SS Extended: Desires of Imperfection (Part 2:Pg 4) - Page 2

Originally posted by: nsylesh

Great FF Sharmishtha 👏

I would not have believed that a 24 year old confident, self sufficient woman like Nidhi would not consider herself to be somebody's equal. Just goes to show that every person, no matter how successful, can also be susceptible to self doubts.

I love Ashutosh's explanation about Gulab ka phool. Beautiful.

Originally posted by: Binat

Sharmistha - as always love what you write. And like I've said before the way you write is so visual I can see this all happen😛

So how about developing on this? I can almost see Nidhi arrive at Ashu's cabin with a rose the next morning😉

Keep writing.

Originally posted by: deepiika

wonderful SS..loved the way Ashutosh conveyed to Nidhi that she is the only one for him...😳

Originally posted by: aarch

"Aur ek baat jaan lo Nidhi," he spoke again in a low, heavy, intimate voice, "Feelings transferrable nahin hoti hain. Agar mujhe gulaab ke phool mein khoobsoorti nazar aane lagi hai, to iska ye matlab nahin hai ki gende mein bhi nazar aayegi. Ye jaante hue bhi ki gulaab mein kaante hote hain. Sawaal sirf itna hai ki kya woh gulaab mere garden mein khil sakega, ya wahan ki hawa use raas nahin aayegi aur woh murjha jayega. Agar nahin khil sakega, to woh jahan khil sakta hai use wahi rahna chahiye. Lekin main apne garden mein gende ke phool nahin laga sakta. Door se gulaab ko dekh kar khush rah sakta hoon."

What an example... very well written as usual..👏. You have presented AshNi story in so many different angles. wow.. is the only word..

Thanks once again...

So good to have u come back n write a part to aashni story...i associate to Aahu n Nidhi now only thru your work...

Originally posted by: Candy_js

mish, wonderful writing again wt a different view...do continue yar...i read all ur ff in very recently. , i coulnot wait so in one sitting i finished it off... i would be waiting for your updates... tis time write a full fledged ff...

Originally posted by: ruchshah

So good to have u come back n write a part to aashni story...i associate to Aahu n Nidhi now only thru your work...

N like many of ur readers...me too would wish that u please continue on this one...or a new story...pretty please😃

Sorry for a late reply...was held up in work n all...

i just cant dreaming about your work on this further😉

thank u so very much to send me a PM on this one...felt priveleged!!!