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Holla Peeps ! I m Annie (u can call me Jenn too) ,new to the forum n the fandom as well , I m watchng KRPKAB snce last 2 week n complted all the episodes , I usually write Fictions so thought of writing it on DevAkshi ...Hope u like it
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She was extremely happy ! After all her Man had returned home after 3 long days ! She was very happy for him , the meeting for which he went to Australia for 3 days leaving his family was a huge success

In order to celebrate such a big success , The Dixits planned to throw a big party which included Near n Dear n ofcourse Dev's clients
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It was 8 in the morning n The house was already in a hustle n bustle afterall the party was a big one , n big things need big preparations ,
Neha n Ranveer arrived early so as to help the Dixits
Nikki - Rhea as usual were discussing abt their party outitfs
Ranveer was guideing the decorators with Mamaji
While Garib ki Beti was helping Ishwari (which she was not)
Vikky was sitting as usual jobless , while Sonakshi was making Shondaesh (Dev's fav dish )
Neha and Ishwari were making Dev's fav halwa and the rest of the dishes
While Mr.Dixit who was hell tired was still sleeping (after all he returned home late last night )
He was sleeping while cuddling the love of their life - Their Deaksh

-INTRODUCING DEAKSH DIXIT -

He is a 3 n a half year old who was spoilt by everyone in the family !
He - Deaksh was a complete combination of Dev n Sonakshi
Basically he was Dev's miniature , he had everythng of Dev's except for his eyes which ofcourse were of his Mom's , he had his Mom's nature n Dad's anger , He never liked anyone kissing or hugging him except for his Parents

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11A.M.

Sonakshi goes to her room taking milk for her 2 boys, she places the tray by their bedside n see the duo sleeping having the same frown in their sleep ,
she lovingly runs her hand in Dev's messy hair

Dev- *holds her hand*
Sona- aap jaage hue hai !
Dev - mein soya hi kab tha ? *bringsherclose*
Sona- Dev I think , Hum yaha akele nhi ...yaha koi teesra bhi haii
Dev- aur wo teesra koi aur nhi hamara Deaksh hai ! *brings her even more closer*
Sona - *huskyvoice* Dev , jaane dijiye na pls , mujhe bohot kaam hai
Dev - *huskyvoice* pehle meri Good Morning kissy ,Mrs.Dixit
Sona - *blushes*
Deaksh - Goon Norning (Good Mrning)
They be very close just then someone who was sleeping ,woke up breaking their eye lock n closeness
Sona - Good Mrning mere Deku
Dev - *looks at Sona*
Deaksh - Maa *gets up and hugs her and sits on her lap*,humari Good Morning kiss ?
Dev - Haan Haan , Mrs.Dixit humari GM kiss ! Remember the rule ryt ?

-Flashback-
Deaksh - Maa , uthne ke baad aur sone se pehle aap humein ek Kisshi degi ! Okay ?
Dev - what about me , Deaksh ?
Deaksh - *thinks while keeping his ting fore finger on his chin* Theek hai ! To Maa apko humein aur Baba ko ek kisshi deni padegi
Sona - *nods*
-Flashback Ends-

Sona - tum to na bilkul apne Baba ki tarah ho !
Deaksh - Maa , jaldi !!
Sona - *kisses Deaksh on his soft cheek*
Deaksh - *kisses sona back*
Dev - chalo Deaksh , close ur eyes , Abh Baba ki Baari
Sona - *widens her eyes* Dev !
Deaksh - Okay Baba *Obediently ,keeps those small hands on his eyes*
Dev - *holds Sona's hand,pulls it closer*
Sona- *whispers* Dev , kya karre ho , Deaksh yahi hai !
Dev - tum de rhi ho ya , Deaksh ko bolu ki uski Pyaari Maa rule thod rhi hai
Sona - Dev !
Dev - Sonakshi *puppyface*
Sona - *kisses on his cheek*
Dev -*kisses her back*
Deaksh - hogaya ?
Sona - *blushing* hmm , chalo abh ,dono utho ...mujhe bohot kaam hai !
Dev - Deaksh *winks*
Deaksh - *understands the indication* Okay Baba ! *Gets up ,closes the door n comes back*
Dev n Deaksh exchange those mischievious look leaving a scared Sonakshi !
Sona - kya ?! Pls mujhe bohot kaam hai !
Dev n Deaksh slowly moving towards Sona n start tickling her
Sona - DEVV !!! DEAKSH !! *LAUGHING*
Yet Dev n Deaksh continued their tickling till Sona was out of her breadth
Sona - Bas ! Bas *coughs*
Dev - Sona !... *gives her water*
Deaksh - Sorry Maa
Dev n Deaksh *holds their ears with their hands*
Sona - hadd hoti hai mazak ki ! Abh aap dono ko saza milegi ! jaaiye mujhe aap dono se baat nhi karni !
Dev rests his head on Sona's lap while the other side was occupied by Deaksh
Dev n Deaksh
Dev -*hold Sona's left ear while Deaksh holds the right one*
D n D - Sorry !
Sona - *melts* *smiles* Okay Okay ! Chalo abh ready hona nhi hai , Maa Baba aane hi waale honge ,
D n D - *exchange tht smile with each other*
Sona - abh kya ?!
Dev kisses Sona on her Left cheek while Deaksh kisses on her Right
Sona - *giggles* Deaksh chalo utho , Nai-Nai (bath) karni hai na
Deaksh - Yayy !
Dev - *gets close to Sona* *whispers* mujhe bhi Nai-Nai karni hai Mrs.Dixit , Humein bhi Nilhade na pls
Sona - *blushes* Good !! To aaj Baba , Deaksh ko Nai-Nai karainge okay !
Deaksh - Okay
Dev - Noo Ms.Bose U cant do this !
Sona - *gets up* *starts leaving* Its Mrs.Dixit for U *winks*

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Ishwari - Pooja ka samay ho raha hai !! Hai bhagwaan abhi tak kuch tayyari nhi huii hai
Mamaji- Ishwari sab to hogaya hai bas ek baar Dev aajaye
GKB - Waise JiJi aapka ladla sood ,nazar nahi aara ?
Ishwari - *giggles* Sona abhi jaane hi waali hai usse tayyar karne , bas aata hi hoga

-DevAkshi Room-

Dev N Deaksh in their Bath robes
Deaksh - Maa !! MAA !! MAAA
Sona - Dekuu ! Kya hua baby ?? Itna kyun chilla rahe ho ? Dev kya hua ? Aur aaplog abhi taiyyar nhi !!
Dev - Umm pata nahi
Deaksh - Humein kal se aap hi Nai-Nai karingi , humein nhi pata !
Sona - kyun kya hua ? Baba ne kuch kiya kya ?
Deaksh - *looks at dev*
Dev- *signals him NOT to say*
Deaksh- Baba , mere aankho pe soap lagake mujhe darra rhe the *srts cring*
Sona - Olle mela baba *picks him up* ro mat mein aapke Baba ko khoob datungi okay ?
Deaksh - Okay
Sona - chalo utho , kapde pehnna hai na ,
While Dev comes out of the washroom wearing a creme kurta ,Sona Gets Deaksh's clothes , makes him wear those , wipes his hair n combs it !
Sona - Perfect !! *kisses him*
Deaksh - *kisses her back*
Nikki - Sona Bhabhi , Wo Maa ... Wow , Deaksh *pulls his cheeks* kitna cute lag raha hai ye , Sona Bhabhi aur Bhaiyya aap ko Maa bula rhi hai jaldi aaye , aur Deaksh tum to chalo mere saath *picks him *
Sona - Deaksh, no Masti Baby !
Deaksh - *shakes his head-Yes*
Sona - Dev ,jaldi aaayi mein neeche jaa rhi hoon
Dev - * runs n closes the door n locks it * *keeps his hands on her waist ,pulling her closer*
Sona - *softly* Dev
Dev - *husky voice* 3 din tumhare bina tha , wo 3 din ke GM kisses aur GN kisses abhi pending hai Mrs.Dixit
Sona - *blushes*
Dev - aaj raat , Deaksh ko Maa ya Rhea ke room mein sula dijiye , aap se kuch baatein karni hai aur rule nhi follow karne ke liye saza bhi deni hai *smirks*
Sona - *turns tomato red*
Dev - *burries his face in her neck ,kissing it slowly*

-K N O C K - K N O C K -

Neha - Sona Bhabhi aap ke Ghar Waale aagaye hai , aapko bula rahe hai , aur Bhaiyya aapko bhi ...jaldi aayiye
Sona - *laughs* chaliye bulawa agaya !
Dev - uff ye Be-Reham Duniya !
Downstairs
Everyone was already seated for the Puja
(Eventhough Dev didnt believed in all these Puja stuff , he did it only for his Mom n Wife as they believed in it)
GKB - Haye haye , aur kitni daerr lagaye ga Dev ! Jaldi aana !
Deaksh *sitting in Elena's lap* - Eli Mashi , Maa ..Baba ko dhant rhi hai *giggles*
Elena - *confused* tumhe kaise pata ?
Deaksh - *narrates her the whole post-bath scene*
Elena - *giggles* *thinks abt how her sister can scold Dev n gets a bit red*
Dev n Sonakshi comes down the stairs
The Puja gets started , and Deaksh falls asleep *LOL*
An Hour later , the Puja gets over , everyone takes the prasad n Dev puts Deaksh on a sofa

-Hall-
Everyone having a talk abt tonight's celebration

Deaksh- *the moment he wakes up-screams*Juja(puja) khatam hogayi ??!! humara Prasad ?? Maa , Dadi ! MAAA !
Everyone- *laughs*
Ishwari - *laughs* Rhea , jaa jaake prasad le aa , warna ye chup nhi hoga ! Dev bhi aise hi tha
Deaksh - PRASHAADD !! * SCREAMS EVEN MORE LOUDER*
Sona - Dekash ! *scolds* Bol diya na bas ! Laa rhi hai Rhea Bua
Deaksh - *gets angry**makes tht sad n crying face*
Ishwari- Sona , daantne ki kya zarurat thi ?
Asha - Kee Karsho Shona ? Tumi .. Mera matlab hai itna daanta kyun usai ,chota bacha hi to hai ?
Rhea - *gets the prasad* *feeds Deaksh*
Deaksh - thanks RihBua
Rhea - *kisses on his cheeks*
Deaksh - *gets irritated* RihBuaa !! Naii *wipes his cheek*
Everyone - Hahaha

-Evening-

The whole mansion was filled with guests
Dev who was wearing a simple black formal jeans with a white Shirt n a Coat was looking handsome as ususal , he was busy meeting people but his eyes longed to see his wife

Dev - *murmurs* Ye Mishti kaha reh gayi ??

Sonakshi was veryy busy attending the guests , there were people who didnt come at DevAkshi's wedding ,n there were some people who didnt even know tht Dev is married

Mrs.Agarwal - Ishwari , Badhai ho Ishwari behen ! Abh jald se Dev ke liye dulhan le aao
Ishwari - *laughs* ek min ! *calls out for sonakshi* Sonakshi ..
Sona -Jee Maa
Ishwari - Mrs.Agarwal ye Sonakshi hai , meri bahu ,Dev ki patni
Mrs.Agarwal - Bahu ?!! Ohh wow shaadi kab hui ??
Ishwari - shaadi ?! Mein Dadi bhi ban gayi hoon Mrs.Agarwal
Mrs.Agarwal - kya Ishwari behen , ek ek jhatke de rhi hai aap
Ishwari - haha

The entire party dev's eyes were looking for his Sonakshi ! He felt irritated as he wanted to spend time with her , afterall 3 days without each other was tough for them indeed !

Dev - *takes sona in a corner* Kaha thi tum ? Kitna wait karwaya tumne !
Sona - Dev ! Aap kya karre hai , koi dekh lega , ghar mein party chal rhi hai ,mujhe bohot kaam hai
Dev - par mujhe tum chahiye Sonakshi ! Jab se aaya hoon tum free hi nhi dikhti , sab ke liye time hai tumhare paas ...Maa,Deaksh,Maa-Baba,sab yaha tak ke kichu bhaiyya ke liye bhi bt mere liye nhi !
Sona - Dev ...
Elena - *calls out for Sona* Sonaa !! Kaha hai tu , sab bula rahe hai tujhe
Sona - *tries gettingnout of his grip* Eli yahi aa rahi hai pls , chodiye pls *pinches him*
Dev - Aaa , Ms.Bose !
Sona - *laughs* *strts leaving* by the way , its Mrs.Dixit for u *winks*
Dev - jaiye jaiye ! Raat mein kaise bachengi aap ?!! *smirks*
Sona - dekh lenge *smiles**leaves*

-Night-

The party was over , all the guests including the Bose fam left to their respective homes , everyone was sitting in the Hall discussing about how well the party went

Deaksh- NiBua chalo , game khelte hai
Vicky - ye ek Duracell kaha se paida hogaya ?!sab thake hue hai sivaye iske , Abbe tujhe neend nhi aati ?
Mamaji- arrre Dev , beta tu jaa apne kamre mein aaram karr , kal se bohot thaka hua hai , jaa
Dev - *looks at sona* *looks at deaksh*
Ishwari - aur haan Aaj Deaksh mere paas soyega ,Sona
Dev -*gets v.happy*
Sona - Nai Maa , wo ye raat mein uth ta hai , doodh ke liye (such a spoilt brat)
Dev - *makes tht sad face*
Ishwari - ussme kya hai ? Mein de dungi , shi-shi (bottle) mein se hi to pilana hai na !
Sona - par Maa , aapki neend...
Dev - Sonakshi , abh Maa itna keh rhi hai to rehne do na *smirks*
Sona - Okay, Maa
Dev-*gets happy* *acts as yawning* Maa , mujhe bohot neend aa rhi hai , mein jaata hoon sone okay
Ishwari - haan , beta tu jaa
Dev - *looks at sona* *winks*
-DevAkshi Room -
Dev - ye Sonakshi kaha reh gayii ?? *screams* SONAKSHI !

-Hall-

Neha - lo Bhabhi, aapka bulawa aagaya
Rhea - Zara intezaar nhi hota bhaiyya se
Sona - *blushes* Maa , mein aati hoon
Nikki - aati hoon nhi , jaati hoon ! U go bhabhi , Dekash ko hum, Maa ke paas suladete hai
Rhea - Yea Bhabhi , Y go
Ishwari - aur raat ki chinta mat karo , mein usse doodh(formula powder) bana ke dedungi
Sona - *smiles* Thank u Maa *leaves*

-DevAkshi Room -

*lights off*
Sona - kya hai dev ?! Dev *searches for dev*
Dev - *closes the door* *switches on the light*
Sona - *turns to see Dev*
Dev - Finally , Patni ko Apne Pati ki yaad to aayi
Sona - jaldi boliye kya chahiye , MamaJi ko vitamins ki goliyan deni hai

Dev - *gets angry+irritated* KYA MASLA HAI YAAR ?! 3 DIN TO MEIN TUMHARE SE ALAG THA , ABH JAB AAYA HUN TABH TUMHE SAB KI PADHI HAI ! KYA TUMNE POOCHA -'DEV,TUM YE 3 DIN KAISE THE ? ,MEINE TUMHE BOHOT YAAD KIYA' ,NAHI TUMHE TO BAS MAA,MAMAJI,MAMIJI,DEAKSH GHAR KE BAAKI SAB KA KHAYAL RAKHNA AATA HAI SIVAYE MERE !
Sona - *feelsguity* Wo Dev, I m really... *starts to cry* ...
Dev - *laughs* abh soncho agar mein aisa husband hota to ?!
Sona - *gets angry* Jao aap abh ! Mein aapse baat nhi karti ,Kabhi bhi nhi !
Dev - arre Mishtu *cups her face*
Sona - *moves his hands away* jaiye aap pls ! *shouts* AAPKO MERI FIKR HI NHI !
Dev - *guilty* Sonakshi , I m sorry wo...
Sona - *laughs* abh sonchiye ki agar mein aisi wife hoti to
Dev - Sona = *Laughs*
Dev- acha to aap mazak karri thi *moves towards her*

~Saadgi Achi Lagi , plays in the bg~

Sona - Jee *gets shy*
Dev - *stops* *goes backwards towards the door* *locks the door* *comes towards Sona*
Sona - *blushes* *moves back*
Dev - *holds her by her waist* Pyaar se bhagna itna aasan nhi Mrs.Khargosh !
Sona - *blushes*
*Dev holds her really close*- nose nudge,
He makes way to her neck by nuzzling her face n gives soft kisses on her neck
Sona - *huskily* Dev ! *runs from him*
Dev - *walks slowly n lovingly towards her *
Sona - *breathes heavily*
Dev - *hugs her from her back* (back hug)
Sona - *starts leaving*
Dev - *holds her hand* *lifts her*(horizontal lift)
They both kept staring each other lovingly , he placed her on the bed lovingly , he caresses her face
Sona - *hugs him* *gets teary* Dev I missed u soo much !
Dev - *wipes those tears* I Love u too Sonakshi *kisses her forehead* !

N they spend the night embracing each other, giving each other their dose for 3 whole days

I know its shit , Thanks for bearing me

Hope u guys liked it ,
Joote Chappals all welcome
Do Like n Leave a comment down , let me know ur views
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Thank u Once again
-Jenn-

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow such a lovely OS filled so much family love fun and togetherness
thank you for this OS
Posted: 8 years ago
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Hye.. Jenn..welcome to our lovely DevAkhsi land... Will cmnt ltr after reading ur story.. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very beautifully written
I just love these family moments
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very beautiful os
It was cute and bubbly as well as romantic n passionate at the same time
Do write more if such stuff
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow...
Welcome to our KRPKAB forum dear...
U started watching 2 weeks ago n saw all the episodes...
Amazing...
Yet u managed to write such a beautiful OS...
Surprised dear...
N ur OS is lovely...
Plz pm ur writings if u can dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcum to the forum dear...
Such a lovely OS it was ...
Do write more

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