~*~ Correspondence : A DevAkshi FF ~*~ Part Two Pg 6 - Page 3

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Thanks a ton everyone for such a overwhelming response! It encouraged me through leaps and bounds!




Part One

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He sat on the park bench, knocking his fist into his palm. That's what Dev Dixit did when he thought all by himself. But soon this periodic action was brought to an abrupt rest as she came there, half jogging and half balancing two cups of steaming hot liquid in her single hand.

"Jaldi lo!", She thrusted one of the cup onto his hand, while she sat with a thud beside him. He kept on looking, how easily she managed to smile amidst their chaotic life.

"Kya?", She asked, raising her brows high. She turned away almost instantly, refusing to miss the delicious aroma of the piping hot coffee. She sipped on with an irritating sound, at least that was what he felt.

"Uh, abhi Bhi yeh chuski waali aadat Gayi nahi tumhaari?", He questioned, visibly disgusted.

By now, a slim layer of foam had carved its way onto the portion above her lips. In a jiffy, he lifted up his thumb and made a move to wipe it off, scarcely touching her lips.

She made a low grunting noise, realising what did her face look like as she licked it off with her long tongue.
Dev, further annoyed with her antics, started noiselessly drinking his coffee.

After the entire coffee fiasco wrapped up itself into the chilly vibes of the setting sun, he once again lost himself into gloominess. "Kya hum kabhi ek saath nahi reh payenge?", He reasoned dejectedly.
Sonakshi thought about for a bit and then pushed her finger into the soft mud of the park, to make a line. She repeated her action to make another stroke, beside the previous one. And when she felt that it's done, she brushed off the mud by shaking off her hands.

"Yeh lines dekh rahe ho? Ek saath hai, but mil nahi rahi ek doosre se"
Soon, realisation dawned upon him. This entire demonstration was of no help in the upliftment of his mood. Still, he looked considerably depressed, specially by those papers that she'd given him to approve. He sighed deeply, sometimes wondering that his life was severely complicated since birth or he'd messed it up all. Was he destined to live in doubt and suppression or his current status was the backlash of his own doings. Either wise, he'd little option. He was suffering from what can be widely termed as a thought disorder. In simple words, inability to reason out a situation and find a solution to the circumstantial problem. Hence, he found solace in succumbing himself truly to the girl seated right beside him. He wasn't even sure how important she was and if she herself knew her own worth. He'd realised this off late that the mighty Mr. Dev Dixit could do nothing, save a few business deals, without the competent Dr. Sonakshi Bose.

"Accha chalo yeh imli toffee lo", she offered him a two rupee bite to lighten up his mood. Sure enough, he took it and soon, a mild, minimal smile appeared on his grim looking face. Sonakshi wasn't sure if necessary really smiling or just that he wasn't tensed. Whatever it be, a victorious smile resonated from her own face.

"Mood sudhaarne aata Hai you bigaadti kyun ho?", He taunted.
"Uh huh. Bigaadne mein tension nahi kyunki sudhaarne aata Hai", she giggled.

The barely visible smile shrunk back into itself in no time.

"Accha toh phir Suha ko Dixit Mansion Mein bhej doon, for a week?", She made a last attempt.

Fueling her meaty offer, she lightly clutched his arm and rested her cheek on his flattened shoulder.

"Ho sake toh Suha ki mummy ko bhi bhej dena", He told her. Bitter memories, which she usually didn't allow to let her happiness be hampered, hit back like a storm.
"Kaash bhej Sakti", she heaved, as a lone tear slipped down her cheek.

She got up, their meeting time had ended.

"Tumhe drop kar doon", he offered as everyday.
"Dev...", She sternly nodded her head in negative. The last time he'd done so, Sonakshi was severely reprimanded by the Boses as the neighbourhood couldn't stop talking about her character to mingle with her Ex.

"Theek Hai, paas waale nukkad tak toh chodne do", he pleaded.

She got into the seat beside him.
"Kal woh Sharmila aunty aayi thi", she started. His favourite part had begun, Sona's gossips, worth a million dollars. Not that he was a gossip monger but this proved to be something different than seeing the sulken faces in the meetings or the drowsy heads of his employees at the day's end.

"Hmm", he responded.

"Mere liye kisi Partho ka rishta lekar"
"Phir?", He quipped quickly, inquisitiveness taking the better of his soberly demeanour.

"Kuch nahi, Suha ne unko Dada ke do hafte puraane dahi bade khila diye. Bass phir, rishta pakka!", She replied.

There was an awkward moment of silence before both of them bursted out in laughter. It maybe pained, it maybe gloomy. But at least they had the relief of sharing it with each other. Such was their life, for each other but not together. It all sounded so blemish free and perfect, only if they had the opportunity to live with each other, under one roof.

Soon, the turning arrived where she got down.

"Kal aaogi naa Suha ko chodne?", he asked.
She nodded and turned away towards her house. And Dev Dixit still had a gleaming smile as he successfully got hold of another chance to meet her on a new day.

~*~

Ciao.


Edited by .Gryffindor. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Interesting start..
So they were married and separated..? N Soha is their daughter henaa...
Waiting to know what happened n what wiol happen...
Plzz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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An Interesting and Captivating Start

There was such pain so much of emptiness between both Dev and Sonakshi as if they both want to be together yet they know its difficult
it seems like both feel comfortable spending this little sad moments together maybe it helps them in a way
so Soha will be with her father in Dixit mansion for a week

waiting to see what happens next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this was very painful
SAATH hoke bhi they can't be together
they miss each other's touch and love
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Fab dear!👏
The story is heart-wrenching!😭
I could feel their pain of not being together through their convo..
And the way they were always there to calm each other!⭐️
And now Soha is gonna be with her dad!
Interesting it seems!😃
Pls update soon!😉
Edited by Cutiepie.sona - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: binuuu

Interesting start..

So they were married and separated..? N Soha is their daughter henaa...
Waiting to know what happened n what wiol happen...
Plzz continue soon


Yup, they're madly in love Exes 😆
Yes Soha is their daughter

Thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jade0001

An Interesting and Captivating Start

There was such pain so much of emptiness between both Dev and Sonakshi as if they both want to be together yet they know its difficult
it seems like both feel comfortable spending this little sad moments together maybe it helps them in a way
so Soha will be with her father in Dixit mansion for a week

waiting to see what happens next


Thank you so much! Glad you liked it 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Devakshilover

this was very painful
SAATH hoke bhi they can't be together
they miss each other's touch and love


So it is!
Thanks!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is interesting plz update soon..
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Sonakshi and Dev are the only true matches for the other. No other person and I repeat nobody can give them the solace they give each other.

I gave a shriek of glee when I knew you put up the first chapter. Believe me! And it was such a treat read.

What wouldn't I give to watch Dev and Sona have such a heart warming conversation. You fulfilled my wish!

Dev's a poor soul. His musings are totally justified. But he does have a confidant in Sona.

You make sure there is something worth remembering everytime you write something.


"Such was their life, for each other but not together. It all sounded so blemish free and perfect, only if they had the opportunity to live with each other, under one roof."

These lines were amazing. Had me smiling wistfully.

Your writing is very soothing. I need lots of tips from you.
😊 😊

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