comments part 1
Mish seriously i don't know how to start...
I have been reading your work for some time now but haaaila this part is for me the bestest ever... a roller coaster from a to z...
For the mb craze min ... yaar i would see MB inside out in that
So let's get to business
In a way the start is logical, be in Nidhi ya zoya both would have gone for that approach as well, get buried in work as in a way work is the only link that she can really be with him
Baba's reaction reminded me of that scene in Dk when he comes and asks zoya y she is so quiet and she comes up with something to divert him...
He smiled as he saw that her mouth was slightly open. He had seen her sleep like that before. But when he noticed her face, he was shocked at the contrast it presented from the last time.
Awww the first of many melting moments in the part. This seems to be so private a moment... he is relishing her sight, yet the changes are visible as he knows her and he suffers at the sight of her in such a state.
It had been so long since he had said that to her.
Longing and doubt so meaningful...
Ashutosh felt a pain in his heart. Why was she waiting for his permission?
Goood MB inside out ... reminds me of the scene when Nids come to KGH to sign papers after he sacked her... how in his office he followed her every moment with eyes so expressive...
He is getting his wish but at what cost... the dooriyan he wanted is now eating up his being
That scene is very good... you have to love how he reads her every mood and reactions and how seeing her like that is causing him pain
Where did she get her humour back from? She had surprised herself. Was it because he was there? And after so long they were talking, not like the boss and the intern, but like two people who cared for each other.
You can almost visualise that... excuse the cheesy imagery but its like the withered flower coming back to life. As if in the confine of his office they can be themselves ... no log no mallu but to normal beings.
Her condition had already told him that something was bothering her. He let go of his forced sense of proprietary and rushed towards her. He held her by her arms
As i said before... they can be themselves he no longer has to hide his real feelings and his real feelings come clear...
Ye akelepan ki baatein tumhare munh se achchhi nahin lagti Nidhi.
Killer sentence... to me it shows his fear... in a way his worse nightmare starting to unfold...the bubbly girl closing up...
She had the charm and freshness that could lighten up even his dark life. What complication crept into her life to have made her so gloomy and lifeless. Unless it was him?
Had he made a mistake by not talking to her? He had to ask now and he did that point blank, "Nidhi. Kya tumhari pareshaani main hoon?"
God... this is yet another brilliant 1... seeing and then reflecting his inner doubt... you have to give your ashu credit... he has the guts to voice it out
😛 more to follow
sharifa
