Khoti Milti Khusi-OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: debaparna77

Tui bari firechis??

Aami toh Bas e firi re..Aamar bondhu Baruipur Thake..O k nije bari enechi...Current eseche...Re Ki shanti...😆

Originally posted by: Sonni

Rabz Its a lovely OS.. I liked it its sad but very touching.. maybe something that can happen in KTLK too... loved the end...:) Great writing!!:)

Thanks Sonia...Loved your Reply...🤗

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

Aami toh Bas e firi re..Aamar bondhu Baruipur Thake..O k nije bari enechi...Current eseche...Re Ki shanti...😆

Originally posted by: koyelbasu

Very touching but no more sad story . You write it vey well.

Thanks..But y nt sad story..Isint Sadness a part of life...😲

Originally posted by: sun29

rabzyyy😭😭...it was soo heart wrenching ...i actually picturized the whole scene...beautifully potrayed the emotions ...very touching ...

there are so many shades to your writing ..never knew you would tug the pathos soo beautifully..bravooo my dear👏

Thanks Sun...I am touched...You read it and liked it..More than enuf for me..😳

Originally posted by: debaparna77

Bhalo korechis re...ja abostha aaj 😲 current ache but no cable connection for d past 1/2 hr 😭

Amar bari tata sky tai no probs..Aamar prothom Serial ta dekhe niye chi..Abar 11 ta dekhbo..😉

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

No..yaar..it was a great writing... you have a great gift of effortless narration of every emotion ... 👏
the sad emotion too was so strong that couldnt speak anything...

Ohh thanks mudra.actually i was confsed that OS is not good or sadness is the hindrance..😳

Originally posted by: kaks0211

Writing is good - but sorry I could not read the whole thing - why the necissity of a tragedy...

Thanks kakoli..no necessity of tragedy..life has ups down sadness happiness all combined..so when you write story..you cannot succumb to one genre only..i tried sumthng different thats all...😳

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

it was really sad.but way you write was owsom.daughter's death in mummy's arm was really veryvery sad for a woman.it is a pain for whole life of a mother though she will get another child.maa use kabhi nahi bhool sakti.tears came in my eyes.

Thanks Alka..Yup while writing i too had tears in my eyes...😳