*Smthin_Clld_Luv*Nov3_Updt_p146*Jaane Kya Baat Hui - Page 60

Originally posted by: ssktlk

Great update, nice to see their emotions, ashu's pining and also loved how when they spoke after a month, it was so natural like they never parted. Will they ever talk about it? So ashu is scared to touch Nidhi now, that means few romantic moments?😭. The feelings are always so gradual and slow in your story, love it. Can't wait for the next one, each update of yours makes me wait for the next one eagerly.

yeah.. i luv thr natural chemistry.. its the thing tht brot thm together and it will keep bringing thm together.. afterall heart has no logic or ego!😳

Originally posted by: Deepikikamandal

Reading it is even so peaceful...lovely yaar...you play with emotions beautifully...and its very very true...the feeling of being in love and to be in love is so incredible...😊😊

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Great...enjoyed it...you are bringing the age gap with the way they behave rather than silly issues...may be Ashu should repent more for what he has done...read it many times and it is very good..thank you

yes.. the age gap is essentially the way thy behave and take life rather thn gifting bottles of hair dyes! The sheer contrast of how thy interact with their friends shows their level of maturity and outlook on life! 😳 And Ashutosh has tht insight to compare and c and learn! It gives thr r'ship much needed stability and its wats attracts Nidhi to him.. for her, he is jst so perfect! Bt well tht needs to b questioned b4 thy take those marital vows.. 😃..

Originally posted by: priyeah1

Lovely again! The three musketeers remind me of my college days where we did some pretty crazy stuff and remained friends for life!! I loved this story better than the serial. Its so much fun to read and the passionate parts are to die for!!

Good job, mate!!

yeah.. even thy reminded me of my college days.. wish i cud incorporate more of their thing and still keep Ashu-Nidhi story intersting.. i will surely try and work on it!

Brilliant update Achiever, after reading earlier ch. , I was excited and desperately waiting to read how will Ashu punch Rohan but Ranga ki call ne toh sab chaupat kar diya.
They have not talked for whole one month - just because of guilt. Hey bhagwaan , chalo they realised that both of them can't live without each other , like this Nidhi fulfilled her baba' wish of giving there relation deep thinking , now she can clearly tell him Ashu is her right choice.
Liked there phone convo , both of them were very sweet.
I want Nidhi to discuss about how she felt when he rejected her. That would be interesting.
Waiting for the next update.
Continue soon.

Originally posted by: Blushsarika

Brilliant update Achiever, after reading earlier ch. , I was excited and desperately waiting to read how will Ashu punch Rohan but Ranga ki call ne toh sab chaupat kar diya.

--😆u cant expect Dr. Ashutosh to behave so roughly.. tho i was very much tempted to make it happen..😆.. jst to show Nidhi how protective and possesive Ashu is bt it wud've taken story to a different way and it wud've been very cliched.. and a rough Ashu wudnt go with my characterization.. tho he wishes out of jealousy.. bt he cant possibly do it unless situation demands.. as for the strength of Ashu.. Nidhi will soon come to know how strong Ashu is.. 😆

They have not talked for whole one month - just because of guilt. Hey bhagwaan , chalo they realised that both of them can't live without each other , like this Nidhi fulfilled her baba' wish of giving there relation deep thinking , now she can clearly tell him Ashu is her right choice.

--Well.. well.. u surely seem to b thinking high and far in terms of my story.. 😆.. Good review like urs prompt me to think differently.. 😳.. and its a gud thng it will make it a more interesting read! I still think thr relation has lots of test to give!😃

Liked there phone convo , both of them were very sweet.

I want Nidhi to discuss about how she felt when he rejected her. That would be interesting.

--Yes.. she needs to tell him exactly how she felt bt tho she can b bold bt she is still shy in such matters.. so thrs the problem.. bt wud he understand it by himself.. well.. how they converse and how much thy open up to each other will tell tht! and depending on tht i will need to re-plot some of my plots!😆

Waiting for the next update.

Continue soon.

thnks a lot for the pm acheiver,i have been d most unscrupulous reader of ur FF who has read but cudnt comment!!😕sorry yaar!😳

but first wen i read d new update i was like,bingo,dis tym evm i m bringing armaan on board!😉😆


i m compiling my comments from past 3 parts or so..!

i shud strt from d part before d convention,d most awaited baba n ashu convo,hmm dese two men i tell u,everytime each try to outsmart the other both in their own terms,protecting,caring,papmpering n being posessive!but its always a treat to read abt dese two,its like u r reading a game btwn 2 kasparovs!!😆


as i have told u d way dese 2 men in nidhi s life play,i cant help but say wow!!

u write dat part really beautifully,n so have u sketched out these characters..brilliant

i luvd evribit of it,as i say,its lyk dese men playing chess,sitting across each other!!!!

u lace it wid ur eternal hitchcock style,wat u hidin ur sleeve abt d relation ashu shares wid nidhi,i mean how u reveal it!i m curious!

n d next two chap were like,u tuk it to such a high,it was lyk an epitome,n den d last one was a freefall from dat point..

hmm u r a master storyteller..

n bud,rohan??!!!😆

n dose 2 exclamation marks u have put afta mallikas words are,an indication of sum brewing trouble,its like dat charcoal dat apparently luks lyk covered wid ashes but..

d last part of hum-tum was lyk d initial chap of jaane kya baat hui..hmm afta a overall high,it was really peaceful..sailing like a feather..

kudos to the way u sketch characters..

Hello Acheiver,

Originally posted by: heydoc27

thnks a lot for the pm acheiver,i have been d most unscrupulous reader of ur FF who has read but cudnt comment!!😕sorry yaar!😳

but first wen i read d new update i was like,bingo,dis tym evm i m bringing armaan on board!😉😆


i m compiling my comments from past 3 parts or so..!

i shud strt from d part before d convention,d most awaited baba n ashu convo,hmm dese two men i tell u,everytime each try to outsmart the other both in their own terms,protecting,caring,papmpering n being posessive!but its always a treat to read abt dese two,its like u r reading a game btwn 2 kasparovs!!😆


as i have told u d way dese 2 men in nidhi s life play,i cant help but say wow!!

u write dat part really beautifully,n so have u sketched out these characters..brilliant

i luvd evribit of it,as i say,its lyk dese men playing chess,sitting across each other!!!!

u lace it wid ur eternal hitchcock style,wat u hidin ur sleeve abt d relation ashu shares wid nidhi,i mean how u reveal it!i m curious!

n d next two chap were like,u tuk it to such a high,it was lyk an epitome,n den d last one was a freefall from dat point..

hmm u r a master storyteller..

n bud,rohan??!!!😆

n dose 2 exclamation marks u have put afta mallikas words are,an indication of sum brewing trouble,its like dat charcoal dat apparently luks lyk covered wid ashes but..

d last part of hum-tum was lyk d initial chap of jaane kya baat hui..hmm afta a overall high,it was really peaceful..sailing like a feather..

kudos to the way u sketch characters..