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Posted: 8 years ago
It was a emotional update. I cried when sona was all pale due to fever. But dev do care for her. Feeling very bad for sona
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Posted: 8 years ago

*unres*
What to talk...what to say!
Absolutely amazing Di😃👏
Dev's two sides to his personality
Making me love as well hate him!😳
Just hoping for the best...I hope such incidences bring Devakshi closer to each other!😳😉
And Ishu ma is indeed playing a cupid...
She instigates Dev agnst Sona and then he takes stand for her
Bht maza aa raha hai😃😉
Waiting for the next chappy😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome...dev is angry on sona bt his concern shows something else he doesn't want her to even leave her studies bt in his anger he jst wants to hurt her bt when she gets hurts he feels bad waise bejoy ke saath jo usme kiya was really cruel
Bt when sona is not well he goes all sad
Kuch toh hua hai ishu n dev ke saath in d past well tht wld be interesting to read
Waise when is dev goin to knw d truth as kab tak tadapao ge sona ko as dev me bhi tadapna hai
Waise i hope nuts ka sach as in full sach pta chale usko then he repents badly
I liked d fiery Sona even dev was taken a back
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Hello gayu di... Aa gyi reply leke.. Haha...

Firstly thoda confusing update tha.. Yes.. Pehle sona ka behavior and then dev ka PDA.. Lol.. Sach batau i was laughing while reading it.. And woh sona ka dialogue to dev zyada darr dikhane se darr khatam hota hai.. Mujhe achanak Mary Kom film ki yaad aa gyi jaha Priyanka Chopra ne yehi dialogue bola tha.. And this dialogue was superb...

Aab dev ne aur zeher phelaya.. Bijoy ko instigate kiya.. And bijoy iss baar dev ki baaton par bharosa kar gya.. Haww.. Aab kya hoga.. And asha as usual a sensible woman..

Sona ko fever aa gya.. I loved dev ka genuine concern.. And he wants to trouble her all life.. Which means he wants her in his life. Aww.. See.. Hum optimistic log har cheez mein positivity dhund lete hai.. Hai na!!!

And finally dev ka dhamki to that chudail ish.. 15 saal pehle kya hua tha di... O god.. Zarur sona se related hoga..

Aab aapko dev ko burayi ki pits pe leke jaana hai.. Acha.. Aur bhi bura banega woh.. Chalo banao.. Pad lungi sab.. Hazam kar lungi sab..

Waiting for the next one..




Comment wa karne ke liye dhanyabaad
Par aapka comment wa humari samajh mein nahi aaya
To hum confusa gaye 😕

Khair aapne jo mary kom ko humare ff mein ghusaya hai
Sona to sona thi na mary kom kab se ban gayi
Yeh dialogue to hum sabko bolte rehte hai jo bhi hume darata hai
Yeh mary kom ka nahi humara line hai

Pda karna to banta hai
Dev ne hi to kahan tha sabke saamne chuchi koo waale hubby wife banke rehna
Phir why not do kissi wissi to ur hubby
Waise dev ka to agla target bhi ready hai 😳

Bijoy baba ko dev ne bhadkaya
Ab aage kya hoga janne keliye padhte rahiye

Aur 15 saal pehle kya hua tha yeh bhi janne keliye padhte rahiye
Inshort padho comment thoko
Phir update maango
Then update milega
Phir upar ka process repeat kare
Thanku
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy




Comment wa karne ke liye dhanyabaad
Par aapka comment wa humari samajh mein nahi aaya
To hum confusa gaye 😕

Khair aapne jo mary kom ko humare ff mein ghusaya hai
Sona to sona thi na mary kom kab se ban gayi
Yeh dialogue to hum sabko bolte rehte hai jo bhi hume darata hai
Yeh mary kom ka nahi humara line hai

Pda karna to banta hai
Dev ne hi to kahan tha sabke saamne chuchi koo waale hubby wife banke rehna
Phir why not do kissi wissi to ur hubby
Waise dev ka to agla target bhi ready hai 😳

Bijoy baba ko dev ne bhadkaya
Ab aage kya hoga janne keliye padhte rahiye

Aur 15 saal pehle kya hua tha yeh bhi janne keliye padhte rahiye
Inshort padho comment thoko
Phir update maango
Then update milega
Phir upar ka process repeat kare
Thanku



Excuse me.. Agla target?????????
Yeh kya hai.. Baaap reee.. Aab mujhe tissue papers le hi lene chahiye..
And ik the process.. Kaise kya milega humlogo ko..

Waise... Yeh kaise reply dia?? Jaise woh soochna aati hai na kisi bhi film k ys serial k pehle.. Bilkul waisa.. How funny..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Devakshilover

Unres
So Sona ne acting ki that they are in love in front of his family members but dev NE bhi tit for tat Diya in front of her friends and classmates bechari sona kitni embarrassed hui hogi and sona ko fever and Dev ne bijoy ko badhka diya sona ke against but ma ka dil hi aisa hota hai ki wo sab samajh jaati hai asha sensed that Dev is lying and then dev ka caring side for sona and Ishwari ki class lena was amazing loved it aise jaldi-2 updates de do kyuki within 2 months I will be leaving the forum



Yaar dev aur sona ka tit for tat chalta hi rahega
Chalne do humein to padhne ka mazaa chahiye

Bola tha na dev khud sona ko chot pohunchayega
Par kisi aur ko karne nahi dega
Ab khud hi dekhlo iska proof

2 mahine mein if ko bye bye ???
Why ????why?????
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Wow...

Mind blowing...
Loved this chapter sooo much

I loved sona ka sherni wala avtaar...
Sahi bola...jab dev ke samne sach aayega to wo sona ko face nahi kar paaega...and she will wait for that day
Aur main bhi...I m eagerly waiting fr that day

Sona ki acting to mashallah hai...
Kya acting ki poori family ke saamne
Seedhe jaake kiss kar diya dev ko sabke saamne
Or us tym dev ka face dekhne laayak hoga😆

Dev ne bhi wahi repeat kar diya
Wo bhi clg me sabke saamne

Jab dev jaake bijoy ko sona ke baare me galat bol raha tha...tab tak main soch rahi thi...di ne to dev ko poora ka poora villain bana diya...par end tak aate aate opinion completely change ho gaya...

Sona ki itni care😊
Ki sona ke liye ishwari ko itna sunaya...ki maza hi aa gaya...
Aaj to dev ne khush kar diya...

Doctor ki baaton se...I think ab dev sudhar jaaye...
Ab to sona ko khush rakhna hi padega...
I m sure next chapter me bhut sare swt or romantic moments milne wale hain...dev taking care of sona...usko jabardasti khaana khilega...medicine bhi

Ye chapter galat jagah aake rok diya
Aage to bhut maza aane wala hai...

Next chapter de do
Bina padhe raha nahi jaaega

Please please please update very very soon
Waiting...





Thanku jii thanku

We all are waiting for that day jab dev sach janega
I'll enjoy writing that part the most
Shayad jaldi aajaye
Mood pe depend karta hai

Yaar likhne ka wahi tota hai
Face nahi dikha sakte
Dev ka expression soch ke hasi to mujhe bhi aayi thi

Nahi yaar dev to mera pyaar hai
Use villian kaise bana doon
Woh to mera hero hai na


Ishwari ki dhulayi mera sapna hi nahi jidd hai
Jo main poori karke rahungi 😆

Kya pata dev sudhrega ya nahi
Par isshu iss sab ke baad sudhar jaaye to thik
Warna bhagwaan hi maalik hai
Accha jii u wanna se medicine romance
Thik hai woh bhi likh dete hai

Galat jagah roka 😡
Sab kuch ek hi mein likh doon 😡
Aage kaun padhega phir
Isshu amma??????

Agle update tak shaanti banaye rakho bacchoan
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rhy2015

First of all thank u for giving us frequent updates coz zyada wait krna mujhe acha Nahi lgta...
Coming on to ur new chapter, it's awesome...
We got to see the caring side of Dev which was really sweet...
The facade of hatred is gonna come off real soon, I guess!!!
Ishwari ki daant mili Dev se...chalo apki story mey hi sahi...mili to.
Keep giving us more surprises like this...
Once again a beautiful piece of writing 👏 👏


Urs Daisy 😛
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Welcome daisy
Aap sab itna pyaar dete ho ki jaldi jaldi likhna padta hai

Thanku for liking the new chapter
Dev's facade of hatred utrega yah nahi ull come to know
Isshu ko daant lagi mere dil ko sukoon mila
Will surprise u with every update

Lots of love

Quack quack
Yours Donald
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Res😃

Commented on pg 89😃




Okies
Will reply as i reach thr
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ketaki9narkhede

I HATE Dev.😡I seriously hate him when he was talking to Bijoy.but after that loved him as he talked to ishwari.❤️

~KET@K!




Nooo
U can't hate my dev
He's so sweet na
Meri tarah aap bhi use like
phir aapko bho woh sweet lagenge

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