Love and Longing - new Devakshi SS

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi
After seeing last weeks episodes, an idea for an SS is kind of floating in my mind...

Do read the following and let me know if its worth continuing...

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Dr. Sonakshi Bose regained consciousness in a hospital in Kolkata and opened her eyes. Her whole body was aching and paining and yet she was excited. Opening her eyes fully she attempted to get up from the bed and asked her mother sitting on the chair next to be bed "Maa I want to hold my daughter !". Asha smiled and got up from the chair. Gently she picked up the sleeping infant from the crib next to the bed and placed her gently in Sona's hands. Sona meanwhile was sitting up and when she held her precious daughter in her hands for the first time, she couldn't control her tears.

She moved the cloth covering her baby's face and looked at her daughter's face carefully when suddenly she opened her eyes and yawned and looked at her mother again. Seeing her eyes Sona couldn't stop her tears and a few drops fell on her child in her hands. The baby's eyes were just like Dev's - big and brown. The eyes which always reflected his state of mind even when he didn't have words to express them... light brown when calm, dark brown when aroused and filled with desire and a muddy coffee brown when angry. Sona was always fascinated with his eyes...Sona hugged her daughter and cried for all the things that could have been possible between Dev and her. She said softly "I am sorry my child that I was not good enough for your father to have been here today. He should have been there with us today. But it does not matter anymore. I am there for you as long as I breathe".

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Waiting for the feedback.

Love and Cheers

Asha




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Jade0001 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A Lovely OS

I hope we do get a flashback too of the moments with baby Suhana
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing. Please do continue. Would love to read it. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so damn beautiful and hear touching Asha... 😭 Do continue.👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so heart touching I love the way you bring out the emotions in your stories update soon eagerly waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was wonderful...
Pls cont soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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its wonderful
plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's really beautiful...
Plz continue 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing start .. I really hope this is the timeframe when they meet again.. I understand that this 1 year leap is tough on TV because of child actors.. but in a fiction , would love to read further!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful start I must say Asha di!😳😳
Pls continue soon!
And don't be late this tym in posting ur updates!😉

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