FF: Hum Tumhare Hain Sanam *Completed* EPILOGUE pg:103 13/02/2017 - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: LoveAnushka

Ye kya kiya tune Aazeen Di?
Sona Ritwik ki shaadi...
BTW Kya Likha hai...
I'm all tears...First chapter in which it was beautifully depicted breakup of DevAkshi...Loved it!
Next chapter was so unexpected!!!
I mean how could you marry Sona & Ritwik...It was disheartening to see Dev all broken!
Cant see DevAkshi like this...
Hope you bring some beautiful moments of DevAkshi and break all ties of RoNa!
When we'll get a light and happy update?
Post next chappy soon!
And as usual U nailed it all, fan of your writing!!!

Love,
Anushka

Hahahaha...🤣
Mujhse aise updates ki ummeed nahi thi na kisi ko?
Zor ka jhatka laga diya tum sabko...😆

Maine Ritwick and Sona ki shaadi aise karwa di, kyuki my story depends upon it...
Aisa samajh lo, main unn sab ki shikaayat door kar rahi hoon jinko separation track ke final execution se takleef thi...😉
Thoda aur dekhna padega devakshi ko dukh mein...
Phir dekhte hain how things shape up...😉
Things will start getting better from next update only, but still sadness will be there...
Next chapter will come sometime later yaar...
As it is I am sleep deprived, my mom is being angry that all I do is just write these fictions, and to plus it, I have some shoulder pain... I want to give myself some rest before writing the next part.

Tum meri jabra fan ban gayi? Thank you baby!🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
Sabko reply ho gaye/?
Chalo then I will retire as well...

I have given back to back two updates...

Now I am hell sleepy... Good night!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: 27JAAN

Thanks:)

Pls continue!
Very interesting

Thank you for reading...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Pehle toh thank you... Ye bataane ke liye ki maine aapka dil todd doya...😆

Maine kaha tha na, main iss update mein bohot dil todungi... See...😆😆
Sab chaahte they ki Ritwick and Sonakshi ki shaadi na ho, par meri story based toh usi point pe hain ki Ritakshi ki shaadi ho... So maine kara di...😆😆

As to Sonakshi's emotions portrayed, I think unconsciously I am writing from alternating point of views... First update was from Dev's pov, second update was from Sonakshi's pov... Next one may be from a neutral pov...😆

Aap sach mein royin? I mean was the story really effective enough to make people cry?
Aapki jaan le loongi toh mere fics pe itne pyaare pyaare comments kaun dega?😉😆

Next update, dekhte hain kab likhti hoon... For today, I am hell tired, and I have no energy left to sit and write for another two-three hours at stretch...

I may give the update soon, depending upon how much time I get to write...😃


No worries dear...Don't stress yourself too much...take proper rest..

We can wait..Update whenever you feel fresh and relaxed...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

You've seen reporters, did you catch up with the confession scene?

Is it only me or someone else thinks it too that the love confession that Kabir did to Ananya was by far the most beautiful and the best confession till date ?
Though I loved the simple love confession by Dev to sonakshi, I still love Kabir and Ananya confession the most.

You may have seen me just on my fics on qh forum, because I never participated in discussions there... That show was one illogical stuff beyond my head. Except for Asad and Zoya, that show was a torture!😆

Chalo phir, aapke sadist counterpart ke liye treats aa rahi hain in the coming chapters... You may love it actually!😃

waitung for d updates ..
Well i watched qh for asad i loved him more dan i ever loved zoya ...dunno y ...n literally stopped watching it after sept ..
Love confession of kabir was out of dis qorld ...i love u more dan i love myself ...a simple statement dat held too many meanings to it ...n d best part was kabir kept his words till d last epi ...
N no comparisions dev had made a beautiful confession to sona ...simple n straight ...but d only thing dat bothers me is dev's tendency to break his promisws as far as sona is concerned ...
I know i ll love d updates ..plz dont make us wait long
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
Aaazzzennn👏👏
Lovelyyy writingg dear!❤️

You brought in Sona's emotions soo well...how with every step she was taking towards Rithwik and happiness of her family she was distancing herself from her own happiness- her Dev!😭
How she could not even fullfil her own promise at that cost😭

The last part of my losst Dev baabu😭💔

Waiting eagerlly for the next updates!! Be it emotional or not..I am lovving it!😃❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Awww...🤗

Bachhi, I told you already this one is a an emotional story...😳

Next update ke liye bhi tissues rakh lo beta... Par khush hogi padhke next sad update...
Aisa mujhe lagta hai...😃

Okay i'm waiting for next update😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
Nice start dear
Loved it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
Congratulations on your story

A Fantastic Start

Dev breaking off with Sonakshi because that's his only choice according to him while she wanted him to fight for them at least not take a decision while his mother is in hospital but decision was made and he let her go
yes he loves her but failed in his promises now she is engaged and he feels betrayed but again she had no choice she is doing it for her family
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Thank you dear... What's your name?

I too was remembering Devakshi ki shaadi only...
It was so tough to write for me as well...
Sonakshi always knew, she could not move on no matter how much she pretended. She was doing it only for her parents... She had no intention engaging otherwise...
Ab jo hoga achha hi hoga...😃

Your writing gave a clear picture of Sonakshi's thoughts which i somehow felt was missing in the show.
N I am Charu. 😊

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