OS-Never let me go-Part4-completed (page 2)

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Hi Again 😊
With current track showing Ashu getting kidnapped I came up with new OS . I hope you guys like this one too
Part 1:-

Its been 2 days since ashu is missing , Nidhi remember first time when ashu went missing and the days unfolded afterwards..Everyone declared he is dead but No , not nidhi ..she knew deep down no matter what , ashu will not leave her alone like this ..he will come back and he did !

She remember the day before he went missing , how badly they fought , it is not the first time ..Because this what they both have been doing from past few days'she thought ,why every time they have to let their ego come in between..why cant they just shrug it off and embrace each other with all flaws..is love isn't enough ? What has gone wrong and now where can she find him '

Its not tht she don't know 'she know everyone are worried about ashu and for her !! 'Everyone tried to console her that ashu will return, they asked her to keep faith tht bajaranbli will solve everything'how she wished to believe that , but No!! al those words looked so empty and so fake '

ITs like nidhi caught up in whirlpool of emotions and sudden memory of ashu made her choke.She just wished for his safety and closed her eyes'and whispered Ashuthosh!!

Ashu , he heard her , his nidhi ..Like sweet whisper it reached his heart!! And made him so desperate for her , for her touch ..He cursed himself for letting himself in this situation, he know nidhi must be distressed..she must be searching for him, her sad eyes lingered in his mind for a second and made him choke with sudden sadness 'how he wish now to erase the past !! to erase all things he told nidhi..calling her childish , immature 'isn't it normal for wife to feel jealous when her husband spending time with person who seems to in love with him, may be that's why god made him face same situation with amar..His name is enough to put ashu in foul mood, the boy is mess , how shamelessly he flirted with nidhi , how he went gaga over nidhi even after knowing she is married !! how much he had to control to keep his sanity , those days sitting in his cabin , he understood nidhi , her insecurity ..he understood how terrible it feels to be in this situation..!!Suddenly he felt drained and suffocated with everything '.as he lay their and whispered Nidhi!!

As she stood their outside police station, waiting for some news 'it sudden dawned to her someone is watching her, she is being stalked..This is not first time!! even before ashu's disappearance she felt some one ..but who and why ?? she shrugged it off as she saw inspector coming in her direction..

Nidhi tried to be very positive, she hoped this time inspector give some news on ashu's whereabouts but all she heard is same blabbering like past days..that they are doing everything possible to track ashu, before inspector could complete his sentence ,she left that place and headed towards KGH as sudden emptiness filled her heart'

Ashu tried to get up, his throat felt sour and his limbs so weak. He can feel some movement outside as he tried to get up and he felt faint when sudden nausea hit him hard!! He had to hold on to wall for support before collapsing on floor with a thud'

Its more thn 3hr when he woke up to sound of door opening'it took him several minutes to register what happened exactly ..That he is being kidnapped and kept captive from past 2 days by none other than Amar!! ..

Let me know IF you wnt me to continue 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2-

Nidhi left KGH after finishing her day, its not easy to be their when her husband went missing..But it was best option to divert from everything around. As she walked, again same feeling crept up..Like some one is following, like she is being stalked..as she turned back found no one behind and thought it must be her overstressed brain plying games as she moved towards Verma house ..

Did she saw Amar !! Is it him..?? yes he is , Nidhi saw him on her way back to verma house …she decided to ignore him and move as pair of hands took hold of her and dragged her in jeep… Even before she could make out what exactly, happening she saw pair of eyes looking at her ..And if she is not mistaken those were none other than Bajarang bhai..

It took Ashu's all energy to break free from those ties which kept him captive..He saw small window just few inches away, he reached to check if he can get out from their …he sighed hard when it dawned to him..its too small to even try..he looked around to find something , some way to get out but he found nothing …suddenly he felt some movement outside , he felt drop dead for a second..he stood their with batted breath as he heard nothing but silence all over again .He waited for few minutes to make a move and reached towards door because he knew that is only option left for him to break free ..and he determined to do everything possible to get back to nidhi where he is supposed to be …

The door ws locked from outside, the door looked so old and rusty and it seems to him if he put little bit pressure he can open the latch. ..After few struggle he opened the door and looked around..Whole place was empty , it looked like some kind of garage .he decided not not waste anymore time as he dashed towards main door run but to find Amar standing right in front of him with gun point in between his eyes..even before he react someone hit him hard and he fell backwards as sudden pain rushed to his brain making him faint all at once.

When Nidhi opened eyes. She saw Ashu on floor just few inches awy ..He looked so terrible in that state, He heart went out for him..She cursed herself for putting him in this situation..How much he tried to put sense that being with amar is dangerous.but she ignored him, she shouted at him for controlling her life..What's gotten into her? And why she did that ??

She lay their unable to move and whispered Ashuthosh .

After several minutes Ashu woke up to sudden whimpering sound , like someone trying hard to suppress their cry. He alarmed to see Nidhi staring back at him when he opened his eyes..Is it dream?? How can he come here ? why the hell she is here ?Dont she know its too dangerous to be here , Ohh wait is she also abducted just like him ..before he blabber something they both felt movements as bajarang bhai came inside with huge grin on his face followed by Amar..who looked lost !!!

I will update next part tomorow morning ..Thank you 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Saibanu: superb! OS.. Very in depth, touching.. U hv really very well brought the inner feelings of ashni.. beautiful.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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what a beautiful OS😊...great job👏👏...continue with ur writing plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3-

It was bajarng who broke the silence

Kyaa baat hai Daktarni saaiba ?? Daaro maaat hum tusse kuch nahi karenge ..Hamee tho bas Daktar saab se matlab hai ..bas ek baar Isss se nepta le !!

Nidhi and ashu looked at each other with bewildered look. They don't know what bajarang mean ?? is he Referring to her that they will get rid of Ashu ..nidhi shuddered with the thought of that !!

Nidhi looked at Amar who was standing far end of room, it was difficult to read his expression…

She tried to gauge his expression but failed..He looked somewhat lost

Sensing silence Bajarang continued:-

Wo kyaa hai naa…hamare munna ko jo b pasand usse laaa ke dena iss bajarangee ka kaam hai aur is baar hamare munna ka pasand aap tehre..kyaa hua aaap shaadi shuda ho to, bas ek baar iss doctor se nipat le baad main aap aur munna …

Before he could finish nidhi shouted …what the hell you think?? And you Amar …I saved your life and is this how you repay …I did not expected this from you and what made you think by getting rid of my husband you can have way with me …don't even dream of such things ..Amar ..I will never forgive you ,if you try to hurt my husband …let alone come into my life

Amar did not even care to respond. all his attention diverted towards Ashu …

Bajarangee smiled looking at her expression; he understood why his brother the ultimate flirt ended up loving this married woman. He thought...yes this girl is something!!

Amar did not wasted much time as he pulled out gun and pointed towards ashu …Just then nidhi got up

Ran towards him but failed when some one pulled her back.She looked at Amar with shock!! is he the Same boy she saved.is he the one who smiled and made her smile. How can he change so drastically?and what made him take such a step..??

She called out to him..Amar .you are not going to do this? Stop it right their..dont mess with me.Leave my husband. But he looked at her with strange expression..As he whispered..Nidhi!!

You have become my sole reason to live and I will do everything to get you in my life..as they say everything is fair in love and war…Sacrifice are meant to happen and this time its Mr Ashuthosh turn …

Nidhi:-Amar! No don't hurt him …you can never have me !! not in this life time . Love is . . . Being happy..for the other person when they are happy, Being sad for the person when they are sad…And you will get nothing in return by killing my husband ..you will never get me. not in this life time speaking this She looked at ashu …she tried to read his expression.. She cursed herself for putting him in this situation…

Suddenly room filled with so much tension. Everyone waited with batted breath as Amar took hold of his gun and pointed towards Ashu …

It was nidhi who reacted first, she tried hard to stop him..But she knew Amar is gone beyond all that ..it broke her heart to see ashu in such a state just when amar pointed his gun towards ashu ..Nidhi ran in between…

All happened within second, Nidhi trying hard to break free and stop Amar ..And Amar!! He stood their and Looked into Ashu eyes and whispred maaf kijiye daktaar saaab as he proceeded to press trigger

Ashu waited for bullet to pierce and shatter him from inside ..he waited for the pain to come and wash over him …but he felt nothing , he forced to open his eyes after hearing bajarngee's voice … munna yeh kyaa kiya tune ??

He looked around to find nidhi standing right in front of him with hand

Pressing her abdomen then it dawned to him..Nidhi is shot!!! She came in between to save him…it seems to him time freezed as Nidhi tumbled …A made rage took over him as he ran towards nidhi, A fear which shook him from root !! As he ran towards nidhi and covered her tightly in his embrace and whispered..Nidhi!! Don't you dare leave me !! Don't you dare? but To find Nidhi already drifted to unconscious..

Amar finding difficult to believe what he saw…did he just shot nidhi ? Oh god what a mess ..he was shaking uncontrollably when bajarangee came towards him…He tried to block everything out but it seems to him nothing could be done to undo the past ..even the last hope he had is dissolved now … as he looked towards Nidhi dawned to him that he lost her forever ..

He looked at Bajrangee and muttered …Finished! Everything is finished …My obsession took her life ..I killed her ..but bajarangee not the one to give up..as he pressed gun in amar's hand and asked him to finish what they planned …Amar shook his head violently and Backed off…

Other side ..Ashuthosh took nidhi in his arm and tried to get up..his whole body aching but there was nothing to stop him from running toward nearby hospital…he can hear them talking ..Amar and bajarangee..He can hear Amar's cry and bajrangee constant blabbering to finish the plan..

Just then Bajarangee called out …Doctor saab ..hilne ki koshish b matt karma , baat abi katam nahi hui hai but ashu stopped caring what they will do it him now and he took first few steps towards main door holding nidhi closely ,…

Slowly Bajarngee got up and took hold of gun and pointed towards ashu …who was moving just few inches away …and he closed his eyes and pressed trigger !!


I will update last part today evening , hope you like this part also .. Do give feedback ,Thank you 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ithasme

Saibanu: superb! OS.. Very in depth, touching.. U hv really very well brought the inner feelings of ashni.. beautiful.


Thank you dear 😊
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Originally posted by: hilarious44

what a beautiful OS😊...great job👏👏...continue with ur writing plz


Thank you 😊
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PART-4

Ashutosh opened his eyes to find lying in hospital bed , it took him few minutes to register what happened and why he is lying here ..Just then Dr ranganath came in and asked Ashu to lie down and not to over stress ..But how can he rest when he is hell scared what ranganath might tell about Nidhi..He don't remember who pulled trigger first , he don't remember how he ended up here in hospital..Sensing Ashuthosh's restlessness Ranganath spoke .."Sir , Dr nidhi is fine , she is out of danger and right now we shifted her to ward, so you please rest , you should rest for some time" …

Ashuthosh:-No..I want to see her now , I am fine ..Please take me to her room

Ranganath knew it's not possible to convince Ashuthosh..so he wheeled him to Nidhi's room .

When He saw nidhi..His heart went out for her, she looked so frail..even though ranganath told him nidhi is fine ..it killed him to see her like this ..Sensing they need some time alone, ranganath left and closed the door .

There was so much to talk , so much to make up..but he don't know where to start and how ?..He just stared at nidhi and sighed ..Just then Nidhi muttered .."I am sorry "

Ashu: For what ?

Nidhi : For everything ..For leaving you, for fighting with you? for being rude with you ..and everything.

Ashu just stared at her …and muttered, so now??

Nidhi: So , are you still angry with me ?

The way she asked made him chuckle.

Ashu:-Not really…but now you have to make up for it .

Nidhi:-As in ???

Ashu:-well …you want me to explain ..Huh ??

Nidhi blushed and turned her face away…

Suddenly out of blue Nidhi asked.."Where is Amar" ?

Ashu got miffed with mention of his name and couldn't hide his irritation..as he uttered

"How the hell do I know ?"

Nidhi: Do you know , he is the one who saved us in the end …he could have killed you but he didn't

Ashu was shocked to hear this piece of infor..but still he couldn forgive amar for whatever he did

Sensing Ashu's irritation..Nidhi changed subject ..so what you thought , that I will die ..and leave you at peace so soon ..huh ??

Ashu couldn't control his chuckle as he bent forward to kiss her forehead…

Ashu:-Nidhi , I am sorry for everything , I said things which I shouldn't have told you ..I know there is lot to make up for whatever I did ?? so all I want to ask …Hmm ..You see will you give me one more chance?

Nidhi looked into his eyes for long and nodded her head, and spoke. "well!! It's not only you , even I said many things I shouldn't have told..I am sorry "

Ashu bent forward to kiss her as nidhi stopped him in between..

Ashu;-now what ??

Nidhi :-Promise me one thing , That whatever happen ..you will Never let me go , that you will never let me leave you !!

Ashu:-What ?? are you planning to dump me again

Nidhi:-Noo…I just told , huuh you see ..you being so unpredictable !!

Ashu:- Nidhi!! Remember one thing from now on …you are stuck with me for this life time and there is no way out , nidhi couldn't control her chuckle , after so many days she felt so happy and at peace and she pulled ashu closely and whispered , "So , when are you taking me home ?"

Ashu smiled and and whispered "anytime, you want me to but don't you think right now there is some unfinished business "

Nidhi was lost for second, even before she understod what ashu meant ..ashu closed on her and pressed his lips to hers ..

She did not felt anything like this …The kiss was beautiful and it was fierce and hungry same time..Tender and full of love, she let herself completely loose and gave in with equal passion…as the kiss got deeper and deeper, which promised her of beautiful tomorrow, a new beginning with the man she love ...


😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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saina,i just read whole 4 parts,and sweety it was owsome.please come with another romantic os.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: alkaparmart

saina,i just read whole 4 parts,and sweety it was owsome.please come with another romantic os.



sure i will write ,Thank you dear for such warm words 😊

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