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AnanyaGhosh

@AnanyaGhosh

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1681

Hello di.. Aa gyi...

Par yeh kya.. Itna chota sa update... Isme zyada kuch toh hua nhi... Mujhe laga dev sona flirt n all.. Par koi nhi.. I enjoyed the update... A lot..

Dev was angry hona bhi chahiye.. And sona manaofying him... Dev ne tina se flirt kiya... Lol...

And he also imagined this wild dream abt her... Good... Sona... She also...

Arey inko aab dosti ka nawab nikalwao... Pyaar leke ao.. Pls... Ya fir koi passionate scene proximity wala... Aakhon hi aakhon mein baatein...pls..

Do update soon...

Edited by AnanyaGhosh - 8 years ago

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Anjali Sharma

@Anjali333

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#1682

*Unres*

Di chapter thoda chota tha😲...thoda zada bada dena next tym pls...😊...

Office mein to dev sona ko 1 min ke liye akela nahi chod raha

Room locked or blinds bhi...ab to tina ko bhi shak hone laga hai..

Dev kitna tang kar raha hai sona ko...agar sona ko pata chala na...fir to dev ki khair nahi😆...

Rahul ki acchi band baj gayi...baza maza aaya...

Possessive dev n sona..

Sona tina ko dev ke aas paas nhi dekhna chahti...dev rahul ko...

Par mujhe lag raha hai...ye rahul kuch karne wala hai...kaheen sona ko pareshan to nahi karega...or fir dev se dhulai hogi

Uske baad sabko pata chal jaaega sonakshi is Mrs. Dev Dikshit...

Aisa hoga...aisa mujhe lag raha hai...

Baki hoga to wahi...jo gayu di ki marzi...hum to bas soch hi sakte hain😆

Sona ke baad aaj dev ki turn thi apne dream world mein jaane ki...

Dono ke naughty dreams😉

Wow! Next chapter mein party...

Devakshi with tina...party mein jaaenge

Devakshi dance bhi chahiye party mein...

Milega na????

de do...pls😃

Update next one soon

Is baar kafi der laga di aapne

Edited by Anjali333 - 8 years ago

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Sharica

@Sharica

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#1683

Finally mujhe time mil hi gaya comment karne ka...

So Dev is very hurt ki Sona ne usse itni important baat chupayi, hona bhi chahiye..but Dev and his teasing sessions😆, Sona is getting J..living it..

Fir baari aayi Dev ke gussa hone ki seeing Rahul again and that too offering to drop his wife home...Rahul ne kuch aur bola hoya aage to Dev usko permanently apne offc se drop kar deta😉

Fir Sona ne dil se maafi mangi but Dev mafi dene ke liye saja mein kya sapna dekh dala...Gayu ab na bahot ho gya..pls give us devakshi romance in the coming party...make Sonakshi wear beautiful saree...Tina ko Dev ke aaath dekhke Sona J hogi and Sona ko baaki log dekhenge to Dev J hoga and us beech mein give us their realisation that they confess to themselves abt their feelings and starts giving hints to each other...so it will be slow process and not an overnight love and SR..

Bahot sanskaari ho gaye ab thoda sa asanskaari hona banta hain...pura asaskari banne ke liye we are already waiting...pls humari wish puri ki jaaye😛

Next update kab??? Weekend pe???

Edited by Sharica - 8 years ago

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Razzy03

@Razzy03

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#1684

Very bad. Everything in dreams. Lol
But it was good. Bring next update soon 😉

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#1685

Originally posted by: Razzy03
Very bad. Everything in dreams. Lol
But it was good. Bring next update soon 😉

Lol jaldi comment karke mujhe khush karo
Kya pata agle waale mein dream sach ho jaye 😉

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diksha710

@diksha710

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#1686

Omg... it was too good. So now Dev has also started dreaming.. very nice... pls update next part soon...

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#1687

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Hello di.. Aa gyi...
Par yeh kya.. Itna chota sa update... Isme zyada kuch toh hua nhi... Mujhe laga dev sona flirt n all.. Par koi nhi.. I enjoyed the update... A lot..

Dev was angry hona bhi chahiye.. And sona manaofying him... Dev ne tina se flirt kiya... Lol...

And he also imagined this wild dream abt her... Good... Sona... She also...

Arey inko aab dosti ka nawab nikalwao... Pyaar leke ao.. Pls... Ya fir koi passionate scene proximity wala... Aakhon hi aakhon mein baatein...pls..

Do update soon...

Hello anu

Yeh bilkul bhi chota update nahi tha btw
It took me 2 entirw evenings to finish it up!!!!!!!

Sorry ki ismein kuch accha nahi hua
But mere se jo ban paya maine likha
Pasand na aaya ho to u r free to voice it out

Dosti to waise hi rahegi
Pyaar bass add ho jayega
Haan aur passionate scene jo aapko chahiye shayad waisa na ho
Par jo maine plan kiya hai woh main likhungi
Hope u will like it