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monika

@M.soni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: srilotus

Ho sakta hai Dev ke saath har baar aesa hi hua ho😆
kabhi baat physical relationship tak nahi pahuchi ho...
lekin 7 years bina s** ke ...kaise Dev ne control kiya hoga😕

see agar practically and in real socho toh its not wrong if he has any type of relation..he is divorced now.😃

but by char of dev and devakshi k payar and hate game ko dekh kar apko lagta hai dev ne aik bari bhi kis ladki k sath physically involvement ki hogi.. i dont think so..uske dil dimagh se sona ka aik alfaz nahi nickalta aj bhi..agye kaise jaega

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monika

@M.soni

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: mishtoo
"Dating" means different things to different people, particularly across generations. At loveisrespect, we define "dating" as two people in an intimate relationship. The relationship may be sexual, but it does not have to be.

😆may be ..doesnt have to be whats that now..it mean no hard and fast rule na😆

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lavanya

@dlavanya

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: M.soni

😆ofcourse i would have joined that party tooo..wo toh main ne friday ko hi kahe diya tha jis din ye ladka sachi me physically relations prove kardega ..i will be the 1st one to murder him as a devakshi fan😃

ary kam se kam ye bol kar virtual murder to hojata ..is waqt to without watching episodes..on their own assumption people r bashing him..hud hai yar😭

Lol the moment he started saying " shruthi shruthi shruthi.. tujhe pata bhi nahi ki tum kitni beatiful ho. Jab mein ne tumhe pehle baar dekha .. tere baal, tere lips , tere aankhe etc " thats it .. i decided i cant believe any words he would probably say to sonakshi in future..

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monika

@M.soni

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: adaanaaz
frankly ab main toh thak gyi soch soch kar Dev ka physical relationship hai with all these girls or not . Toh ab maine accept kar lia hai ki hai Dev ka physical relationship with these girls and now I don't care becoz sona ko toh koi fark hi nhi pada Dev ki gf hai is baat se to mujhe kya. jab take show entertaining rahega I'll watch it .last night episode was good I liked shruti too she is funny

😆😆yes i my self enjoyed alot.😳😳shruti jaty jaty sach bol gayi k tum dono k bech jo aega pagal hojaega..😆sachi main fans pagal hogye hain in dono ko dekh kr..

and yes u r right dear..show hai enjoy karo and side pe karo😆

about physical relation to no mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi k he has crossed his limit..i need proper proof 😳😳chahye dialogue ya scene doesnt matter😆

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Nadia

@survika1111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Dekh yaar ek baat bolti hoon main Ki ye show Main chod dungi..ye Dev Bada faltu hai

sahi se bolta bhi nehi ki Kya Kya kia hai

sirf date Taak aake Ruk jata hai

Ladki ke sath Bed pe Beith Ta bhi Nehi

sun meri baat maat rona Naa..

Date Ke alag alag Matlab hai

Kuchoon ke liye sirf phisycal,kucho ke liye menataaly,kucho ke liye both

ab both toh tab hota Hoga Jab devAkshi jaise baat hongi

Bhai jis ladki Ke Pyar me dub Ke maar raha tha ..tha kya hai..usko pure gharme apne bedroom me akele paake sirf dance kiya date ke waqt aur jinse baat ki bhi interest nhi usse sidhaaa physical..digest nhi hota..upar se logo ko sahi prove bhi nhi karta😡

jitna dikhaya Na Usme toh 3 types of date ka Kuch bhi nhi hai..na woh mentally involve hai..Na physically or na Both

ab agar logo ko sirf Physicaliyty hi sochna hai toh unki marzi..sochne me toh paise nhi lagte naa.😆.

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monika

@M.soni

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: dlavanya

Lol the moment he started saying " shruthi shruthi shruthi.. tujhe pata bhi nahi ki tum kitni beatiful ho. Jab mein ne tumhe pehle baar dekha .. tere baal, tere lips , tere aankhe etc " thats it .. i decided i cant believe any words he would probably say to sonakshi in future..

😆😆😆mujhe to hasi arahi thi us pe..because shaheer is so bad in flirting😆😆teacher k sath gol gol flirt kiya tha😆

yar lips and akhein toh sona ko bhi kaha tha uus ne in saree sequence yaad karo😆 ladke ko 2 3 dialogues hi toh marne atty hn😆kaisa casnova hai yar kuch figure k lie bolta hai koi physicallly touch karta shruti ko .maza bhi atta😆aj bhi ladke ko sirf dialogues marne atty hn karna kuch nahi atta😆

kheir about believe to phely wo bole toh ab kuch..dono aik dosre ki jaan k dushman bane howae hn..mujhe toh doubt hai ye dono normal hokar baat bhi kaareingye ya nahi😆

Edited by M.soni - 8 years ago

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monika

@M.soni

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy
Yaar soni ab to mujhe bhi janna hai ki dating mein actually karte kya hai
Meti kismat mein to nahi hai kisi ko date karna but jisne bhi kiya ho kindly explain
Yeh dating dating kya hai

😆😆😆same here dear..meri bhi phuti hoi qismat hai yar.😕na bf,na dating.na romance.na casual relation..na time pass dating wala koi friend😆bus padhi kar li..ab job karo and shadi karo😆😆

is dating casual relation ka pata karna parega yar😭bade kaam ka lagta hai 😆

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monika

@M.soni

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: survika1111
Dekh yaar ek baat bolti hoon main Ki ye show Main chod dungi..ye Dev Bada faltu hai

sahi se bolta bhi nehi ki Kya Kya kia hai

sirf date Taak aake Ruk jata hai

Ladki ke sath Bed pe Beith Ta bhi Nehi

sun meri baat maat rona Naa..

Date Ke alag alag Matlab hai

Kuchoon ke liye sirf phisycal,kucho ke liye menataaly,kucho ke liye both

ab both toh tab hota Hoga Jab devAkshi jaise baat hongi

Bhai jis ladki Ke Pyar me dub Ke maar raha tha ..tha kya hai..usko pure gharme apne bedroom me akele paake sirf dance kiya date ke waqt aur jinse baat ki bhi interest nhi usse sidhaaa physical..digest nhi hota..upar se logo ko sahi prove bhi nhi karta😡

jitna dikhaya Na Usme toh 3 types of date ka Kuch bhi nhi hai..na woh mentally involve hai..Na physically or na Both

ab agar logo ko sirf Physicaliyty hi sochna hai toh unki marzi..sochne me toh paise nhi lagte naa.😆.

thank u dear for explaining me date..😃

haan yar dev waqai faltu hogya hai kuch karta hi nahi girls k sath..😡ye kaise ajeeb sa casnova rapist hai 😡jis ne sirf ladki ko dialogues mare eyes and hairs pe...body ko kahein touch bhi nahi kiya and nickal diyahud hoti hai faltupane ki

yaa u r right..apne real gf ko toh shadi se phely kiss tak nahi kiya😡..pheli date wo bhi ghar me..😡us me bhhi dialogues and dance kar k agya

is se tab bhi kuch nahi howa tha..ab bhi kuch nahi hona😡😡