*Smthin_Clld_Luv*Nov3_Updt_p146*Jaane Kya Baat Hui - Page 88

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

awesome .

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

I enjoyed Ashu-Anjie dynamics...go ahead and write what you have planned...loved the little games Ashni played with each other😊

Originally posted by: ssktlk

wow what a chapter. Though you haven't given away anything, but it still is so passionate, so restless, their feelings, their unsaid words, its brilliant how you read into their minds. Btw, what did Nidhi see? 😉. Hope we get to see the next chapter before the weekend.

Originally posted by: ZedZee92

Achiever with the update of every chapter you leave me speachless😃

ur writing style is just fantastic and the way you let the story develop and unfold

is just beautiful.😳

the best part of ur FF is that you dont rush through it ...and give minute details to every scene😳

making readers like me get addicted to this FF👏

--aww.. u r one avid reader and i m so glad to have u as reader of my FF.. thnk u so much for tht.. the enthusiasm and intrst tht u show for every word tht i put makes my spirits go up and encourage me to come up with something interesting every time.. i cant b enuf thnkful with words for tht..

Now coming to the chapter... Phewww...it was amaziiingg👏

i just love the manner in which ashu teases nidhi...its 2 cute😳

--yeah its best part of thr r'ship their teasing.. everytime nidhi blushes a wide smile spreads on my lips..!😆 Ashu ka pata nahi kya hota hoga!😆😆😆

nway gr8 going

and...i so wanna give you a JHAPPI🤗 for this awsmm update😃

---aww.. thnk u soo soo much..🤗..i sincerely believe i wudnt have been able to deliver without readers and reviewers like u..

thanx a lot and plzz update soon😃

--oh.. i have still jst started.. re-formulating the story to put it in more interesting and exciting way.. i have to work on few upcoming chapters to deliver on wat i promised.. warna joote padenge..😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Anjani9

When they started the picnic, I thought Ashu will not be comfortable with her friends but now Nidhi is not comfortable with her friends 😉

---😆true very true... her friends bring different flavors.. i wud have liked to add few more bits.. bt thn it wud stretch this picnic part.. so may b i will use it in some later chapters..😳

You will never disappoint us with your update...it is very chweet...

--oh thnk u..😳

Please continue with your own pace, not required to speed up the story...

--yes.. bt i think ur suggestion of seperation s very essential for the story.. and for tht i need to pace up the story.. bt i will b experimenting.. bt it will not affect the story..😳

Rohan in this story does not have enought strength to seperate them...atleast it appears that way...

--yes.. Rohan cant... bt our brain is wierd.. v r grtest enemies of ourselves.. thrs no need for anybody else..😆

What are your plans for your future track? This picnic has brought them closer emotionally...now Nidhi will be confident that society will accept them and Ashu can turn any situation into a favourable one..

--yes... its confidence building trip.. told u its gonna b most successful trip for thm.. it has brot thm closer in many ways.. and will b eye opening for quite a few pppl in their lives..😛.. the major twist of seperation is interesting.. bt u wudnt b able to guess until tht happens coz it has a surprise element..😳 and the biggest thing is tht u will c nidhi transformed into a real woman .. and i wud like to ensue a hospital drama from thr on.. exploring their interactions in hospital.. lets c if i can reach thr..😆... bt neither thr reconcilation nor their seperation is gonna b typical.. the characters will not behave typically..😳 i will c if i can present tht seperation plot differently.. bt its too long way to go..

Originally posted by: Pooja_0910

Hi achiever..
The chapter was fantastic...In the starting of the chapter the conversation between Anji-Ashu was too awkward for Ashu as he is not that much open in such thing to discuss with others and here she was Anji who is girl and best friend of his girlfriend...Btw what had happened to Anji?she is getting more n more mischief from first day of picnic...

--Agree tht was so awkward for Ashu.. i luv wen Angie pulls his legs..😆 Anji ko kuch nahi hua.. she is jst being herself.. the ring leader.. i wanna c how Ashu wud react wen he learns tht against his mission, Angie had planned all this mischief and thn had even offered him to help..😆

I love the scene where Ashu wait for all ''ladies'' to go outside so that he can change his cloths and Nidhi teased him "thts such a poor excuse my
shy why gentleman!"
I love their teasing it always been cute sweet naughty...

--thts the best part of their r'ship..

Me also excited about short curt thing which Ashu told Nidhi as much as Nidhi is hehe...

---hmmm...

Thank you so much for beautiful chapter...I wish this ff would never end...

--oh.. thnk u so much.. i have already an end in mind.. which ends, at least now, with their SR.. bt i dont know how much more its gonna take to reach thr.. before u all get bored out!😆😆😆