Our KTLK - Kashmakash Chap 17 (pg 136) Updated - Page 46

WOH HO HO...hold it hold it...what a thrilling ending that was...KIA SCENE THA👏👏👏👏...

I thought I will give a single post.. but now will post separate reviews...

Starting with chapter 7:

Oh this girl is so crazily in love with Ashu already... that it makes me fall in love with her.. Wrapping the dupatta as if in a hug...

The scene of holding the kurta and the dupatta.. Oh soo cute... .. Nidhi's completely lost it... 😆

I wondered why Ashu was in a grumpy mood coming back from the hospital... why didn't he have dinner??

Armu is back... Yipee... Armaan in any FF is just as sweet.. so glad he is here.. make him stay for long...

Yaar aisa friend muzhe bhi chahiye... No questions asked.. just there... wow...

(I am also cutely pouting here... just you can't see it... 😆)

I love the glimpses of personal concern with all the believable hospital scenarios that you put up...

Ashu cuts her off ' aur aap ko lunch nahi karna hain kya? Ya library mein do teen kitaab khaake pet bharliya aap ne?

Lunch invitation haan... so our man is also total lattoo... .🤣

Ashu ' hmm.. so this is your number? Shall I save it?

Yaar yeh itna gentleman kaise hai... chooo cute... ...

They are already behaving like a couple.. I would have laughed if i had scene this on TV... waiting for the other to start eating.. In dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta...

Hmm... BB has sensed the obvious... And inviting Nidhi for dinner.. is it a ploy to get them to spend more time together...

Nidhi opening the door was a masterpiece... making Ashu aware - how beautiful life could be...

I noticed Nidhi hasn't forgotten that Ashu is her boss.. Even during dinner she stands up when she sees Ashu and that is soo true... how ever big your crush on your boss... you cannot forget he is the boss... 👍🏼... Small things like me... make it so easy to visualize the entire scene as we read it..

do you think it's a good time for me to set myself on fire?"

I am going to use this somewhere... Beautiful way of getting some one to talk...

Their interests are common.. I notice you have been trying to highlight their love for music... any special reason why?? Maybe we see some incident that will bring them closer... 🤔

I wanted to Ashu for not even tasting the gajar ka halwa... but the next chapter deal with it very well.. so... maaf kiya... 😉

Mentos... hai... ... yeh Ashu kitna cute hai... Not only Nidhi.. even I fell in love with him.. all over again... hai...

The devil meets the goddess!!... Nice place to end the chapter...

It is already 2 am... Chapter 8 maybe in the morning...

Originally posted by: Malvika_rajeev

Doc, aap aur aapki telugu!! 😆

Yenti, Ardhamleva?

baaga ardham ayindi madam...but your grammar can do with a bit of improvement...😉

experience talking, huh!! 😉

Some symptoms of Loveria include: day dreaming, hallucinations, sudden affection for the target side, sudden affinity for the likes and hatred for the dislikes of the target, talkativeness in a particular direction...of course it is my experience talking...when you asked me ki iske baad kya hoga, I was transported via the dream machine into a timeframe 27 years back...when my anatomy instructor set his sights on me.

Hope this helps????

oh yeah...that definitely helps...will take these into consideration while i treat AshNI...😆

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Ooohhh!!! Again a cliffhanger! Kyu karti ho aap aisa? Chalo koi nahi, will b waiting 4 ur next update...
Very well written update suja di... U have really mastered the art of writing... Right from nidhi-armaan scene, not a single place i felt was a let out...

thank you Aazeen...😳

Ashu touching the flowers was so sweet! N the gajar ka halwa scene was also very-very nice... I totally loved both the scenes...

ashu n flowers is my fav scene too...😉

Rohan-nidhi scene was very nice... Typical nihaan types... Rohan is always that true frnd types... I liked the way, rohan gave nidhi the way to her r'ship wid ashu..

I liked Ashu-armaan scene too... Hope their convo comes in the next update...

yup...👍🏼

Ashu ji ka gussa... Baap re baap! But wo gussa jaayaz hai... Wo insaan jisne khud apni maa ko, n khud ko bhugat te dekha ho, uske liye aggressive hona bilkul laazmi hai... Nidhi ji ne jaise situation ko sambhala, kya kahoon... U know, mujhe aise acts, typical wifey types maloom padte hain, jinke pati dev ka gussa saatve aasmaan ko chuta ho, unki wife aise hi behave krti hongi... Aisa mujhe lagta h...

😆 don't know how a typical wife behaves Aazeen...am not a typical wife myself...

So now, confession time... Atleast 4 nidhi... I really hope, ashu uspar kuch zyada bhadak na jaaye apne ghusse mein...

Chalo suja di, bohot mazaa aaya aapka update padhke.. U n anu di r my true rockstars ... Gud luck 4 the next chap, jab bhi aap post karein...

thanks for the wishes...will try to post as soon as i can...

Tc...
Loads of love...
Aazeen..

Originally posted by: bc123456

What a beautiful chapter I just loved the emotions specially ashus with the flowers and the halwa , glad you wrote about the child abuse we see so much of it but despite the law are unable to do much . Waiting for the next chapter thank you for a feel good feeling

Originally posted by: aru29

another piece of superb writing sujatha ji

a brilliant chapter all in all...

loved ever bit of it...

-the armaan ashu interaction was brief and sweet...so was the one between ashu and armaan loved how from the normal conversations between ashu and nidhi armaan could deduce the entire issue going on..., just by their way of talking👏

ab Ashu itna out of the ordinary behave karega toh shak toh hoga na...😉

-the anji rangnath and ashu scene was amazingly written...⭐️ could imagine it and had a huge smile on anji's reaction on realising ashu was behind her...😆

-ashu eating the halwa and relishing it was so cute was a li'l upset wen he didn't eat it in front of nidhi...

i know...lot of you got angry and were upset as to why ashu didn't eat the halwa...you all missed the way he was gripping his water glass when he was rejecting her...it hurt him to reject the offer...but Ashu in denial mode...kya karen!!

-great to see nidhi and ashu friendship grow without the love angle in between...

-bringing out ashu's past and its trauma was done with utmost brilliance which deserves a special mention..👏even i feel like hitting that rajendra😡

--AND AND the much awaited confession occurs in one of the most BEAUTIFUL of ways...simply superb👍🏼

-A GREAT CHAPTER⭐️ shall be more eagerly awaiting the next one

PS- SO SORRY for the late review told u naa in PM ,had an appointment so had to go out for a while,came back read the chap, ate sumthing and now wrote the review...😊

hey, no apology needed...hopefully you are feeling better now and fully out of the viral...