Devakshi ff: Waqt Part 1 Pg3 Updated 18/1/17

prologue

A small house in tht outskirts of delhi with practically no poplulatin

Dev comes in the room n talks
D- hey jaan i am so sry i am late woh i went to d mall...u knw wht i met a lil gurl she was so cute n pta hai hai we colided bt woh manne ko tyar nahi thi ki it was her fault n called me mr obhodro bt she was such a cutie pie yaad hai hum bhi aise hi mille tha ... when i saw her i thought ki if we hv a daughter woh bhi aise hi hoti choti si sona.. oho i knw u wanted tiny mr obhodro bt humesha u will nt win... acha leave all this u wht i felt a weird connect towards her...shayd main zyada soch raha hoon ... i am really tired vhalo main fresh ho kar aata hoon... n hey i love u

Dev was talkin to a pic behind a big swing in the room which was brightly n had was painted i a mix of orange n white with pics all over d place

Ps- this is my version of d after leap story...i really wanted d swing in his room bt i guess its nt happenin in d serial...its kinda emotional
Pps: i hope i can make thru it

Very nice prologue...

Superb start...

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Nice prologue dear
Continue

Thnxxx so much...will try n. Update soonish

Originally posted by: M.soni

nice dear..do continoue:-)

Thnxxx
Will try n update soon

Originally posted by: srilotus

emotional prologue.

continue soon :)

Ya its goin yo be an emotional journey i hope i can write it n will try n ipdate soon

Originally posted by: Mariumharis

nice prologue.. continue soon..

Thnxxx
Will try and update soon

Originally posted by: Sharica

Very nice prologue...

You know what..I think Dev will definetely have something like this in the show. He will have a room filled with Sona's pics, their marriage pics, swing and infact I think he will have that mangalsutra as well...

Their love can't die...

Please continue...waiting...

Thnxxx so much... i really really want this to happen i am really hoping this whole casanova thingy is a fake up n stuff so makin a story out of it...its goin to be emotional n i wld be super happy tht they something like this in d show n all
N thnxxx for d mangalsutra idea i will incorporate it in d story as well
If u hv any ideas or wishes plzzz let me knw so d i can incorporate them as well if possoble
Will try and update soon n

Originally posted by: binuuu

Superb start...

Plzz continue soon... :)

Thnxxx
Will try and update soon

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

Nice

Plz continue

Thnxxx
Will try and update soon