mukesh.Is there going a seperation? waiting for the next chap

Thank you Alka 😳

Yes, rituals do influence our thoughts and experiences...

And Kabhie Kabhie is my all time favorite song!

Originally posted by: turags

SR and Honeymoon got done in one shot in one chapter ji...but loved it...

you gave us all the whole story outline a while back so i guess no cliffhangers here...

awesome chap Sujatha...and looks like AshNi's SR is more "subtle" than their actual first time...and here i was all set with paper and pencil to take down some pointers for my new FF...😉

Yaar...honeymoon toh pehle hi mana liye na 😉

And no more pointers...ab shaadi shuda shareef couple jo ban gaye 😆

Originally posted by: aarundhati

"You'll probably laugh...but I feel strange...my face feels and bothered...and I am sure I must be the colour of a beetroot!"

Ashutosh was alarmed now.

"Are you coming down with something? Here, let me take a look at you?"

He tried to pry her away from him but she burrowed even further, almost trying to hide herself within him.

"Silly...I am not coming down with anything...I am just...I am just...oh what the heck..I feel shy...embarrassed..I am blushing!"

Oh...what a great difference do the traditions and rituals make...You have portrayed that so well thru this ASHNI convo...SUPERB, as always...👏

loved the depth of love of ASHNI towards each other...Ashu's pleading to Nids with...

don't ever leave me, Nidhi..I don't think there would be breath left in my body to raise a monument to our love!"

That was just too much...this writing deserves a 👏🤗Sujathaji, for sure...Ashu's feelings for Nids cannot be better described...

Like Armaan for his support to ASHNI inspite of Ashu's independent decisions which Ashu takes , not worrying abt. the rest of the world, his social image nor the legal implications, if any...

THANKS a LOTTT!

Thank you Aarundhati 😳

Glad that you noticed the blushing part...it was written with that very purpose in mind...to underline the difference rituals can make...

Glad that you liked how Ashu bared his heart...he is so vulnerable and helpless in the face of his love

Yes, Armaan and Ashu have always been there for each other...their friendship has survived Mallika after all!

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Yaar...honeymoon toh pehle hi mana liye na 😉

And no more pointers...ab shaadi shuda shareef couple jo ban gaye 😆

Originally posted by: jyotinayana

Next chapter when? ???? Now that's a slave driver for you! !!!!!!

Madam Slave Driver...where is your comment on the update?

Originally posted by: turags

😲 shaadi kiya hain ya sainthood liya hain...come on boss...yeh toh saraasar na insaafi hain...😆

Maine yeh toh nahi kaha ki they wont be doing it 😆...but seriously, wanted a sweet SR...rather than a sexy one...have given you that already...wanted a variation even for myself...😳

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Maine yeh toh nahi kaha ki they wont be doing it 😆...but seriously, wanted a sweet SR...rather than a sexy one...have given you that already...wanted a variation even for myself...😳