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koyelbasu

@koyelbasu

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Very touching but no more sad story . You write it vey well.

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

it was really sad.but way you write was owsom.daughter's death in mummy's arm was really veryvery sad for a woman.it is a pain for whole life of a mother though she will get another child.maa use kabhi nahi bhool sakti.tears came in my eyes.

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sun29

@sun29

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

rabzyyy😭😭...it was soo heart wrenching ...i actually picturized the whole scene...beautifully potrayed the emotions ...very touching ...

there are so many shades to your writing ..never knew you would tug the pathos soo beautifully..bravooo my dear👏

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: rabzonedge
Mere Mehnat par paani mat pherna..plzz batana Kaisa hai..Main abhi tak Confused hoon...I m going now...See you all Tomorrow..😭

No..yaar..it was a great writing... you have a great gift of effortless narration of every emotion ... 👏
the sad emotion too was so strong that couldnt speak anything...

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kaks0211

@kaks0211

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Writing is good - but sorry I could not read the whole thing - why the necissity of a tragedy...

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karajekar

@karajekar

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

it was superb os rabz

scah mein kitni takleef hoti hogi us maa ko jiske saath aise haadse hot honge

sonali

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Rabzonedge

@rabzonedge

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: debaparna77
😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Aisi sad OS keu re...teddy it's nice ...and i really loved d ending.🤗

Thanks Debu..Actually..life mein sukh dukh toh lagey rehte hain na...

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Rabzonedge

@rabzonedge

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Blushsarika
So touchy and emotional OS Rabzy , your description of emotions are so good , loved this OS .
Good writing.

Thanks sarika...😳

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Debaparna

@debaparna77

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

Thanks Debu..Actually..life mein sukh dukh toh lagey rehte hain na...

Tui bari firechis??

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Rabzonedge

@rabzonedge

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Di aapne likha toh bohot achha hai... The description of emotions was also excellent, but was very sad... Ashni lost their baby khushi... But the end somewhere Satisfied me... But still feeling so numb...

Azeen Yaar..Zindagi Mein Sukh Dukh Lagey Rehte hai...ye bhi ek part hai...Isliye Likha....Thanks..

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