new shayari @ pg 76- by me - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Mehek25

@Rabzonedge...


Wow that was simply beautiful...
Loved every word of it...
Pls continue...Would love to read more of ur lovely works...

Thanks Mehek..Sure dear...I will write more...Likhne ke keede ne phir se kaat liya hai mujhe..bas shayari sujh rahi hai Din Raat...😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Divya, am posting this on your thread because you made me want to attempt this...please forgive me for any grammatical or other errors...please be my Hindi teacher and give me an F if it is very bad!

Meri Nidhi

Titli banke mere jeevan mei aayi

Diya banke mere dil mei roshni layi

Kushiyan banke meri jeevan ko mehkayi

Mamta banke mere bhook pyas mitayi!

Pyaar ke saawan mujhpe barsaayi

Saans banker mere praan me samayi

Pathar ko pighlakar insaan banayi

Bas ab kabhi na ho mujhse parayi


Ohh GODD Sujhatha..its too good ...no grammatical mistake..plzz continue writing in hindi...I will be your hindi teacher..plzz be my english teacher...😆...just kidding...i am always there yaar...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

@Rabzy.. man gaye... what awesome lines yaar... super duper awesome.. loved it.. 👏




Aankh Bhari hui hai...Dil bhi bezaar hai

Khush hoon phir bhi...

gudiya ki Nayi duniya Ab se Gulzaar hai...



@busy.. super lines .. about zindagi.. 👏 loved it..

Thankoo sherni..❤️..without your comment..Thread was looking 'soona soona'😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Hey i m back with new shayari...hope u all will like it...😊

kuch mahine sath chal kar khushi de gaye,
ek din achanak hath chod kar gum de gaye,
palatkar dekha muskurahaat bhari nazron se kuch youn,
ki vapas zindagi me aane ki ummed de gaye.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

BB's POV-

Ek Sannata tha

Andhera tha

Charon aur ghiri deewaar thi..

Ghutan thi

Tinko tinko mein Bikhra

mera ghonsla tha..


meri pehchaan ghum thi

Mere armaan khoye they

khud se anjaan tha main

mere saare sapne bilakh bilakh

kar roye they


Beti thi..jise vida na kar paaya

beta tha jisse chodh kar chala aaya

doobti naav ka patwaar tham liya tha

apne dono aankhon ko maine kitna sataya


Aaj jab lautha hoon..

mood ke dekhta hoon..

Kuch andar se saalta hai..

koi hai mere andar jo

mujhe Dhikkarta hai..

Kayar ban ke gaya tha...

Kyaa ban ke waapis aaya hoon..


Andhere galiyon me

ab Roshni Hai halki halki..

Beti ki beti mili mujhe

usme beti hai jhalki...


aaj tak kisi se keh nahi paya...

Main kitna Tanha tha..

main kitna tanha tha...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
@ divya 👏 really nice..
❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Wow. this is marvellous .. 👏 Totally sums up BBs feelings perfectly..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: busybee..

Hey i m back with new shayari...hope u all will like it...😊

kuch mahine sath chal kar khushi de gaye,
ek din achanak hath chod kar gum de gaye,
palatkar dekha muskurahaat bhari nazron se kuch youn,
ki vapas zindagi me aane ki ummed de gaye.

Wow Bhavita..too good...Loved it...👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: busybee..

@ divya 👏 really nice..

❤️

Thanks Bhavita...😳🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

Wow Bhavita..too good...Loved it...👏

Thank u so much divya😊😳😳😳

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