FF: Hum Tumhare Hain Sanam *Completed* EPILOGUE pg:103 13/02/2017

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sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Oh! By the way every fic of mine, you reply me twice... So I look forward to it...
Thank you so much... Aap toh twice kya, thrice and four times reply karo...😃

i never noticed bfr ki i generally reply twice on ur thread 😆

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sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Ok, another spoiler for you...😆
Yes, it will be sad... But not as bad as the second update...
Things will improve...
It will depend on you if you derive pleasure out of it, or sit there blowing your nose with a tissue after crying...😆

i ll cry n still derive pleasure out of it 😆

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sa1234B

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Such a emotional & heartwrenching chapter...but written soo beautifully

thanks for very quick update...update soon

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Dr Neelima Menon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Hey loved ur updatev; so emotional hope dev sona unite jaldi , loved d way u portrayed sona s helplessness, tat was too gud , waiting for the next part!!

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Sharica

No worries dear...Don't stress yourself too much...take proper rest..

We can wait..Update whenever you feel fresh and relaxed...

Yeah! I feel fine now...

Whooping and dancing right now because I got the exact song, the lyrics which fit into my next chapter...

I was seriously like, main sochti bhi toh itna perfect song nahi dhoondh paati, jo mujhe meri song library mein randomly mil gaya...

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sowiee

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
High five! I too can't take this triangle track... But trust me, it won't be that bad...
I am really thankful to you for not giving up on my story...
I can tell you, you won't regret reading this story.
This one is a bit challenge for me... But that's the fun no... 😉

On a closing note, I am really humbled yaar that you trusted my writing to read what you don't like reading... Thank you from the bottom of my heart...👏

Haha. U already won in the challenge... And thanks to u for such a beautiful writings

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
waitung for d updates ..
Well i watched qh for asad i loved him more dan i ever loved zoya ...dunno y ...n literally stopped watching it after sept ..
Love confession of kabir was out of dis qorld ...i love u more dan i love myself ...a simple statement dat held too many meanings to it ...n d best part was kabir kept his words till d last epi ...
N no comparisions dev had made a beautiful confession to sona ...simple n straight ...but d only thing dat bothers me is dev's tendency to break his promisws as far as sona is concerned ...
I know i ll love d updates ..plz dont make us wait long

I watched QH until Asad and Zoya. Left post leap... I loved Zoya a lot- "Allah Miyaan! What's wrong with you Mr.Khan?😆"

Kabir's confession... Oh my God! Felt like a rock broke into pieces with the flow of the river...

I wrote a poem kind of thing after that... Copy pasting the post here...😆

Hola Folks!

I'm on a roll today!😆

Anyways, here's a soulful poem I wrote right now on the Friday confession... The words were just lingering so much in my mind, I couldn't resist this...

To help you guys with this let me tell you, this starts from where Kabir says- "Uss din party mein tumne meri taareef mein bohot kuch kaha tha lekin ek baat tum kehna bhool gayi jo mere baare mein koi nahi jaanta..."

My poem starts from there until the confession... He had walked 11 steps towards Ananya...

And apologies to those who do not understand Hindi...

Here we go...

Yeh tere-mere beech 11 kadmon ke faasle,

Tayy aaj nahi toh kabhi na hote.

Tu kahin aur chali jaati,

Ek jaan hokar bhi humare Kaya' ek na hote.

(Metaphor of 2 bodies one soul used as the acronym of Kabir and Ananya)

Teri khaamoshi bhi tere pyaar ki gawaah hai,

Bohot pyaar barsa rahi meri bhi nigaah hain...

Na aaj teri zubaan kuch bol rahi hai,

Khaamosh toh aaj meri dhadkanein bhi nahi hain...

Tu gar na karti mujhpe aitbaar,

Khaayi se nikla ye dil mar jaata iss baar...

Yeh tere-mere beech 11 kadmon ke faasle,

Tayy aaj nahi toh kabhi na hote.

Tu kahin aur chali jaati,

Ek jaan hokar bhi humare Kaya' ek na hote.

Chuppi jo inn labon ne saadhi thi,

Aaj tere pyaar ne kuch yu todd di,

Ke dil mera cheer utha,

Aur rooh meri khaali ho gayi...

Apna sab kuch tum pe luta raha yu Kabir hai,

Tujhse baandh li maine pyaar ki zanjeer hai,

Chudaa ke bataa de mujhse ab tera ye daaman,

Tere dil par chapi mere pyaar ki har lakeer hai...

Yeh tere-mere beech 11 kadmon ke faasle,

Tayy aaj nahi toh kabhi na hote.

Tu kahin aur chali jaati,

Ek jaan hokar bhi humare Kaya' ek na hote.

Ye saansein ab se tumhare naam,

Tumse hi ab meri pehchaan,

Kabir se Ananya yu judd si gayi hai,

Jis tarah dil se ye paighaam.

Tum meri ho, meri hi rehna,

Itna sa mauka mujhe tum dena,

Karta hoon main aaj izhaar-e-mohabbat,

Tumhe bhi mujhse hai ishq toh kehna.

Tere mere beech ke ye 11 kadam aaj chal toh liye,

Hum aur tum ek dusre ke aaj ho toh liye,

Na aaye kuch tere mere darmiyaan,

Do se bani ye KAYA aaj ek ban toh liye!!!

I agree on this that Kabir was true to his words till the end... He never stopped loving her even when she broke up with him... He did all he said, nothing over the top... He was one flawed male character that I love the most...❤️

As to Dev's confession... I tell you this, I had watched the episodes in reverse order from the 94th episode till the 70th episode... I had absolutely no idea about this show, so I ofcourse watched the confession scene without any prejudice... But Dev's words- "I love you as a man loves a woman..."

I swear I had goosbumps all over my hands and neck when I heard it... They were intensely passionate words...☺️

He will stand by his promises, I feel, it was his character build up... He will now not leave Sona's side, after this infertility thing...

As to the new update, I think, new one coming this night... Song selected...😃

Edited by Aazeen02 - 8 years ago

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: star.21
Aaazzzennn👏👏
Lovelyyy writingg dear!❤️

You brought in Sona's emotions soo well...how with every step she was taking towards Rithwik and happiness of her family she was distancing herself from her own happiness- her Dev!😭
How she could not even fullfil her own promise at that cost😭

The last part of my losst Dev baabu😭💔

Waiting eagerlly for the next updates!! Be it emotional or not..I am lovving it!😃❤️

Hey! What's your name yaara?

Thanks a lot dear...

And thank u so much for being there for my fiction, reading it at any cost.

Thanks a lot!😃