To Love You Back : A Devakshi ff IMP *A/N at pg 24*

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Mohi99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Hmmm...but would love to read his thoughts on her looks , dance and her kiss on his nose...what did he feel...the changes in him that he is not able to understand or recognize ...

Absolutely. ...we all would love it

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Arpi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Mohi99
I have no words...u write amazingly...and don't leave a stone unturned so that we r glued to it...absolutely cute and different version of KRPKAB...please please pm me ur next...I m waiting ur updates...
Luv , M

Thnx for the feedback! :)

Matters a lot!

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Arpi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Mohi99

Absolutely. ...we all would love it

Hmmm...dev's thoughts would be portrayed soon too. Right now though he liked her look in the party, he is not thinking about his marriage much. It's Sonakshi who is drooling over him 😆

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Priyanka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

okay this is so freaking awesum yaar
i'm in luv with ur writing style... would luv to read dev's pov

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saumiee

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Wow! This was so so cute!. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter..loved it <3

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Oh god
Its getting intersting day by day
Pls update soon
N do pm . me

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Razzy03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Loved it... ur writing is quite interesting. It kept me glued to the story. I was imagining the scenes

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sarica_sefa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

wooow i really love this... newly wed couple's lovely dovley awkward moment... 😆 Love it... waiting for nxt part

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Ria.C

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Awsum update..eagerly waiting for next part

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dakshasharma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Awesome chapter...dev n sona are feeling attracted towards each other. Pls continue this... As this is looks like a arrange marriage couple falls for each other day by day...

Thanks for pm dear