DevAkshi TS||Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho||Swing Romance||Chapter 3/page 9 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ketaki9narkhede

Bohot aacha hai

soo cute romance
waiting for precap

Thanks K2
I knew it you will love it😉
Will update today!

Love,
Anushka
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello guys, I know I didn't re-reply anyone as I was or actually I'm busy with my exams!
From today only my exams have started but I cant resist myself by posting the last part! I wrote it half remaining on Saturday when light had gone when I was studying and I had nothing do! So thought of writing this and complete it! I didn't had time on that day but today I'm posting with very much mehnat!
This is also late update but...forget it...Der aaye par durust aaye!
So are my SS readers update will be ready and I'll be posting that pretty soon just after this week! Usme toh aur late hoon main par kya karu my life doesn't allow me to come and chat her with my second home!!! Ok, Ok, Ok, Now I stop my blabber! Its your work that begins! I didn't brought too much love making scene and all as nowadays I'm in for writing teasing romance and shayad se teasing you all too😆

So, here by you go on reading and enjoying! Chapter 2 on page 6 as aadha song yahan par hai toh starting chapter 2 main thi, song ki whereas TS ki shurwaat toh 1st page se thi!😆

OK, So you go on for reading the last part of TS!😉

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Tumhe dekhte hi
Mar jaayenge
Yeh nahi tha socha

Never breaking the eye-lock where both just forget each other in there eyes and such expressful eyes of theirs which expresses every emotion through them, be it Dev or Sona...As she proceeded to get up slowly from his lap, carefully in order even making Dev stand up with her from the swing...They both were standing and then Sona started to moving backwards with Dev walking towards her...Dev still had is hands on her waist and Sona's hands on his chest...One step of hers backward and another step of him towards her...And this continued

Baahon mein teri, meri
Ye raat thehar jaaye
Tujhme hi kahin pe meri
Subah bhi guzar jaaye (x2)

Until and unless, Sona felt ending of her back hitting something like table...She quickly moved around due to her heavily shying...She held the table edge tightly with her hands as she had her back facing towards Dev...The table had some candles lit, artistic candles which were adding more glow to the already glowing face...Dev came closer to her and trapped her between his body and the table by keeping his hands on either side of her...She closed her eyes thinking that what she thought was to have fun at Swing but this Swing became the death of her as in her shying she pushed all candles that tumbled down which surely raged their desires ( BTW, if you have seen Wajah tum ho song from Hate story 3 so there is one scene in song where the heroine pushes all candles and the way the candles fall is spectacular, so its like that only!)...She didn't knew where her thoughts were wandering until she felt him...

Jis baat ka tujhko darr hai
Woh kar ke dikha dunga...

Siding her hair from one shoulder to another, he started placing wet kisses on her slender swan neck which only allured him more into her! She tilted her neck only to give him more access, she felt his hand holding her waist more tightly as Dev, not able to control more, turned her over with a force, and looked at her form in dim lights of candles and moonlight! Drinking in her beauty for last time, he crashed his lips on hers...Kissing her like anything, as he pulled her waist more closer and tilted his face by holding her by neck to deepen the kiss. She found her hand resting on his shoulder digging her nails while another found a way into his black soft hair...

Aise na mujhe tum dekho
Seene se laga lunga

Pulling out breathless, they kept their foreheads joined taking in deep breaths and calming themselves as Dev started kissing her once again this time slow and passionate, not like before which was rough one! He held her from waist uplifting her a little from ground, and made his way to bed, not breaking the kiss though. He placed her very slowly on bed and laid beside her calming their uneven breaths...And both looked at each other with such intensity that could burn them, each other into ashes...Passion could be seen so vivid...Sans of every tension, pain and stress had a medicine, and it was their love...Which could be seen going crazy, passionate, sensuous, lusting, losing in it and very importantly very, very, very...Loving!!!

Tumko main chura lunga tumse
Dil mein chhupa lunga

Dev coming on top of her little bit, still lied down by her side, resting his head on his elbow while another putting one lone strand of hair at back of her ear after which it moved tantalizingly from her neck only to rest on her abdomen unknown to him as she was lying on the cushion for her to be at his head level approx. as he said: Aisa na mujhe tum dekha mat karo as...uttering his next words very slowly...as you don't know that how you evoke raw emotions in me for you, Sonakshi!

Aise na mujhe tum dekho
Seene se laga lunga

As Sonakshi gasped at the slowness and seductiveness of his voice and how her name felt in his voice, she damn got lost in it losing her voice...As Sonakshi smiled at this and said making her hand combing his locks and massaging his shoulder: Nahi dekhoungi agar aap mujhe nahi dekhoge iss tarah...trailing her voice and started making circles on his chest with her nails, opening 2 more buttons with her hand with already opened 2 buttons which always makes her go crazy with peek a-boo of his chest, as she continued, isme meri galti nahi ki agar main aapme who raw emotions jagati hoon as...sensuously falling her next words...even you do to me!

Tumko main chura lunga tumse
Dil mein chhupa lunga

As Dev came above her little bit, pinning her down, saying: Then let me show you some of it! As he started giving her kisses on her collar bone as she arched her back which made him take his hand at the back opening only one dori of blouse as it loosened it's hold on her shoulders which made it easy for him to pull the sleeves from her shoulders...continuing to give kisses as her hand pulled him more into her through his hair...as she felt him bite her shoulder and giving love bites all over it...she hissed in pain and pleasure both while even she ensured she kissed him on his neck sometimes!!!

As they heard a chaos down and knew that everyone were back from respective places as Sona threw her head back at pillow sighing and Dev rested his head on her naked shoulder tiredly huffing with continuous kissing her... She got up from beneath him and stood up stretching her arms to get rid of fatigue that took over her as she felt him taking her in his masculine arms as he rested his chin on her still naked shoulder but little bit covered due to pulled over blouse...As he said: Inn sab ko abhi aana tha, I was so enjoying this moment aur main nahi chahaata tha that it ends but...tch! Damn them!

As Sonakshi chuckled at him who was cribbing like baby...As she turned over and buttoned up his shirt while saying: main bhi nahi chahaati thi but, don't worry we can continue anytime. Accha now go aur apna huliya thik karo and let me change into my first clothes...And then fatafat help me in getting this candles and all down, OK?

Dev slowly said: OK, But raat ko phirse continue karenge, OK?

Sonakshi: OK baba, Now let me change...She tried getting out of his arms but he held her as he had mischievous smile, she gave him a stare to leave her...

Dev starting with all mischief: Would you mind Mrs.Dixit if I help you with changing and winked at her! While she gave him an impossible look and pushed him on bed and said: Yes Mr. Dixit, I would mind!

As she got in restroom for changing while Dev laughed shouted behind her I Love You My Khargosh! As Sona smiled over this...Very Peaceful smile etched on their face...

END OF TS||AISE NA MUJHE TUM DEKHO||SWING ROMANCE


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So, I hope you liked the last part...Please comment, and like and constructive criticism is welcome!
OK after what happened in recent 2-3 episodes, I'm still in gaga land or in fact everyone are...Isiliye toh profile pic bhi change kar diya😉


Isse kehte hai time pass yani TP karna! Its bad I know but not that much yaar😆!!!
So, I would like to tell you, ki hua toh mera exms iss week khatam ho jane ke baad, I will post SS chapter and then I'm thinking of writing an OS maybe, Love Bites is its name...Naam aur plot soch kar rakha hai, just I cant wait to pen down! Like always that will be also naughty! But warning you have to wait till my exams, Wish me luck😊!
OK now bye, I have to do taratari with my studies, So Bye and I love you all, See you soon with how you all liked my last chapter of TS!!!
Hope it was up to your expectations!!!

Love,
Anushka

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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
That was a good one and ya dont ignore ur exams
BTW the chapter was good
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Awesome dear.
Best of luck for your exams.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Amazing chapter..
Best of luck for your exams...!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
Awesome update Anu..😃
Best of luck for ur exams
thanks for the pm
will wait for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Wonderful update.👏loved it...
Soo romantic & sweet as well...
All the best for ur exam...waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Awesome intensity chapter... All d best fr ur exams.
And update soon d ss and also d os
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Loved ur update anu
Lekin yeh kya????padhai ke beech mein update?????
Padhai kaun karega????
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
Loveddd ittt!
Bohot hi achha tha!

You write really well!

Mazaa aa gaya!

All the best for your exams! Mera kal last hai!

Phir Om shanti om!😆

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