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Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: mehraan
Sorry dear...Had to commnt here but did it on ur old one!!😆
Lovely OS dear...!Devakshi wud be the end of me...Each n every time i fall in luv with them...Thanx for writing it so beautifully...i wish v get 2 see similar happening in our show...!

It's alright Di and thanks for commenting again and I am glad that you liked it

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: ZoyaZenin
It was really a lovely update, especially the patch up part. loved it to the core. i wish we could have such scenes for devakshi onscreen, yet hoping for the best in season 2. well i admire ur writing skill it was an awesome one, do send me PM when u write any other one i would love to read it.

Aww thank you so much for such a sweet comment dear

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Uttara1112

@Uttara1112

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Well, my views don't always run parallel to yours😊, but end of day, I think we both agree that the reason why there is so much discussion about this show is that the leads have played their parts so well and the initial characterization was done so beautifully that we are addicted to these two. And if we don't get what we want on the show, thank god for fanfic writers like you who make our dreams come true.

By the way, I objected vociferously for the bhajiwala comment. Sorry but I really feel it is unnecessary for the writers to bring in such dialogues that don't sound nice out of a self made woman's mouth. After she taught her child that no job is small or big. That's the kind of message we want this show to give, in my view, that all jobs shld get respect. Again, let me not get into that on this thread and again, really appreciate you and all other fanfic writers too putting in so much time and emotion and effort in these stories when you get nothing out of it.

Actually in your story you brought out the preleap Sona that I love. She was a strong woman, cheerful, happy to see things in only the positive way but when she felt that she was wrong, she never hesitated to really feel bad about it. That was very nicely presented in your story without making Sona seem like she is losing face anywhere.

Are you planning on writing a part 2 to this story? Wud love to read.

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: 27JAAN
Loved it dear...
Thank you

Originally posted by: CUTE_K2
Lovely os. I just loved it

Thank You so much for commenting

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Muskan2001
Hey!
Loved your OS...😃
The way you expressed the different emotions is truly remarkable...I really enjoyed reading it!
Your Fanfics are always filled with DevAkshi Magic... can't wait to read more!😃

Aww thank you so much for such a sweet comment dear I am really overwhelmed with the response

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Nightingale_09
Wow very beautiful os,loved possessive Dev wish we could see such wonderful scenes in the show. Ishwari being good is nice to read but sorry can't tolerate her even when she is good or bad for me she feels too artificial ,in the show I mean. Dev's surprise for Sonakshi was really good felt like I was watching that on the show. If our CV's had uesd the leads chemistry other then trying to teach us mathematics they would have got distinction in both I guess. Enjoyed reading your os thanks for the link do keep writing more and don't forget to PM me.

Hahaha what you said about Ishwari is damn true and yes I wish the makers should have used the chemistry of the leads and thanks for the comment dear

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Shaavi
Amazing OS. 👏 👏 . Beautifully written. ⭐️

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy
Nicely written
Liked it

Thanks Shaavi and Gayu Di I am glad that you liked it 😃

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: vinoguna

how much we miss their cute fights...really can imagine them in this OS...

His grin slowly faded away as he felt something warm on his chest.He looked down to find out that our little guy there had decided to empty his bursting bladder on him making it clear that he will definitely grow up to become a Mamma's boy

<font size="2">hahaha... Shubh is definitelymamma's boy... he is Shaheer's... opps... Dev's look alike na...😉(cant stay away from Eri... opps... Sona)</font>

"You don't worry BigCha,Golu kisi bhi boy ko apni Sister ke paas nahi aane dega,I will protect her like a Seal"Golu said throwing a punch in the air
"Seal nahi champ it's shield"Dev laughed and ruffled Golu's hairs

really love this one - love the fact you included BigCha & Golu bond here... their bond is a bliss...

and then comes the best part!! Our Dev Babu is the king of surprises!! and our cute Sona... what can we say... she is the one who drives him & his plans na...

"Don't underestimate your husband dear"he said with a wink

...but that can wait till we return home.Don't you think we have something more important to do right now"he said with a mischievous smile as he captured her lips again in another kiss.

Ufff...!! love the emotions that you have captured on this whole OS...
Totally bliss & totally Devakshi!!

Great writing... keep going...👍🏼🤗

Wow loved your comment so much dear keep motivating me like this and yeah Golu is a sweetheart and so is our Dev Babu who loves his wife to the moon and back

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: mbbsrocks
I loved it...Serial me to aise romantic scenes nahi mile,atleast got to read here
Thanks dear🤗
Devakshi are❤️

Thank you so much for your comment dear yeah serial me to Hume body double wala romance mil raha hai and yeah Devakshi is love

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Ritzzee23

@Ritzzee23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

It's sooo beeaautiful really..hats off to your imagination..the feel of krpkab 1 is all there in your writing.you should have been the writer of krpkab .I swear it would have been a trp topper.. this epi would have been a super hit epi..The things people want to see between devakshi is portrayed beautifully.Their chemistry,romance is beautiful.thank you soo much for forwarding me your piece.I would love to read your other works.Do keep writing...Thank you 😛

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