SS:Papa and his Pari(Dev-Soha Bonding)*COMPL* EPILOGUE pg124 26/3/2017 - Page 18

Originally posted by: vayu_prachi

Wow!!!
Amazing Aazen...how effortlessly could dev interact with Soha and develop such a beautiful bond!!
U have addressed my fears and thoughts precisely...even I feel Soha is over matured for her age and she doesn't deserve this...making her miss her childhood
Really beautifully written and I loved the part where Soha talks about her feelings...
Waiting for ur next part...

Aap kaun? 🤣
Taaruf deejiye... 😆

Tell me something, what happens to you when you are on the forum, you happen to miss an "E" in my name, when you write it correctly in the texts...
Bhai log, khaana waana laao bhai, humari Prachi didi ko bhook lagi hai... 🤣

Jokes apart, Getting straight to the comment, well, I think Dev is giving back Soha her childhood before it is completely lost, and not just her, but giving himself the childhood back that he lost it prematurely twice... Once when he really was a kid, then once when he was with his wife... And now third time...

I hope you get some time to read the next part too...
Thank you for dropping in. Your lovely words are highly appreciated... *Muah*

PS: I seriously hate it when my entire comment gets lost... Especially if that's a long one...
Pissed off to the highest order... 😡
Rewritten it... 😆

Originally posted by: krystle123

amazing and brilliant dear...👏👏

hats off to ur writing. i really wish cvs will show something like this.

pls continue sooon.

Thank you Krystle...
Next part is up on pages 20

Originally posted by: Dystopia

<font color="#990000">It was so cute and heart warming.</font>

<font color="#990000">Thank you for writing such a beautiful OS😊</font>

Its a multiple part story...
Not just one...
Another part is up...

Both the parts are really beautiful..pls PM me wen the next update is up😃..Keep Writing👍🏼

Originally posted by: ashlyn12

Just loved this! Continue soon!

Thank you... Next part is up on page 20

Originally posted by: Jade0001

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Such a Beautiful start </font>

<font face="Georgia" size="3">I just loved how this time Dev felt his little Golu was wrong in hurting someone and making him realize the same and the time he spends with Soha or his little Pari that alone was so beautiful her turmoil of loving her father yet she cannot do anything to oppose the happiness in her home </font>

Thank you so much Shaun.. Your appreciating words are a boon to me...
Thanks a ton...

Originally posted by: binuuu

Second part plshhh

Given... 😆

Originally posted by: Anjali333

@Bold

Ye to mujhe bhi puchna hai

How to manage to write so beautifully...😉

Upar wale ka karam, aur aap sab pyaare readers ka saath...
Sab ho jaata hai...