DevAkshi OS - untitled..link for 2nd & 3rd (cont.) pg5 - Page 2

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drmhp

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
It was lovely and emotional...
Very well written...

Thank you for the comments :-)

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Soumya21ag

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Posted: 8 years ago

very well written for first time

do write more😃

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sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

awesum
n their bickering about the ratio was just so cute

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Ashlyn

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Posted: 8 years ago

It is so nice! I loved the cctv used, it happened all amaziingly. I wanted to see Dev Soha bonding though but still... just loved it!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Its amazing. 👏

Devakshi's breakdown scene was beautifully described. And also Dev's reaction on knowing the truth. Loved it.

Wish something similar happens in the show.

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Sharica

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful OS dear...

Loved Devakshi's breakdown...I so want something like this happens in the show rather than the custody battle thing...

This is our Devakshi..you have described the scene and situation very nicely...❤️

Do write more...

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27JAAN

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Posted: 8 years ago

Loved it!!!

Hope to see the CCTV idea in the show too

Please continue with dev meeting his daughter and sona with cutepie golu.

Keep writing and you're indeed good at displaying the emotions through your words!

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

This is cute
Kitna accha laga padke
I cnt express it in words
Pls do continue
I want to read about how dev n sona share their painful journey of 7 yrs

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drmhp

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag
very well written for first time
do write more😃

thank you..

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drmhp

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
awesum
n their bickering about the ratio was just so cute

Thank u :-)

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