Ashutosh ke Nazar se- FF/ Chap 6 Final Chap pg 39

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Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

now this is what is call - back with a BANG!!

Edited by turags - 13 years ago

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fanktlk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Read it... loved it...

It is so complete... I loved Ashu seeing through the scheme and accepting his mistake... Lovely ideas Anu must say!!

Now for the most difficult part wooing Nidhi back... time for some hospital romance... I somehow see Ashu as a teenager now trying to get the attention of his girl!!

Awesome!! 👏

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Anu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: fanktlk
Read it... loved it...

It is so complete... I loved Ashu seeing through the scheme and accepting his mistake... Lovely ideas Anu must say!!

Now for the most difficult part wooing Nidhi back... time for some hospital romance... I somehow see Ashu as a teenager now trying to get the attention of his girl!!

Awesome!! 👏

Thanks Divya, that's why I brought Rohan back. Couldn't have done this without him.

And all three of them, Anji Rangnath and Rohan meant for Ashutosh to see exactly what they were doing and why.

And yes hospital wooing, thosisi home wooing and thodisi outside waali bhi.

Basically next chap mein wooing hi wooing hai.

I hope I can come up with good enough and original ideas.

😳

Edited by Libra - 13 years ago

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fanktlk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Libra

Thanks Divya, that's why I brought back. Couldn't have done this without him.
And all three of them, Anji Rangnath and Rohan meant for Ashutosh to see exactly what they were doing and why.
And yes hospital wooing, thodihi home wooing and thodihi outside waali bhi.
Basically next chap mein wooing hi wooing hai.
I hop I can come up with good enough and original ideas.
😳

Wooing... awww... can't wait!! 😉

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Anu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: turags
now this is what is call - back with a BANG!!

Thanks turags.

So glad you liked it.😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Oh my dear! Glad to see u back... I really didnt mean to scold u, but was just trying to shake u to reality... U just look upon the fact that 'KUCH TOH LOG KAHENGE... LOGON KA KAAM HAI KEHNA... CHODO BEKAAR KI BAATON MEIN KAHIN BEET NA JAAYE RAINA'... I'm sure u must have read SK's interview for IF, that he received hate mails, but towards the end he has an endless list of ooglers n droolers... Not only females, but males too go gaga over him... The sole reason I gave u this example was to see through the point as an end result that, when u have the talent, no power in this world can stop u from achieving what u deserve...

Chalo bohot lecture de diya... Coming to ur update, frankly I had a very bad time reading the earlier 2 updates of this ff... It was like, yaar koi toh rok lo... Bohot ho gaya pashchyataap, baksh do ab bechare ko... Maana ho gayi galti, ab maafi de diyo sarkaar... Nidhi n baaki logon ko jitna gussa karna h karo, jitna bura -bhala kehna h keh do... But plz dono ka patch up kara do nahi toh kam se kam kuch positivity le aao...
And this chap of urs was a bang on! I truely loved it... Now it wud be like 'Kab tak roothegi, cheekhegi, chillayegi... Dil kehta hai ek din haseena maan jayegi'... Initially in the last chap, I was a bit annoyed over Rohan's entry at this point n Anji ka saara kam bigaadna, but, now I am getting its true relevance... Thanx a ton 4 the power pack update... N congrats again on ur come back...

With loads of luv...

Aazeen

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Sujatha di, a big congo to u on becoming IF- Dazzler... Party... Treat... U giving something as a part of treat? Ummm... May be a surprise update??? Doston, wat u people say? Treat from sujatha di? An update- a surprise wala...

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aru29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

it was a superb chapter anu ji...absolutely loved everything in it ❤️

you have so beautifully portrayed ashus realisation of the hurt he has caused nidhi and now am waiting to see him making ammends,

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Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Sujatha di, a big congo to u on becoming IF- Dazzler... Party... Treat... U giving something as a part of treat? Ummm... May be a surprise update??? Doston, wat u people say? Treat from sujatha di? An update- a surprise wala...

thank you Aazeen...didn't even notice it until you told me...so double thank you...

toh treat chahiye!! hhmmm...ok. will try to give an real long chapter in my FF this evening or latest tomorrow morning...i am not promising today evening because my elder kid is not well and am taking care of him in parallel...yeh treat chalega??