What next? FF with the Doc: epilogue page 55

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niniborn2rule

@niniborn2rule

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Posted: 13 years ago

#361

very well written doc...awesome...superb...loved it..

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parmarA

@parmarA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#362

this is the finest chap,really to be mother is the second life of woman,and i remembered my time,i also got dr like Bharti,he was so sweet with me,and reading this chap,i suddenly start little bit crying,thanks for this hillarious chap.

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menaka

@ariyadasa

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#363

👍🏼👏WOW AWESOME

What a brilliant writer

i like to suggest one thing the forum viewers can have there own ktlk now

because we have creative writers too

Don' t stop this pleas write further 👍🏼

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#364

Malvika_rajeev ji, you have tested their love with strong tests and the story is unique and romantic too...Ashu has redeemed very well and made sincere effort to get Nidhi back to normal life...

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ssktlk

@ssktlk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#365

Very nice Doc. Loved how you recapped all their misgivings and aches in the end. Is this the end ? Hope you write more showing some of their family life.

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Doc, this was really the best chap u have written so far... 👏 It was very graciously written... Thank you so much... Infact the summing up of the past things were also very nicely done... Wud be waiting for ur next update...

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VIDYA

@vidyasabde

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#367

you have delivered Nidhi very safely he Doc. i loved it . you write well , i love reading your os. waiting for next update.

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SSA777

@SSA777

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#368

Loved this chapter. Little doc coming into this world. Waiting for the next chapter.

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#369

Brilliant chap Doc...i loved the whole chapter but here are the best moments that really really stayed with me:

His eyes brimmed over as he tried to store the first few visuals of the little creation, of him and Nidhi, a proof of their love and commitment to each other.

Ashutosh winced at this bitter remembrance, and said, "aaj tak uss ke liye sorry kehne ka mauka nahin mila, kya ab keh sakta houn? SORRY NIDHI...for all the hurt I caused you that day... and even after that..."

Armaan cleared his throat, "arre bachche, yeh tera baap bhi rone ke mamle mein kuchh kam nahin... teri ma ne isse kerala main rishta tod diya tha to yeh kitna roya tha..." Ashutosh looked up sharply, and it was Armaan's turn now to bite his lip for garrulousness.

and loved the way the whole family introduced themselves to the new born..and the scene below takes the cake for me:

Ashutosh had a look around and was overwhelmed...the entire KGH was decorated with flowers and balloons and there was an air of general festivity around. Ranganath appeared at his elbow, "Sir, we are a big family, in case you have forgotten? Secondly, if Anjie has become a Mausi, then I am a new Mausa too!!!

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#370

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Thank you for that beautiful and safe delivery...Nidhi behaved with such dignity and Ashutosh handled her with such great care...great job Doc!

Thank you Sujatha...actually it took me quite some time to write this chapter without giving out the medical details, but glad you liked it...