Ashutosh ke Nazar se- FF/ Chap 6 Final Chap pg 39 - Page 13

Enjoyed every part of it...it was frustating in the show to only watch Nidhi face the whole thing and not Ashu...you are doing justice to Nidhi..

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Enjoyed every part of it...it was frustating in the show to only watch Nidhi face the whole thing and not Ashu...you are doing justice to Nidhi..

Anu, what can I say... AWESOME. To die for chapter.

OK i missed to comment...
me here now...

I loved this chap the most anu...
i love the turn off events that made ashu mad...Definately Rohan and Anji turn the tables on him
the lunch sharing moment and nidhi's ignorance and reluctance was put beautifully...and right when ashu was ahout to serve her, Rohan came on perfect timing...
OK i have to admit i never live ROHAN after he developed feelings for Nidhi...He was indeed a great friend but after that he left, i never wished to see him back in track forward so i was a lil upset with 2nd part
but this part made me love him...Thank God he was up to get Nidhi and ashu close...and was not taking advantage of this chance...
Nidhi's comment as how ashu willn't mind her leaving him was hurtful but ashu totally deserve that...
and the jealousy factor work best on him...
I m glad he accepted his mistakes infront of the family but he deserved a lil more aggression from the family...like how much DB and CV put effort to accept him as a part of thre family just cause for nidhi but he let them down...
but all well end well...now really looking up as how ashu gonna manofy his roothi wifey...

cont soon anu...i adore your writing n long chaps are treat...
hugs
🤗
ana

Originally posted by: SSA777

Anu, what can I say... AWESOME. To die for chapter.

Ashu realizing what Nidhi went through with Mallika, picking up on what the friends were up to. Asking them all to help with getting Nidhi back. And most of all, the wooing which is to follow.

Please continue zoo .. can't wait for the wooing...

Originally posted by: cool_SK

OK i missed to comment...
me here now...

I loved this chap the most anu...
i love the turn off events that made ashu mad...Definately Rohan and Anji turn the tables on him
the lunch sharing moment and nidhi's ignorance and reluctance was put beautifully...and right when ashu was ahout to serve her, Rohan came on perfect timing...
OK i have to admit i never live ROHAN after he developed feelings for Nidhi...He was indeed a great friend but after that he left, i never wished to see him back in track forward so i was a lil upset with 2nd part
but this part made me love him...Thank God he was up to get Nidhi and ashu close...and was not taking advantage of this chance...
Nidhi's comment as how ashu willn't mind her leaving him was hurtful but ashu totally deserve that...
and the jealousy factor work best on him...
I m glad he accepted his mistakes infront of the family but he deserved a lil more aggression from the family...like how much DB and CV put effort to accept him as a part of thre family just cause for nidhi but he let them down...
but all well end well...now really looking up as how ashu gonna manofy his roothi wifey...

cont soon anu...i adore your writing n long chaps are treat...
hugs
🤗
ana

Originally posted by: Libra

Thanks for the beautifully detailed review Ana.

I am so glad that I could make Rohan's character likable in your eyes again.

I have always loved him and I think that the CV did his character a great injustice by making him fall in love with Nidhi. This way my way of redeeming him, and showing everyone that he was a true friend to Nidhi, unlike Mallika.

And I know that I made Nidhi's family forgive him too easily, but u see, if I didn't do that, how would he get cocky. I want him to learn that everything good comes at a price, and it's not always easy to get what u want.

They say the path to true love is strewn with thorns. Well I want our hero to learn this, that is the only way he will appreciate what he has, instead of taking it for granted all the time.

Will update maybe in the next week to 10days.

TC

Anu

now i hope you willn't say my long comments bored you coz i can't give short comments seriously...😆😆😆
yup, CV's did an injustice to Rohan...
and i hope janab k indeed the family get on with him, Nidhi will compensate for that quick approval 😉and nakoon chanay chabwa day gi ashu ko😆😆😆...how careless he can get
mere perfect hero ka image kharab kar diya us ne...🥱
will wait for ur update...take ur time n don't stress yourself...😊

Originally posted by: cool_SK

now i hope you willn't say my long comments bored you coz i can't give short comments seriously...😆😆😆
yup, CV's did an injustice to Rohan...
and i hope janab k indeed the family get on with him, Nidhi will compensate for that quick approval 😉and nakoon chanay chabwa day gi ashu ko😆😆😆...how careless he can get
mere perfect hero ka image kharab kar diya us ne...🥱
will wait for ur update...take ur time n don't stress yourself...😊

My poor Ashu! Oh how I would love to see him wooing Nidhi back 😳 Personally, Ashu is the only reel character that I have fallen head over heals in love with! I cannot see the injustice the script does to his character! But your FF's Anu Di, I have to admit is a sigh of relief! Thank you for bringing my Ashu back on track 🤗

Originally posted by: pooja.philip3

My poor Ashu! Oh how I would love to see him wooing Nidhi back 😳 Personally, Ashu is the only reel character that I have fallen head over heals in love with! I cannot see the injustice the script does to his character! But your FF's Anu Di, I have to admit is a sigh of relief! Thank you for bringing my Ashu back on track 🤗