Devakshi OS-Our Perfect Family

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srikala ganesh

@srikalaganesh

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

It's too good dear ...

Loved it ...

Kids sitting in the back seat of the car and DevAkshi in the front ...

Good good ...

Ending was V intersrting...

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AnanyaGhosh

@AnanyaGhosh

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Ek saath mein comment dungi.. Jaldi doo

Acha bol hi deti hu...

It was soo beautiful and sweet.. Loved both parts... Vry endearing and a family wala feel wala...

Loved devakshi bonding with soha and devansh..

And dusra wala jaldi doo

Edited by AnanyaGhosh - 8 years ago

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Ek saath mein comment dungi.. Jaldi doo

are poora hai behen

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Res for now ankuu...

Lil busy

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Sharica

@Sharica

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Both the parts were so heart warming...

As they said.."JUST PERFECT"

Such a lovely family...❤️

Keep writing...

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Since Ishwari and Radha are nowhere in this story, I have no trouble believing that this is how they would be if Dev and Sonakshi didn't have to put up with Ishwari and Radha's joint mental torture. Good OS.

I have a request though. Could you please not write in all caps? It's very hard to read.

EDITED: Finally Dev stood up for his wife and her honour. I wish Dev had done it for his wife in the show.

Edited by tia.o - 8 years ago

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: tia.o
Since Ishwari and Radha are nowhere in this story, I have no trouble believing that this is how they would be if Dev and Sonakshi didn't have to put up with Ishwari and Radha's joint mental torture. Good OS.
I have a request though. Could you please not write in all caps? It's very hard to read.

I know but since I typed on my mobile then the editing became so difficult and I messed up with the font
but didn't you read the second part where I clarified what happened that night when Ishwari showed the prenup to dev

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Shaun

@Jade0001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Absolutely Beautiful

Dev , Sonakshi and their twins live in DevAKshi Villa how cool isn't that

loved how Dev is so ready to take his family out on a picnic their happiness matter to him

and he seems to love pampering his family

I like how you also weaved in the prenup into the story and wow just wow loved the outcome of it

so that's basically the reason they live in their own world DevAKshi Villa and not with all those cunning people

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Jade0001

 Absolutely Beautiful 

Dev , Sonakshi and their twins live in DevAKshi Villa how cool isn't that 
loved how Dev is so ready to take his family out on a picnic their happiness matter to him 
and he seems to love pampering his family 
I like how you also weaved in the prenup into the story and wow just wow loved the outcome of it 
so that's basically the reason they live in their own world DevAKshi Villa and not with all those cunning people 

Thank you for such a detailed comment
we writers crave for them and yes now they live happily in their sweet home devakshi villa

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Devakshilover
And credit for this OS goes to Azeen Di,binuuu, aroo,mishti Di and meri pyaari Ananya ko for motivating me and enduring my constant WhatsApp messages
Love you all!

Luv u too ankuu🤗

All credits goes to uh idiot...

Superb duper os...i told u already...

I told u naa, u will rock on that ear plug part...u did it my girl👏👏

Haha...it was damn funny😆

Suhana n devansh completed their family...very lovely family...

Loved it very much ankuu...

N d last lart was really unexpected...

Dev's outburst,👏 neha deserved it..

I want neha back in serial,wanna give her proper reply from Sona's side...

Write more ankuu darling...