New OS 'PAPA O MERE PAPA' - Page 5

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Heyyy!

I'm here

I know tune mujhko bht miss kiya

That's why I came running here to read it!

So talking about ur OS...

I would say...

Ummm...

Hummm...

Mujhe lagta hai...

Ki...

Ki...

Ki...

This didn't match up to my level...

No...

Balki it was few notches higher than my writing skills!

Yes baby...u did it!👏👏

Congratulations for writing such a wonderful OS!

Yes...u deserve a round of applause for it!👏⭐️

My fav line was *Papa...kya aap mujhe hug kroge*...

That was fab!😳👏

Such beautiful parallels drawn!👏

Pls do come more with such gr8 writing!

U have inspired me too with this!😃

Originally posted by: .kashishbano.

First Of All Many Many Congratulations Anju For Your First OS.

Thank you di😃

The OS is really So So Beautiful ❤️and Heart Touching .❤️.

I am glad that you like it...

Thanks for reading it and giving your sweet reviews...

Father's Day is always special in every Girl's Life.

And your concept is so so Wonderful.👏

For every girl Father's day is so speed...

Girls are Papa's Princess na😊

As it is said that the sons are Mom's Raja Beta and so daughter's are Dad Princess.

The way you used it...It cannot be much better than This.👏⭐️

Round Applause For You.

Thanks a lot for your words...

I just love it

The way You have penned down The Soha's feelings for her father and how much she misses him, how much she wants him to be with her was so so emotional.😭

Soha must be missing her dad but cant say this...

Because she knows it might hurt her mom...

But in my OS...

I wrote what i wish and wanted to see

The Golu Speech about his father and his Bigcha is so so cute just like him but nobody able to watch the pain his hidden words.😭

Golu is so cute...

But there is some hidden pain in his words...

As his parents nevlect him...

Dont bother about him

But his bigcha is always there for you

You have brilliantly put the two cuties feeling perfectly On Black and White.👏⭐️

And The Best for the Last.

"Papa kya aap Mujhe Hug kareinge".

That is my favourite too...

Actually everyone's favourite line...

Awww..Anju what a parallel scene drawn from Devakshi confession.

As i am imagining it, it seems so so lovely and beautiful to me.❤️.

Yes...i tried to draw a parallel

And i m so happy that everyone liked my attempt

For this hug dialogue..

A Big Hug To You From me.

A big hug to you too di🤗

P.S.No where it looks alike your First OS.

keep writing Dear.😃

Ofcourse di...

I will

Whenever i get some idea..

I will surely do

Originally posted by: TwinFlames

awww its beautiful @anjali.. & the last part 😭 too good

Originally posted by: Samzz

It was beautiful and heartwarming...you realised your hidden talent..do write more👏

P.S.i want that 'kya aap muje hug karoge' in the show too.😳

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Aa gayi meri teacher didi...

With her remarks🤗🤗

-- Saath samundaar paar main tera update padhne aa gayi...

Firstly di thank you so much for reading it...

And then writing a comment of the size of OS...😉

--Goals for you to learn, kitne lambe reviews de sakte hain...😆😆

Not that I am complaining haan...😉😆

I was eagerly waiting for your reply...😊

And when i saw ur reply that u r reading...

Was sooo excited..

-- I am so happy dear that my reviews count so much...

Until u didn't post ur reply...i kept roaming on IF and checking every minute...

-- Kaate nahi kat te lamhe intezaar ke,

Nazre jama ke baithe hain raste pe yaar ke?😆

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FN5CQy-3k6I[/YOUTUBE]

Then finally here comes your reply...

And seeing ur reply...

My happiness knows no bounds...

Super duper happy

@Bold

Yes you are the one... from whom i got my inspiration..

Aapki stories padh padh ke main bhi inspire ho gayi🤗

Aapka saath raha to or bhi likhungi...

Aur improve bhi karungi under your guidance

Now i am just a trainee...who is getting training under you

So you have to tell me where and how i went wrong??

Where i need improvement??

What should i do??

Feel free to give me your classes...

Thank you di once again for your so much love and support😃