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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey all!!!!!!! Hope you remember me...its been a long time since I have updated something here, so here I'm with my new Short Story on Devakshi...ABASHED

Prologue

Vansh Goenka was a man minus principles...his only aim was to become the most successful businessman of the country...emotions, ethics, relationships didn't matter to him anymore...his hunger to earn had become a thorn in the life of his own daughter Sonakshi Goenka...

She lost her mother at a tender age of 2...reason, her father didn't have time to take his ailing wife to a doctor...her mother Asha had been down with fever for quite some days now...she kept nagging her husband to get her check up done from a good physician, but alas he was too busy making money...she passed away leaving a bitterly sobbing Sonakshi behind...

Rajat Sharma had been working as a driver for Vansh for the past 10 years, since the time he started his small start-up firm...he had tried his best to be the most loyal employee of his master...Vansh on the other hand had used him for his evil intentions...he got Rajat trapped in a scam committed by him...as a result Rajat had to spend the rest of his life in prison, frustrated with the allegations he had to face, he ended up giving his life by hanging himself in his own cell...

Rekha, wife of Rajat, who was childless had no one she could turn to for help...as a result she came over to Vansh seeking help...she was unaware of the fact that Vansh had got Rajat trapped for his deeds...the loyalist that Rajat was, he never revealed this secret to Rekha ...Vansh who wished to maintain his good-human image, feigned helping Rosy by offering her a job...the job of being a Nanny to little Sonakshi...

Will Rekha ever realize the evil deeds of Vansh?...will Sonakshi end up getting entangled in her father's mean world?...will Vansh ever realize his folly?...stay tuned to find out...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice story 👍🏼waiting for next update
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its Awesome dear waiting for next thank u so much for pm would love to read
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very interesting concept di! Looking forward to it! But where is Dev?Please update asap!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its so good to see you here. Missed your stories and romantic OS.

Nice start to the story. First i thought Dev is Rajat and Rekha's son. But they were childless. Lets see how does Dev fits in.

Do update soon.


Edited by cscs - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh...my seems like a dark SS, good b'coz I love them. When are you posting 1st chapter,
Waiting eagerly.
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Egarly waiting for d next chapter 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi
Its so interesting - pls post the first chapter soon!

Cheers
Asha

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations on your SS

The Prologue is Captivating and seems like it will a story of suspense and perhaps a dark one too
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start.
Waiting for the chapter.

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