Devakshi OS-Forever yours,Mrs.Dixit

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So,I am here again with an OS Lol you all must be thinking ki kaisi besharm ladki hai bolti hai forum chhod diya par phir ajaati hai but kya karu I am aadat se majboor, mere dimaag me koi plot aata hai to I pen it down for sure.The Credit for the title goes to dreamy.tiara and the beautiful banner is made by binuuu



Devakshi OS-Forever Yours,Mrs.Dixit

It was breakfast time and the Dixit household was witnessing yet another fight between Dev and Sonakshi

"Dekhiye Dev,I don't want to talk about this anymore.You SLEPT throughout a Satyajeet Ray masterpiece,when I had requested you to watch the whole movie with me last night.Just admit that you are wrong.That's all I am asking"said a very upset Sona

Dev looked at her incredulously "Admit? Mistake"Sona it wasn't a mistake.I did not do it intensionally.I really tried to stay awake but the movie was not of my taste and therefore I fell asleep" Dev tried to reason with his hyper wife while carrying baby Shubh in his arms who had an amused expression watching his parents fight on such a silly topic

"You could not even do this much for me and you claim that you love me" said Sonakshi

"You are making a mountain out of a molehill and being unreasonable Sona. Don't you think that you have become a bit cranky lately?Shubh please make you mother understand that she is wrong"said Dev while he cooed Shubh grinning ear to ear

His grin slowly faded away as he felt something warm on his chest.He looked down to find out that our little guy there had decided to empty his bursting bladder on him making it clear that he will definitely grow up to become a Mamma's boy

"See my baby also knows who's always right"said Sonakshi proudly and the whole family burst out laughing

Dev was about to retort when Ishwari from her position in the Kitchen spoke sternly"Bass!Bahot hua.Chalo abhi tum dono naashta kar lo.Ab is baare me koi behas nahi hogi"(Enough!Now you two have your breakfast and no one will argue about this topic anymore)

Pouting Sona took Shubh in her arms marched away from Dev to change the baby's diaper while he rolled his eyes and pinched the bridge of his nose and went to change his T-shirt

When Ishwari came into the dining hall,she found Dev sitting at his usual place and Sonakshi was arranging the dishes on the table.Although both of them were still scowling at each other,now it was less severe.
Stubborn kids...now she should get into some action,She thought

Umm...Dev,wo kal tujhe office ke kaam se kahi bahar Jana hai Na?(You are going out of station tomorrow for some office work.Isn't it?) Inquired Ishwari while chewing her food

"Han Ma,Kal mujhe Mumbai jaana hai.Bahot badi deal hai.Do-Chaar din me wapas ajaunga."

"Mai soch rahi thi kyu Na tu Sonakshi ko bhi apne Saath le jaye? Bechari jab se yahan wapas aai hai hum sab ka khayal rakhne me hi lagi rahti hai"suggested Ishwari

Par Ma,mai waha office ke kaam se ja raha hun.Wo waha kya karegi? Reasoned Dev

"Mai kuch nahi janti.Tu use apne Saath le jayega ye baat pakki ho gai.Waise bhi Shubh ke aane ke baad to use bilkul bhi araam nahi milta.Is tarah wo thoda ghoom phir legi aur kuch din tak araam bhi mil jayega"Ishwari gave her verdict thinking that some alone time will definitely do them some good

Dev agreed having no other option and went up to freshen up and leave for office.Sonakshi followed him to their room

INSIDE THE ROOM

She entered the room and found her handsome husband standing in front of the mirror in his wet look

"Pack your bags quickly,we need to leave tomorrow around 9 AM in the morning "Dev said while buttoning up his shirt,looking at Sonakshi's reflection through the mirror

"You don't want to do it,right?She asked in a low voice

"Look Sonakshi,you know I can't deny Ma's order so even though I am not willing to take you along with me,but I will have to"he said putting on his coat and exited their room

Sonakshi looked at his retreating back and sighed,aware that she had messed up it all badly.She opened her suitcase and packed some of her favourite clothes to take with her

NEXT DAY

It was the time to leave and Dev was busy instructing Golu on how to keep all the boys away from Suhana,specially that Rahul who would come to their house on alternate days

"You don't worry BigCha,Golu kisi bhi boy ko apni Sister ke paas nahi aane dega,I will protect her like a Seal"Golu said throwing a punch in the air

"Seal nahi champ it's shield"Dev laughed and ruffled Golu's hairs

Both Dev and Sonakshi kissed all the children one by one and everyone could see the reluctancy in Sonakshi's eyes who was worried about her children

"Tu chinta mat kar Sona,hum sab hai Na.Hum sab milke Suhana aur Shubh ka acche se khayaal rakhenge"Elena said reassuring her sister

They reached the Hotel 'The Taj Mahal Palace' in afternoon.Dressed in a white shirt,jeans and dark glasses,Dev gave tough competition to the Bollywood actors and Sonakshi who was wearing a sea green Anarkali suit,looked equally gorgeous.She was flattered by the complements showered on them by the hotel staff.

Once the check in procedures were completed,they were shown their room.Before entering the room,the staff was courteous and asked them if they could click a photograph with them as a memento for their hotel.

The room was unbelievable.Beautiful high white wooden ceilings,with a huge chandelier in the centre and the view outside was to die for.The room was a corner room,so it had the view of the enormous Arabian Sea as well as the city view of Mumbai.

While sona admired all the nuances,Dev stood near the window in a foul mood.

"Dev...,I know I overreacted on that movie topic.Now let it go Na please."She stood behind him with her hand on his shoulder

"You questioned my love for you.How can I forget that"He said

She regretted her words"I am sorry Dev.I promise aaj ke baad aisa kabhi nahi bolungi"

"I have a lot of work to do,so please don't expect me to accompany you anywhere.Tumhe Jo sightseeing wagarah karni hai,tum hotel guide ke Saath kar Sakti ho.I will just stay back and complete my work"he said and settled on the sofa with his laptop and started making his presentation

She was heartbroken.She tried to have a conversation with him but he ignored her completely.Eventually,she left him alone and checked out the hotel and vicinities.Without Dev,she felt lonely and empty.With a gloomy expression,she wandered around for about 6 hours and then returned to the hotel room.It was almost dinner time.

"Itna kharab vacation tho kisi dushman ka bhi na ho," she growled and murmured as she threw her sandals in the room. The room was dark. She turned on the lights. Tears rolled down her cheeks as she cursed herself for ruining a perfect holiday."Dev?" He was nowhere. Her heart raced with worry, "kahan chalegaye?Kahi meeting kal ki jagah aaj hi to nahi hai?"She thought and walked around and then noticed a gift box on the bed."Yeh kya hai?" She opened the package and found a note which read~

Please wear this and meet me on the beach.The waiter will lead you to there where I am.
With Love
Dev

To her surprise, it wasn't a sari like the first time but a beautiful long maroon dress in the box."Dress?" She was blown away

Sona's Dress

Just then she heard a knock at the door.She opened it and found a waiter standing there."Mam you come with me,Sir is waiting for you" he said

"Bhaiya mujhe ready hona hai,bas adha ghanta lagega.You please wait at the reception"she said

After the waiter left She changed into the sleeveless, back less, and almost gown length, maroon dress. As she stared at herself in the mirror, a blush immediately adorned her cheeks.

She came down and then the waiter accompanied her to a place from where she could spot her husband and she ran, holding onto the flowing garment with her fingers,towards there, where her prince charming was waiting for her.

Dev Had Planned a Dinner date for Sona.Till now he was doing an act of being angry on her because he wanted some lone time for arranging this Surprise for his beloved wife.
He had planned this night out and It had been 15 minutes, since he was waiting for her

"Is Ladki ka mein kya karoon,she know I dont like waiting .I told her to get ready and be their At 8:00pm sharp but wo to wo hai apni manmarzi karti hai"Dev was busy talking to himself when he heard or may be felt her coming...He didn't knew why but he could always feel her presence...He turned around and their she was, looking Stunning in the maroon gown gifted by Him
His eyes caressed her from head to toe. He couldn't take his eyes off her. She looked like a princess from one of his fairytale books.

Dressed in a black blazer with matching waistcoat, navy blue shirt and no tie for a change,He walked towards her and held her hand in his and asked"Hello Gorgeous,Did you like the surprise?"

Sonakshi was awestruck and spellbound on seeing all the arrangements done by her husband who was looking as handsome as a prince.There was a makeshift gazebo made up of bamboo,it was surrounded with glittering fairy lights,the sea waves gently rippling through the shore,creating a beautiful feel.A table was set for two, with candles and flowers at the centre.

A wide smile came up on her lips"Dev,Yeh sab?" Her eyes lit up like bulbs against the reflection of candlelights,"yeh aapne kab arrange kiya?"

"Don't underestimate your husband dear"he said with a wink

Sonakshi placed her hand on his shoulder and said, "thanks- thanks for making this special."

She slipped her arm around his arm and walked beside him.He glanced at her arm curled around his arm, her fingers rested on his taut biceps over his blazer.There was something very possessive about the way she held onto him and he enjoyed that.

They entered inside the gazebo and took their seats the waiter came forward to take the orders

"I will have an order of Manchurian to start with, a minestrone soup and four cheese ravioli as my main course...and of course your personal pan pizza of the day."Dev was stunned to hear her order,"are you sure you can eat all that?"Sonakshi glared at him,"pait mera hai Mr. Dixit, aapko kya problem ho rahi hai?Mai humesha to healthy khana khaati hun kamsekam abhi to kuch different karne dijiye"

The waiter smiled at their antics and left to bring the food

After the waiter left, he said"What if you put on weight like all those aunties?"

"Tho? Kya aap mujhe chhod denge?" She challenged him.

He gave her a derisive look, "I am not that shallow!"

"Tho iska matlab aapko main 25 saal baad bhi itni hi attractive lagoongi?"

"Yes,My love tab bhi tum mujhe utni ki beautiful lagogi jitni ab lagti ho" he replied in a husky voice.He glanced at her with his dreamy eyes and said, "Sona, shayad 25 saal tho kya, 50 saal baad bhi yeh muskaan tumhare chehre par dekhna chaahunga."

"To kya aap mujhse naraaz nahi hai?"she asked in a sweet voice

"Jiske wife itni hot ho,wo usse zyaada der tak naraaz reh sakta hai bhala?"He looked up and saw her turn red at his comment. The glow of the candlelight made her face look even more radiant. Her eyes were lowered but she had a smile on her face.As always, it made his heart flutter even faster.
"Mai to acting kar raha tha taaki ye sab arrange karne ka time mil jaye mujhe."he confessed

There was a moment of Silence All Around when they heard the pitter patter of raindrops.The chilly breeze Started Flowing which smelled of roses and fresh rainfall. Drops of water fell to the earth, Forming rhythmic beats

"Look Dev it's raining"Sona sprang up and sprinted outside the gazebo

"Come inside the shed Sona"Shouted Dev

"No lets Dance in Rain Dev"

"You will fall ill Sonakshi"

"Mr Dixit apko nahi ana hai to mat aiye,let me enjoy the rain."She spread her Arms wide,taking all the blessings of Rain,she started dancing Carried by the wind, into each step--spinning as if she were as light as a feather.

Dev was Standing under the shed admiring her beauty,more beautiful than the surrounding around them. .As the rain drops hit her body, her curvy figure looked so perfect...Her eyes have caught his eyes and he can't bring himself to look away. They smiled, captivated by each others presence.He could not control himself but go and dance with her in the rain...

May i have the pleasure to dance with you?he asked

"Sure,let's dance"she said with a blush "but where's the music???"

Dev placed his hand on the low of her back."Ummm 'The music' Cant u listen it??"

wrapping her arms around his neck,s he asked "Can you dance with no music?"

But its here only can't you listen the Violin Playing...

No Dev i Can't hear it,where's it"she said making a puppy face

"Its Everywhere" and when i see your beautiful face it automatically starts playing"

Oh Really??she asked arching her eyebrows

"Shhh..." he brought a finger to her lips, "listen.",twirling his hands in the air.Now can you feel the raindrops creating music

"hmmm"They began to dance feeling the rain and the music produced by it.

He looked at her lovingly, as they danced a bit longer, they danced for what seemed forever.A wonderful forever, and eternity worth waiting for.The Breeze along with the rain was creating sensations in their body

It was then that the music stopped.For it was then that the rain turned into nothing more than a light drizzle.

Sonakshi stood still, stopping the dance. Dev was about to ask her what was wrong when he was suddenly pulled into a lovely, long kiss

They get closer,wet from head to toe,their heart beating loudly.It was the greatest moment of their lives...None of them wanted it to end... Sonakshi moved her hands off his chest and they both hugged each other tightly and it lasted for another eternity...

"I want to have you every day. You tell me you want me forever, but, that's not long enough. We will be together after our time here has ended on this earth, in a place where we can experience this every day.I am forever Yours,Mrs Dixit"Dev said looking into her eyes

"I LOVE YOU DEV"

"I love you too sona,And Ek kya mai to tumhare liye Puri Satyajeet Ray movie Marathon dekh sakta Hun"

"Really?"She said with a twinkle in her eyes

"Yes...,but that can wait till we return home.Don't you think we have something more important to do right now"he said with a mischievous smile as he captured her lips again in another kiss.


***THE END****



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Posted: 7 years ago
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So how was it? Please Don't forget to click the like button and leave your valuable comments.I tried to mix many wishes of you guys,I hope I did justice to them 😊
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Thank you Ankita 😊
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Wow, this OS is so cute.

From their nok-jhok, to Shubh's Mamma's boy act, Dev's surprise, Golu being Suhana's shield and Devakshi's perfect date, I loved all of it. 😳 You fulfilled almost half of the wishes with this, and thank you so much for that. Also, thanks for the credit. 😊


Yay! I am the first one.. 😳😆
Edited by dreamy.tiara - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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very well written dear 👏 i loved the story
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Wow beautiful os so nice love it do write like more often dear
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Awesome.
Loved it.
Dev babu is super possessive papa n husband.
N golu is cute little munchkin.
I hope we got to see Devakshi spending some quality time like this in the show as well.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was extremely awesome ankita.I totally loved it.It was really amazing
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Its beautiful. Very very romantic.
Imagining DevAkshi & am blushing.☺️

I know we can't expect this on the show.😔
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow this os is really good. I loved how they fought and cleared out everything easily. Yes a bit heartbroken she was but i guess it was worth it!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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As usual great write up girl.
Love sona's dress😉

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