Drabble SS: A new Beginning CHAP-4(LAST PART) PG:26 Post:4 28/04/2017

Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Good morning Aazeen!

I think I am the first one to read today.

An unbelievable ending to a beautiful story.

I feel this needs a small epilogue.

Post delivery you see.

If all couples are so sensitive and understand each other 's point of view the burden on courts will be less.

You have become a very sensitive and sensible writer and one of the best.

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

A beautiful end to what started on a sad note with our devakshi on the verge of separation
I wish all couples could sort out their issues with such maturity
If only we could our feelings n love above our ego then the world would see less of separation n more of togetherness
Will eagerly wait for ur next write
Doesn't matter even if its after a long time

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AnanyaGhosh

@AnanyaGhosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Very nice di.. Loved it.. Dev sona emitional scenes also makes me cry... Keep up

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Aazeen 🤗
Thank u so much for writing it when u had not planned and i literally ordered at forced u at midnight ❤️
I always wanted dev to woo sonakshi back, apologise to boses and confront ishwari and this OS gave me all
thanks for pm

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cscs

@cscs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Lovely update Aazeen :)

The whole story was so beautifully written and made so much sense.

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TAMOGHNAD11

@TAMOGHNAD11

Explorer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#186

The entire ss was awesome! Can we get an epilogue please?

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Anjali Sharma

@Anjali333

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#187

Last ke dono parts ek sath read kiye...

Both were awesome ⭐️

Dev bose house mein 7 din continuously aaya or fir bijoy ne roz usey humiliate karke bhej diya...

Par ki determination to ekdum pakki thi...

Apni sona or bijoy ki apology jo chahiye thi!

Everything got sorted with time...

Bijoy ka gussa bhi shaant ho gaya...or sona bhi finally maan gayi...

Show mein bhi aisa hi hota...to kaafi accha hota...

Loved it...as always 😊

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 8 years ago

#188

Absolutely brilliant!! I loved every moment of the chapter...in fact liked the ending very much...left to readers imagination...nice way to close the story...
Nice piece of work...and thank you for entertaining us with your writing !!

So when are you planning to start the next story?? Whenever you do pls send a PM...

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