OS: Sapna Jahan *My version of current track* |Ansh is back| - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful dear...Thanks for writing this capturing all emotions so beautifully...
I became a mother almost 3 mnths back and had infertility issues...when we got the positive reports, we had same feelings that Dev had...we were also in denial mode...like is the report right...i called up the lab twice to check if the reports are ready and the person there assured me that he will give me a call to let me knw the results. He actually called up and congratulated me..i was still like are you serious...My husband was not there that day with me as his aunt passed away. I told him over the call and i can still remember his voice, eyes filled with tears and happiness in his voice. I was able to imagine his face...

My pregnancy was not an easy one, had complications...I was carrying twins but at the end of 1st trimester got to knw that one of the baby is not growing normally so had to abort. Then again i got into a mode where I thought if i would be able to carry my second baby or not...We prayed to God to be help us getting through this pregnancy and to keep our child healthy...
That was not enough and in the 5th month I was advised that my body is not retaining fluids and i was advised complete bed rest or else i will be admitted in hospital..that phase passed and then I has high BP as i entered my 3rd trimester...and finally i delivered my baby in 37th week...

So this OS was like I was reading my own story... Mu husband do believe in God but not in doing some upays as we were told by astrologers. My mom asked him to do and he did that for us and our baby without fail...

Thanks Aazeen forbringing back those memories and the love that we relived during that phase...

I never shared my sufferings with anyone but in this forum I do...

Sorry it got too long...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's beautiful...
Outstanding.

Really.. would feel each and every emotion dev felt. How nice it would be if they showed something like this .. no probs.. but how do u manage to write such an awesome stories???

Really thankful to u for such an awesome story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i so wish something like this happen in the show...

beautiful writing... keep writing more... i love your work👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Marvelous is an understatement Aazeen. I haven't even noticed when tears started flowing from my eyes. When ever i read your work, i miss Sujata and her writing a little more. Keep writing more dear and Thank you for this brilliant piece of writing where i can see my beloved Mr. Obhodro & Mrs. Khargosh who are missing in the show now a days.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
I Loved It! It Was Beautiful ... As Usual! Coz Aap Jo Bhi OS Likhte Ho DevAkshi Pe It Is Always Beautiful! You Write Beautifully! I Just Loved It Yaar! I Have No Words To Describe My Feelings! 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome dear... its really beautiful os. u nailed it 👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So beautifully written ...I wish the makers had shown something of this sort ...it would have been so nice...I loved it ...I loved it ...I loved it !!👍🏼⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aazeen...
I have on words to express my emotions...
I had to wait to get hold on myself...
With each word fresh tears finding their way...
U r best in making us cry..
Keep giving more...
Still not able to write...
Will come back once I feel good..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: randommusings

Very beautiful and emotional...loved Dev in this one. All d pain n anxiety he had to go through alone was commendable. Good to read something positive after so long.

Hi Abi di...😃
Thank you so much!
I actually wanted to write something positive.
I am not getting great vibes from the show, lest they bring some positivity.
So why not write, what we all heart in heart wanted to happen.
We all wanted to pray along with Dev thinking, Hey Bhagwaan, Ya Allah, Oh Jesus, please Dev ki baat maan leejiye, Let his words be true...
We all wanted that... Atleast I wanted it.
And so it came.
I am glad you liked it.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

This was such a priceless, stunning and heartwarming write up man. It is so surreal, specially cause you feel like you are watching it all and the pristine world became so real. I could feel the pain, the love and the worry as those beautiful lyrics hovered over throughout the coarse of the story. This piece will imprint some magic into whoever reads this, thank you so much for so much beauty. Loved it!!! ❤️

First of all your comment is priceless. A quick review tumbling out within minutes of posting the story, are always encouraging, and when there are considerable appreciative words more than a few adjectives, it feels honoured, great and lovely. So thank you so much!🤗
I am forever going to remember those lovely words you wrote that this story shall imprint in the minds. I feel humbled... Thank you very much!
It was a pleasure writing!😃

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