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Posted: 8 years ago
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(Guys i'm back with a small OS on truth revelation it will continue from today's episode were Elena will visit bose household and guys don't forget to read my FIRST fanfic devakshi and soha i will update the 3 part soon and post ur replies and As always criticism accepted her)

Dev's pov

Dev tried to hide himself when soha saw him ,but luckily before soha could reach him she was distracted by jatin's words

Jatin- chalo miss supergirl ab hum apki nayi mami se milne jaate hai .

Soha - mein unse mile na and super girl nhi miss bose .😎

Jatin -super girl kyon nhi super girl toh bahoot strong aur intelligent hoti hai jaise humari soha hai .

Soha - nhi sab se strong aur intelligent toh mumma hai, bilkul golu k bigcha jaise .

Jatin-okk baba apki mumma supergirl ab chale apke asha bola rhi hai , haa chalo said soha

Dev silently tried to watch soha and jatin even though he knew jatin was soha's uncle he was feeling a little jealous😔 seeing their bonding ,he was feeling a really strong bond towards soha as if it was trying to pull him toward it just like a whirlpool trying to pull a person in . he never felt such a strong attraction towards a kid ,ofc ourse he loved kids that's why even after 7yrs the only pure relation he shared with was golu not even his mother with whom his relation is now strain .but he always felt a void when golu called him bigcha it was like every time he called bigcha reality struck him that golu was not his own child . And then their was soha even though she called him friend it felt really special❤️for him which he never felt before ,and today after hearing about soha not having a dad and her bonding with sonakshi ,his heart was trying to lead him on the way that had only 7%chances and after witnessing the scenes in bose household he felt like his heart would rip his skin off and walk on that 7% road ,but then came his brain which was stuck on that 93% and was not allowing his heart to walk through that road .And the only way he could clear the fight between the 93% and 7% was with elena's help ,he was not using Elena just so he can find truth about soha and sona's relation but he genuinely wanted Elena to meet sona ,and if, after 7 yrs he can talk to sonakshi then why can't Elena. his thoughts were interupated by a car's horn and he knew it was Elena so he hide himself ,he knew Elena would question his presence here and he didn't have much time he just wanted to know about soha and sonakshi's relation

No one's pov

Elena was really happy 😊she was going to meet her family again her maasi, maysa, dadi, saurav bhaiya and ofc her sweet sister sona she missed them so much in this 7 yrs she had her own family but ,this was the place which she can always call her first home with pride and love . she tried to look as confident as possible but still her heart was filled with fear she knocked on the door .

The door was opened by sonakshi .she was shocked to see Elena here elena said sonakahi

Sona Elena said with tears and hugged🤗 her before sona could speak

Mein ne tumhe bahoot miss kiya ,tumhey he nhi puray family said Elena broking the hug mein andhar ao she asked sona

Sona could not deny her for 2 reason first they were with saurav dada'as would be in-laws and if she stopped Elena from entering they would question their manners of treating a guest / person and sona didn't wanted to create a drama on her ,brother's special day and 2 reason Elena was still her family even though their relation was broken due to past deads and sona didn't have the courage to stop Elena as she was her bst frnd her sister so she let her entered even though she new wat her baba reaction was going to be .

Dev's pov

Dev witnessed all this he saw his old sonakshi❤️ behind that classy professional look sonakshi ,he saw that sonakshi that didn't wore any mask but was open about her emotions and feelings he could easliy see her inner turmoil about letting Elena in or not ,this was first time he saw her mask wearing off in front of some other person after the goon incident in jaipur with him .he was happy that he can still predict sonakshi .

No one's pov Elena enters bose house with sona

Kon hai sona asked asha

Maa woh said sona before she could complete her sentence Elena spoke massi maysa

Asha and all the family members turned around to see Elena standing besides sona saurav dada and dadi smiled ,asha smiled but it was vanished after she saw bijoy's angry expression

Before bijoy could speak asha spoke Elena kaise ho ,achi hu maasi aur ab toh bahoot smiling and hugging her massi and wiping her tears dadi said Elena and hugged her and she went to saurav dada to hug him as he returned her hug she went to bijoy but he ignored her and sona told her to wait by showing her stop sign and Elena nodded jatin said Elena kitne bade hogaya ho aur handsome bhi said Elena laughing aur tu bhi chipakli said jatin kya jatin mein ne tumhey handsome bola aur tumne mujhe chipkali ,ab chipkali ko chipkali he bolega na said saurav dada laughing kya dada aap bhi app oh rukho apki shaadi ho rhi hai dekho ab mein apko apki shaadi mein kitna kaam karati hu said Elena , ronita's mother interrupted and asked yeh kon hain asha ji

Oh sorry aunty mein apne apko introduce karna he bol gayi mein Elena ho sona and saurav dada ki before she could say behen bijoy said friend , acha frnd said ronita's papa , Elena looked away sadly aur cousin said asha glaring and bijoy but bijoy ignored her Elena smiled at her massi then soha came running app kon ho asked Elena ap mumma ki frnd ho ,mumma questioned Elena ,ha dr bose kya yeh apki frnds hai

Nhi miss suhana bose yeh mere behen aur apki massi hai said sona

Meri massi said soha smiling hii mein hu miss suhana bose shaking Elena's hand Elena shoke hands with soha and looked and sona confused soha apne room mein jao aur Elena tum mere saath ao humari bhabhi ko humare dada se baat toh karne ka chance dete hai winking which made both the would be couple blush .and sona took Elena to her room . soha was their on here bed drawing

Sona asked Elena kya soha as Elena knew about sona's infertility

Before she could finish sona spoke mujhe pata hai tu kya puchna chati hai yeh he na ki soha mere beti hai ya use meine adopt kiya hai .elena nodded a yes

Par tujhe nhi lagta soha ko humehai bahar bejna chaiye woh abhi bahoot choti hai , soha chotti zaroor hai par samjhdara hai aur mein apne beti se kuch nhi chupati kyon ki chupane se he akshar rishte toote hai {fb of separation} any ways soha mere khudh ki beti haii woh adopted nhi hai aur soha k papa asked Elena

Aur kon ho shatke tumhre sasural k famous mr dev mumma's boy dixit said sona in mocking tone

Elena was shocked she had no idea on how to react to the statement made by her sister ,to feel happy that her sister finally got joy to experience motherhood or to feel sorry for her devar who she shared a brother like relation and who missed his daughters birth her 7yrs of life ,par sona yeh galaat hai tujhe dev say yeh baat nhi chupani chaiye thi tujhe paat tha n a dev bhai bacchonse kitna pyaar karta hai aur soha ne bhi toh apne papa ko miss kiya hoga na , mujhe nhi lagta mein ne kuch galat kiya mein ne soha ko sab saach bataya hai uske papa k baar mein aur usko choice bhi diye thi par ussne maana kiya aur hum dono ek dusre par hamare decision nhi thop te aur rhi baat dev ko nhi baat ne kit oh jo insaan apne maa k khilaf jakar apne patni ko defend nhi kar paya woh apne beti ko bhi nhi karta aur mein nhi chati thi mere beti ko bhi usse daard aur hurt se guzarna apdhe ,par sona .dekh Elena agar tu yaha mr dixit ko defend karne aye hai tu humlog ko bahaar jana chaiye .

Unknown to them their was a person behind the window who heard all this and it was non other than vicky

(Hahaaa just joking )it was mr dev dixit

Dev's pov

He went back to hiding himself once he saw sona& Elena entering and he concentrated on their talk after hearing their whole talk he was so numb that he didn't react even to the mumma's boy comment he had a daughter and that to with the person he always wanted to a tiny miny kahrgosh a child who he can always claim his own ,when he heard sona saying that she was their daughter all his moments with soha came rushing in his mind his first meeting with her pen in return of his rose his hand quickly went to the pocket and took out the pen and he kissed it he went weak on his knees how can he be that dumb how could he not connect the dots ,how could he even think of soha as jatin's daughter when she showed so many signs / traits of his and sonakshi s her calling herself misss bose ,baby girl story refrence , how could he miss those sign the call from school that he saw on sona's phone sonakshi herself in school ,picking soha up, how the hell he didn't notice this but may be hiss brain was so stubborn with that 93% that he ignored the 7%❤️ that was always there but still the question remain's how could sonakshi do this to him she needed to give him answers and that to today itself he was about to rush staright into bose house when a tiny miny person stopped him

Aap aise detective jaise kyon spy kar rahey ho said his tiny khargosh he didn't say anything because he was tongue tied so he just hugged her as tight as he can but not so tight that can suffocate hiss tiny khargosh .

He broke the hug and looked at her he missed 7 wonderfull years of his khargosh his thought's were interrupted by suhana

Abhi hug kiya aur bike par toh ignore kar diya tha mujhe aise friend hai aap ,apse mujhe baaat he nhi karni said soha in a cute tone

But dev was scared he would joke around with golu as he was his bigcha and this tiny girl was his baby girl he was scared that soha would'nt talk to him but his train of thoughts were interrupted by a cute laugh🤣 he looked at soha as she spoke "AB SOCHO MEIN WAISI WALI FRIEND HOTI TOH"Dev stared at her in shock😲 {pheli dafa hai jo mujh mein tu .. plays in background }she was just like him equal mixture of him and sonakshi .

Soha spoke aap bhi mumma jaise ho mumma bhi humesha is game mein haar jaati hai she said smiling at dev as dev has FB of them playing this game ,soha speaks mujhe pata hai apne woh hand shake kyon nhi kiya aap bike pe teh na aur safety mere hand shake se jayada imp tha isliye mein apko maaf kar diya said soha smiling, dev smiled at her maturity , an dev was about to reply when soha spoke aap andhar chalo a mujhe apko mumma se milna hai as she took her tiny hand in his and lead them to the doors as he started walking toward the house he thought

That house is going to be the witness of two broken hearts 💔filled many emotions such as grief anger sadness hurt even after 7 yrs as it had witness the beating of 2 hearts as ❤️one having only one emotion love before 7yrs and the hearts are of the same people even after 7 yrs .

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Posted: 8 years ago
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it was soo sweet ...stalking dev at last found his answers...in the sow too dev is feeling somewhat the same...he just cant get over that 93%
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing kash show me v aisa hi ho
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it was awesome so finally dev knows the truth
please continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing os.beautifully penned..
He realised soha is his own daughter..
Will u plz update next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ooh its amazing.
I so wish the truth comes out now. Enough of hide n seek.
Dev's expression after knowing the truth is very well written. I just hope he feels all the emotions; happiness, betrayal, contentment, because its his right to feel sad also.
Please continue.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This one's really very cute
Pls continue soon
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It was so sweet...and very emotional...
Brilliantly written
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Posted: 8 years ago
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so emotional and sweet
beautifully penned down
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing... So emotional
I wish shOK mai bhi Aisa ho

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