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Moon light

@moonlight3094

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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Thanku for liking it
Actually wanted to know if I'm going too fast with the story
Yes now this truth is going to spoil their lives
Will update as soon as possible

No no.. ur story's pace is apt for the plot..

When u have much ideas coming,, its good u add a bit fast forward! Otherwise u r in the right one 😊

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

Congratulations on new story

Concept is different

Prologue is Captivating

and for some reason I already feel that at some point Natasha will cause a problem between Dev and Sonakshi

Character Sketch is Interesting

This is no fake comment but seriously I'm looking forward to reading this story , will read parts 1 & 2 later and will comment

sorry for such late response

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simplesweety1

@simplesweety1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Awsm Chapter yaaar! This is getting interesting day by day! update soon yaaa! waiting eagerly for the next chapter! :)

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

good
vaise human gala update lab tak milega??

Sunday ko I'll try
Tabiyat thodi si kharab
so cant write

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: flowers321
Waiting for next chap 😛

Will try to update this sunday dear

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Hahaha
Chala lo Di
Me toh in for this😉
Yep I know u love villains just like me😆😆

Great
Jai villians 😆

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: moonlight3094

No no.. ur story's pace is apt for the plot..
When u have much ideas coming,, its good u add a bit fast forward! Otherwise u r in the right one😊

Yah when u have too many plots in mind you don't have time for detailing
That's exacty my case now

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Suchi_Ejf_fan

@Suchi_Ejf_fan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Will try to update this sunday dear

ok waiting and get well soon

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 8 years ago

#209

Chapter 1

Ishwari does not like Sonakshi and her family but is there another reason or she just dislikes them

Sona forgetting her ID card at home and phones her bunny to bring it to school , Dev dashes out the house again making Ishwari angry as she must know that Dev is once again doing an errant for Sona

Sonakshi comes over on Sundays to wake Dev again Ishwari finds displeasure at this

Dev in love with Natasha while she is cheating him big time and the men she sleeps around with also seems to make fun of Dev

oh I so hope he'll find out about Natasha before he crosses his limits with her