Writing on Dev's absence in Cafe

Watching the last few episodes, (even though I thought were decently done as compared to the children's drama), I am wondering about the writing process.

Don't they talk about an idea? Think about it critically? Don't they point out loopholes in the plot to each other?

When I write a story, after writing, I let it be for a few hours. Then when I revisit it, I myself can find loopholes, typos and other problems that I hadn't seen before. Even more if I have someone else read it. That is how you fine-tune your writing. Don't these writers do that?

I am particularly upset about Sonakshi being stood up at the Cafe the second time this season. The second time she was put below his employees. But at least the first time, I could see, he left his phone in his cabin and things went from there. ONE thing happened and a misunderstanding ensued.

But this time around, it was a lot more manufactured. It is just way too many things..

He called, she didn't pick up, because the waiter took her phone. Really. Okay. Let's accept that happened.

Dev could have texted her, or left a voice message.

He could have stopped by the Cafe since it was so close to his office, 5 mins he said, while the police station was half hour away. Ms.Serendipity could have waited a little longer in the police station, what's the big deal in that.

He could have called his high-level contacts in the police, as he did for Ayush, and asked them to interfere here.

He could have called any of his employees or assistant or his lawyers to deal with the cops. No need to go himself.

His lawyer was present in the police station, still don't see Dev's need there.

On his way back,, Sona is trying to call him. But his phone went dead. How the head of an InfoTech company doesn't have a power bank, I don't know. Again and again, his phone quits on him. 🤷‍♀️

But when he gets home, with his so-called dead phone, it is charged again and receiving messages in front of Sona, which coincidentally are from Sanjana.

Like, come on, writers!!!

This was very artificially manufactured to make Dev look bad and Sona feel more hurt.

If Sanjana had been in an accident with the company car, I can count that as an emergency. This wasn't. At least give Dev a plausible excuse for not showing up at the Cafe.

There was no need for him to go to Sanjana at all

That woman drove without driving license it is an offense , could have just send a lawyer now that he went himself , it gives her more chance infatuate on him

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Common why don’t buy a power bank

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Even if Sanjana meet with accident also sending ambulance will be enough and meet hospital procedures on company behalf !

What foolishness they are writing ...

Wait for Monday more comedy is going to roll out

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Voice message or type message do sone thing like that!

He could have gone to Sona , that Sanjana deserved to wait at police station for a while 😁

Then all these illogical tracks are common , more or less all ITV characters behave almost same way .

No logic can be applicable to these shows .so looking at purely entertainment reason , kind of time pass.

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We really can’t expect these shows to be correct in any way technically, emotionally or any message giving, it is all for entertainment purpose but comparing to few others this is still a way better.

Still buy “ power bank”, or voice message or type ...

You are right 😂

They are just making up completely illogical scenarios and piling them on top of each other.

They must be smoking something strong, to think they will garner TRPs this way!

There is no pure evil characters , that is an attraction for TRP...I have a feeling they are going to wind up the show with in two months .

Unless take a leap as some body mentioned come out with the children’s story

Soha, Ayush & Golu grown up there is not much can be done with Dev & Sona story line , 😁

We will never know either !

I am for sure now that writers are planning to make Sona jealous so that Dev Sona get close. I mean I don't need that Miss Serendipity in between Devakshi. Dev is such a big entrepreneur and his personal professional life everyone will know. Atleast the fact that he is married people wil be knowing. Didn't she do any research before being a part of the company.

I mean like I search for a job I checked everything and in everything my boss's and his wife's picture was also there on the site and all. Considering how Dev is so close to his children atleast he must have kept it somewhere in the website.

I hope that Dev just to get Sona's attention doesn't play with this serendipity. Please 🥺🥺 I remember a similar track in YRKKH (old) where Naitik didn't tell his employee that he is married despite knowing she likes him. So please.

Originally posted by: Rosh4rose

There is no pure evil characters , that is an attraction for TRP...I have a feeling they are going to wind up the show with in two months .

Unless take a leap as some body mentioned come out with the children’s story

Soha, Ayush & Golu grown up there is not much can be done with Dev & Sona story line , 😁

We will never know either !

Yeah even I feel that they are going to wind up in 2-3 months. 😭😭 I can never understand what Sony wants.

The show is supposed to end by end of october going by all online media guys.

Can't agree more to all of your rants particularly the illigical stuffs happening around Devakshi; like the starter of this post Newbiewriter30 pointed out precisely, will the writing team not verify the drafts of the scenarios they are planning by editing rewriting and correlating with the previous scenes and previous seasons to give some semblance of logic

Seriously, WTH are these writers smoking like some one pointed out during the start, they could have taken inspiration from the various Fanfictions written so beautifully here. I myself have read many of them. It's totally understandable that am not seeing any FFs or OS now during the present season 😕

Viji

At least let the super rich characters have power bank , type messages 😂😂let them send cars for proper servicing

A lot of serials cars keep breaking down

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A different world

Originally posted by: vijisridhar

The show is supposed to end by end of october going by all online media guys.

Can't agree more to all of your rants particularly the illigical stuffs happening around Devakshi; like the starter of this post Newbiewriter30 pointed out precisely, will the writing team not verify the drafts of the scenarios they are planning by editing rewriting and correlating with the previous scenes and previous seasons to give some semblance of logic

Seriously, WTH are these writers smoking like some one pointed out during the start, they could have taken inspiration from the various Fanfictions written so beautifully here. I myself have read many of them. It's totally understandable that am not seeing any FFs or OS now during the present season 😕

Viji

Yes you are absolutely right. Writers have made a mishap of the show and seriously I never imagined it to go like this. The only saving part was Devakshi but now I feel by getting that woman in between they are crushing our hopes too. I think the writers need to consult FF writers. Come on their story has more grip than what the serial writers show.

It's like these writers get up in the morning and think of a plot write it down and directors execute it. Like no one even gives a check.

Originally posted by: karuna_kini

Yeah even I feel that they are going to wind up in 2-3 months. 😭😭 I can never understand what Sony wants.

Feel bad for the actors 😕