Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(clsd)~New Thread Crtd - Page 14

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Dekho to sahi kaun aaya hai
Owl gang ki sargana
Welcome welcome

Yaar isshu sona se nafrat kyun karti hai pata nahi
But ek baat tay hai ki main usse bohot jyaada nafrat karti hoon
Uska character likhne baithu to bura hi banta hai
But aage hopefully kuch acche karm karegi

Thanku for liking it
Will update soon

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Aisa na karo mere saath
Mujhse paidaishi aalsi hone ka title na cheeno

Ok baba Nahi cheenti aapse yeh title

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Shukriya ji aapke swagat ke liye😃

Aap bol rahe ho ki accha karegi...

To aapke liye ise abhi jhel lungi

Par accha kaam jldi krwana isse...

Wese accha kya kregi??

Devakshi ko milegi kya??

Beta anji antaryami
Agar sabkuch tujhe abhi janna hai to phir kahani likhne ka kya fayda
Aur waise bhi maine kahan ki possibility hai ki kuch accha kare
Warna mera koi bharosa nahi
Itni nafrat usse ki maar hi daalun use main iss bar bhi
But nahi iss baar jinda rakhne ka pran liya hai

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

Ok baba Nahi cheenti aapse yeh title

😃

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Don't worry dear
Kuch galat nahi hoga hamare devakshi ke saath
N nuts juss frgt her
Sona ke opp...yeh to.abhi tak socha nahi hai maine

Well apne Bol diya now I am relives ki Humare devakshi ke saath kuch galat nahi hoga though 1-2 chappy MU wale n cryin ke honge bt thts how a story moves
I trust u as a writer tht u will shape a Gud plot

Wow! The chapter was awesome yaaar! And i just loved the last scene! lol! Bunny and cheeku! Hahaha! So cute! Loved it yaaar! update soon! :)

awesum ..
update soon
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: A.K.Aggarwal

Well apne Bol diya now I am relives ki Humare devakshi ke saath kuch galat nahi hoga though 1-2 chappy MU wale n cryin ke honge bt thts how a story moves
I trust u as a writer tht u will shape a Gud plot

Thanku so much for the trust dear
Sahi kahan aapne do chappy happy waale do sad waale aise hi to chalti hai story
Will update soon

Originally posted by: simplesweety1

Wow! The chapter was awesome yaaar! And i just loved the last scene! lol! Bunny and cheeku! Hahaha! So cute! Loved it yaaar! update soon! :)

Thanku for liking it sweety

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

awesum ..
update soon
thanks for pm

Thanku sona diii
Will update soon