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After the dreadful incident of bus and goons he was scared like hell
Delhi , A girl in the bus alone and 4 dunked men , history cud have repeated itself
the way nirbhaya's family lost her , the way he cud have lost her and that thought may be killing him , that thought of parting , that thought of losing her and that was the reason of not allowing her to step alone , following her wherever she goes but shona was angry for all the right reasons

Dev wasnt awear of her anger
he went to her cabin
Dev sonakshi , ghar chale getting late
Shona dev tum jaao me aa jaungi thodi der me muje kaam hai

dev achha thik he i M waiting sath me chalte hai

shona eyed him with irritation but didnt say anything knowing its worthless

shona was busy in preparing presentation
and dev was busy in his phone or rather he was acting as if he is using his phone

but his concentration was only on ms boss
the way she was putting her stands behind her ear , the way she was explaining others
the way she caught him staring at her and immediately he started typing on his locked phone
and the way that blush form on her cheeks
he was feeling like teen age boy staring his crush

he laughed at his own thought

Finally his wait is over and her work too
as soon as she closed her laptop he again engross himself in phone

shona dev ,chale ?
Dev (acting as if didnt listened) haan ?
oh tumhara kam khatm ho gaya ? mene dhyan naahi dia
shona mr dixit i knw aapka pura dhyan kaha tha dnt be smart

dev hold her hand and pulled her toward him

dev haa to apne pyar ko dekhne ka haq he muje
shona achha
dev haan paro kitni achhi lag rai thi na
shona paro ?
dev ha paro ... paromita !!Tumhari secretory
shona smiled to wo tumhara pyar hai ?
dev haa to tumhe kya laga i Was talking about you ?
shona nahi .. ak kaam karo tum usi k sath kyon nahi jaate use ghar drop kar k aao

(with the fake anger she was about to leave)
before she cud leave dev pulled her again

dev ms boss
shona its mrs dixit for u
dev mrs dixit mera pyar pehle bhi aap thi aur aaj bhi aur hamesha aap hi rahegi

shona blushed at this
shona chale ??
dev ak shart par car tum drive karogi !
aur me tumhe dekhta rahunga
shona remembered the day before their marriage when he said he want to see her even while driving
she nodded

somehow they reached home
and they entered room which was totally dark

shona dev lights on karo
dev knowing her fear hold her hand protectively

dev switch on the light
room was fully decorated with fairy lights

shona dev ye sab
dev tumhe ye lights bahot pasand hai na
hamari shadi k baad tumne jule par lagayi thi , i knw us vaqt me kuch kar nahi paya

shona par tumhe to light me nind nahi aati na ?
dev ha isi lie me apne lie eye mask bhi le aaya hoon dont worry

she smiled at this

dev and
he came closer to her and hold her waist firmly
shona and ?
dev and if u want ..i mean if u want mene nahi socha
if u want hum is lights ko off kar dete hai thn i can saw u how much i love you !!

she put her hand around his neck
shona achha to tumne nahi socha
dev nodded no no with his usual mischivious smile

dev ak min i have something for you
he goes and get a box and gave it to her

shona what is it ?
dev khud hi dekh lo

she opened the box and surprised to see mangalsutra and kumkum in it

dev make her wear mangalsutra and she was busy in admiring him
he put sindoor on her forehead

dev back hugged her and make her saw herself in mirror

dev me itna religious nahi hoon par tumhe isme dekh kar bahot achha lagta bahot proud feel hota he (Remembering SR night)

shona blushed a little at this

k tum sirf meri ho .. u are mine all mine , only mine
he said it with determination

Shona got scared on it not for her but for him remembering her days when they broke up and she was going to marry Ritwik

She get back to him She started removing mangalsutra

Dev : Are why are you removing it ? design pasand nahi aaya ?
muje tumhe sath leke jana chahiye tha but I wanted to give surprise to you

Abhi ye pahen lo , will go and change it

Soeery

(He hold her hand and didn't allow her to remove )

He said it in one go with puppy face the way he was blabbering when he told suhana that he is her father.

Dev -Why are u not saying anything at least you can forgive me

Shona Dev I am not gonna wear this bcz I don't want to, not because I dnt like it

Dev par kyun?? Tum pehle bhi to pahenti thi na

Shona -haan lekin is lie nahi k muje koi tum se chhen na le, na is lie k me tumhari property hoon ye logo ko bata saku ... Dev tum ye kyun jatana chahte ho k muj par sirf tumhara haq hai aur , ye sab kya laga rakha hai tumne chhen lena aur ..

She was frustrated like hell , from the coffee date to office stalking to not allowing her to step alone

She remove the mangal sutra(MS) ,grab his hand and give that to him

His mind was totally blank and went to that day when she throw MS in the fire

Her only was echoing in his ear "Jis pyar ka aap mazak uda rahe he wo pyar laut k aapki zindgi me phir kabhi nahi ayega

This line were kept repeating in his ear and at sudden fear engulfed him of losing her again , living in those darkest days of his life , breathing but not living , where alcohol took place of coffee , when he saw her again she was not Mrs. Dixit anymore , whenever he saw her calling him Mr Dixit initially broked his heart

All were running in his mind like images on repeat mode

He couldn't handle that pain right not and in a swift moment he pulled her toward him with a jerk and she collide with him , dev pulled sonakshi , holding her hand behind her back

They were merely inch apart, she was breathing heavily

Anger, Sadness , frustration was oozing out in his eyes and she was lost in those eyes ...trying to figure out his state of mind

Dev : Tum 7 saal pehle bhi ishi tarah muje chhod k jaa chuki ho , ab me tumhe is tarah muje chhod k jane nahi dunga

Tumhi ne kaha than a ye Rista do tarfa hota hai , me akela decision nahi le sakta jab mene tumse break up kia tha hospital me

To tum bhi ye decision akele nahi le sakti , Aur me tumhe allow nahi kar sakta muje chhod k jane k lie

Tumne kaha aur mene tumhe jane diya ak baar ab aur nahi

Shona : Dev u are hurting me

His grip was enough to hurt her

Dev : U can't leave me like this

This is enough, shona pushed him from both of her hand making dev came back to present

Shona : Enough dev, I am not going anywhere. I am just saying I dnt want to wear this . par tumhe pyar nahi muj par apna haq jatane se fursat nahi hai jese me koi cheez hoon

She was in full anger

Dev : Shonak..

shona : muje tumhe koi argue nahi karni , I need sleep

She went to washroom to change and went to sleep

Dev also came after changing and saw her sleeping, He came and Sit beside her and put that lose stand behind and started caressing her face so lovingly

Dev : I am sorry mene tumhe phir se hurt kar diya , Lekin kya karu tumhe ek nahi par do baar kho chukka hoon ... jab pehli baar khoya tha aur tum mere pass vapas aayi , hamari shadi ho gayi to laga ab kuch nahi hoga lekin tum phir se mujse door ho gayi aur jab hum phir se ak hai to me tumhe khone k bare me sochna bhi nahi chahta , dar lagta hai us andhere se jisme mai pichhle 7 saal raha hoon

Tum soch bhi nahi sakti itne saal me kese bhatka hoon , bahot dhundhi apni khushiya un parties mai , un sharab ki bottles mai , un girlfriends mai jo duniya k lie meri gfs thi lekin akele me mai unhe janta bhi nahi tha , shayad sabko ye batana chahta tha ..sabko kya khud ko b yehi batana chahta tha k muje koi fark nahi padta lekin bahot fark padta tha ... sayad aaj wahi dard samne aa gaya jo kabhi mene akele me bhi jahir hone nahi diya

aur kal phir tumhe khote khote bacha hoon agar 10 min b der ho jati tumhe kuch ho jata nahi me sochna bhi nahi chahta ye

Lekin vajah chahe jo bhi ho tumhe hurt karne ka haq mene kisi ko nahi diya hai khud ko bhi nahi

Me ye kehta raha tum meri ho, par ye bhul gaya tha k hum dono to ak hi hai alag nahi ...tum ye MS pehno ya na pehno tum mujse juda ho hi nahi sakti ... Koi apne aap se kese juda ho sakta hai bhala

And he kissed her forehead and a silent tear make its way from her eye

This didn't go unnoticed by him

Dev : Sonakshi ..

She opened her eyes and he gave a kiss on it

Dev : to tum jagi hui thi aur meri baate sun rahi thi

Shona- wo...meri galti nahi hai tum hi kan (ear) k pass drum baja rahe the

Dev to meri aawaj tumhe drum jesi lagti hai

Shona : nahi... I am sorry Dev

Dev : its ok

Shona : nahi us k lie nahi ... wo mai bina baat k tum pe chilla gai

Dev : shhh... U are not at fault, I was hyper and over possessive , I was controlling ur freedom ... muje tum par gussa nahi karna chahiye tha

He cupped her face a lone tear escaped from his eyes

Dev : I m sorry Shona..

Shona- Ak shart par ..tum muje shonaskhi nahi aaj se shone bulao to

He smiles and kissed her on cheek and hugged her

Shona : Dev we won't fight , aur agar fight karenge to sone se pehle use solve kar denge

Dev : Sone se pehle !!! Pakka

He sound naughty and she gave him a punch

Dev : vese tumhe pata hai , me pehle bhi tumse ese hi baate kia karta tha jab tum so jati thi

Shona : pata he

Dev : Tumhe kese pata ?

She bite her tongue for speaking

Dev : Oh so Ms Boss aap sab sunti thi

She gave him a sorry look and he laugh on it


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely write up dear...I wish we can get so much of Devakshi scene 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome one dear
Wish we get to see such scenes in the show too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful written!
Dev acting on phone sach ma hona chaiye ...it will be damn good if they show this type ofscenes😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OS : Maagal sutra

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just fantastic!👏
Please do write more!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow... Nice chapter... I feel it's real... Keep updating...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow nice os. Loving this side of dev. Atleast they are touchy touchy.😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww this was really beautiful and sweet
Please write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely OS.. I love the possessive Dev

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