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Anushka

@LoveAnushka

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi, This is Anushka Here! I don't know what made m write, I don't know what I'm writing! But I know I'm a mad and crazy person!

I seriously have thoughts all mixed up and I don't know what I'm starting at and how will this story shape up but all I know is I have a plot...

So see if you like this Teaser of my story.

If you like it, comment and tell me should I continue this rubbish warna I'll delete with...

Dil pe pathar rakhe maine make up kar liya...Just joking

Please, I need U R reviews, this is my second time write an SS...

So deal with me, Warning U mat padho agar nahi padh sakte...

Ok my talks done, now u R work startsss...

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CREDIT TO ARTIST_FOREVER AKA MAHISHEE :

LONDON: PAST

Closed eyes, calm breaths, hands spread wide, a beautiful smile and a support forever...

She had a beauty which got highlighting her features in the sunrise...

She had love story which spread many colors more than the sky in morning...

Perfect Memories!!!!! There are many!!!!! And this was one of them...

And what fear when she had...

Dev

He poking her to come down, but no had she listened to anyone...

Dev: Sona c'mon yaar, get down, tum gir jaodi

Sona: Tum hona Dev

Dev: Please, thike main tumse baat nahi karunga

Sona: Achha Baba main niche aati hoon but tum mujhe niche utaro and forwared her both arms

Dev: Ok, chalo with the look *Tum kabhi nahi sudharogi*

And she with the look *Bigada toh tumhare pyaar ne hi*

As she got down,

Sona: Tumhe achha nahi lag raha ye London Bridge se nazara dekhne main!!!!!

Dev: Maza aa raha hai, par Tumhare tarah stunts nahi karna chahata hoon, ki Bridge ke upar khade hokar titanic wala pose karke jo tu ye...

As Sona interrupted: Aree Baba thike, ab hotel chale ya phir yahan par baithke dharna karna hai!!!

Dev: Haan haan, kon keh raha, tum pagal ho seriously, mujhe abhi bhi kitni neend aa rahi pata hai, saade paanch baje (5:30 A.M.) kon uthata hai? Sirf ye

Sona: Nazara dekhne ke liye, as she completed... Dev hume kabhi ye moka nahi milega toh jite hai full on main...

As both smiled, badi wali...

Dev: Acha ab chale, please!

Sona: Ok chalo, sleepyhead!!! As she giggled...

Dev: Mmm, I'm not that

sona: U R!!!!

Dev: Ms. Khargoshhh

Sona: Mr.Obhodrooo

As both laughed making their way to hotel as Dev romanced with Sona despite her warnings

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INDIA: PRESENT

Closed eyes, erratic breathing, tears rolling down, and unbelievable face...

No, No, No She can't, she loves me...

Wo mujhse beintehaan pyaar karti hai...

As he broke the glass with his hand and slipped to the ground...

But jo maine Dekha, Wo kya...

Should I give her a chance to explain, how? how? how?

I'm not able to move, I...I...I need time...

Bad Memories!!!!!They come in package of everything!!!! As this one which just...

Devvv!!!!!!! Open the door!!! Please meri baat toh suno ek baar, waisa nahi hai, I can explain you...

Please, meri jaan, please open the door, open the door ope..n...th..e..d..oo..or

As she slipped by the door...continuously knocking the door...

Pleading...That's what she can do...why can't she...How can I...but I will...

But Dev..please...I Love You...

Kyu Sona!!!???

Please Dev!!!

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JAB PYAAR MAIN PYAAR NA HO,JAB DARD MAIN YAAR NA HO,

JAB AASON MAIN MUSKAAN NA HO, JAB LAFZON MAIN ZUBAAN NA HO,

JAB SAANSE BAS YUN HI CHALE, JAB HAR DIN MAIN RAAT DHALE,

JAB INTEZAR SIRF WAQT KA HO,JAB YAAD US KABAKHAT KI HO,

KYU RUH MAIN RAAHI DHOONDE KISI AUR KI MANZIL,

DHADKANO NE SAATH CHOD DIYA, AE DIL HAI MUSHKIL...

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INDEX : Below ( Coming Up)

CHARACTER SKETCH : Below ( Coming Up)

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Okkk!!!! I'm done, I think little bit confusing but it will unfold the story...

My story would be ajeebogarib but u can have a try, U R taste won't be that bad...

Anysways ye sab batane wali main kon hoti hun, So please tell me how is it???

Thanks for reading!!!!!

Love,

Anushka

P.S. Main Tabhi continue karoungi jab U all will tell me to and support me...

Edited by LoveAnushka - 8 years ago

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@LoveAnushka

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Posted: 8 years ago

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CHARACHTER SKETCH

MR.DEV DIXIT :

A buissness tycoon, Owner Of Ishwari Telecommunications Pvt. Lmt. Had gone through lot of difficulties in past and came as a successful business man in history of business with a sharp brain. appeared to be rude but changed after love.And Very handosome with the light brown eyes which capture every girls heart but loves his family, have his heart with his mother and Heartbeats only for one woman, who is his life, Sonakshi.

Where story unfolds and while Loving Sonakshi creates a misunderstanding which leads to troubles when a third person enters in their Love Story...

Dr.SONAKSHI BOSE:

A no nonsense, straightforward but fun girl who gets loved by everyone in family and with her Doctorate degree gets respect in equal. The Best Nutritionist in Delhi and most reputed one and was Dev's moms nutritionist and sfter 3 months she back to hospital and treats her patients in such maaner that she is fav of all. But with a heart patient of hers who has become her lifeline and a reason to live, Dev. But with a Dark past which she makes sure it doesn't affects her future but somethings do remind u if its forever as pain can go from the wound but marks remain forever on heart and puts faced infront her family and maybe with Dev...It got rubbed somewhat by Dev"s Love...

But what happens when her Past comes in DevAkshi's love story and bring a turbulence in lifes...

ISHWARI DIXIT:

Loves her Son, Dev and three daughters who are Neha, Riya, Nikki,very much. For Dev, not possessive but posses him like a diamond and want a diamond with gold heart girl for her Dev who is none another than Sonakshi whom she wants to get her married to Dev but problem arises when Sonakshi isn't ready and answers unfold in story...

Is a friend To her children and Sonakshi with her prayers and deals with God to bring happiness in lives when even God tests her children and...

RAGHUKESH DIXIT:

Was a middle class man in past who got in trouble when an natural calamity took place and they had a difficult time but were saved by his wife's brother and his family and gave his every child a good education be it anyone. Proud of Dev but also of his daughters.

Loves Sonakshi as a daughter a lot and loves her hands Special Chai ( tea )

Helps her in future when relationship strikes bad times...

NIKKI DIXIT:

Youngest Sister of Dev and a student with a cheerfulness, playfulness and masti full on and with careless nature and Loves Her bhayia, Di's and Sona Di very much.

RIYA DIXIT:

With her chasmish ON on her innocent face, she wants to understand everyone but is unble with her age and elder to Nikki only and younger to her Neha Di who is a mom to her with her sister alike Sona Di, And obviously loves her Dev Bhai...Works as marketing manager in her Bhai's company...

NEHA DIXIT:

Little bit arrongace from Dev Bhai but loves her family a lot and is being loved also. Little bit drama and Tanasen but worth it for entertainment and same goes her bond with sona like others...

Helps the couple DevAkshi...

MAMA JI, MAMI JI AND VICKY SAME HERE LIKE IN SHOW with little humanity in Vicky...

ELENA BOSE:

A cheerful, chirpy girl with a fun and living life to fullest and being crazy like anything but know everything about Sonakshi, even her past and promises her to be with her and not reveal in upcoming... But circumstances made her save a life...where she defines friendship in a true way with her sisterhood obviously...but leaves no chance to tease Sona with Dev and wants her well being...

BIJOY, ASHA, DADI AND SAURABH SAME AS IN SHOW...

DARSHAN KAPOOR:

A man to be unfold with the story as he uncovers secrets and pasts and something more... Loves to play with emotions and girls with an playboy image...Can't discover more as it can cause U a problem...Beware...As story complicates...

A connection between...Nopes...Can't tell U...

IF MORE CHARACHTERS TO BE ADDED, THEN WILL LET U ALL KNOW AS STORY MOVES, IF NEEDED THEN...

Love,

Anushka

Edited by LoveAnushka - 8 years ago