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Originally posted by: LoveAnushka

TEASER FOR FIRST CHAPTER :

PRESENT :

Dil sirf tumse pyar karta hai...

Shareer sirf tumse poora hota hai...

Dhadkan sirf tumse chalti hai...

Saans sirf tumpe aakar rukti hai...

Aur aatma...Sirf tumhe janti hai...

Ye Log aur Buddhu dimaag kya jane...

Mere Jine ki wajah ban chuki ho Tum...

Mere Marne ki wajah ban chuki ho Tum...

Par Tumhare Love Story ki wajah ban chuka ho Main...

...WRITTEN BY MYSELF

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PAST:

Tere ishq ka ye kitna haseen ehsaas hain,
Lagta hai jaise tu har pal mere paas hain,
Mohabbat teri deewangi ban chuki hai meri,
Aur ab zindagi ki aarzoo sirf tumhare sath ha

...CREDIT TO MAKERS

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Will Be uploading chapter soon, Maybe at this night or today not then Tomorrow...1st Chapter is almost ready and Not to worry it is normal happy one...

Love,

Anushka

P.S. I know even this is confusing but what to do? And yes line is made to let you know emotions in the shayaris, mine won't be shayari and if U find bakwaas then Sorry as I write poems but..just tried it...I hope U all like mine and other one mentioned above...Hope U understand emotions in it...

Teasers really Tease No!!!!

Originally posted by: Mishti_94

Wow!

Amazing!

Update the first chapter soon!😃

Hello friends, Thank You So much for liking and commenting...I'm very overwhelmed by your responses...So here comes much awaiting first chapter of my SS...

Starting might be confusing and somewhat intriguing but that would be middle part, even present part of teaser is start of problems in their lives, so this is nothing...Overall, You have to see to it, How is it? Is it up to mark?

So Here By You go Reading...

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AFTER SOME HOURS:

Dev,,De..v...Dev...Aankhe kholo Dev...Tum itni jal..jaldi...mujhe chod ke ...nahi ja sakte...

As Sona cried over again and again this continuously crying and shook Dev then tenderly putting her hand on his head as Ambulance arrived Hospital...where she didn't let his hand go from hers...

Blood on white sheet from head...from hand...Unconscious...

Dil Sirf Tumse Pyaar Karta Hai

Shareer Sirf Tumse Poora Hota Hai

Dhadkane Sirf Tumse Chalti Hai

Aur Aatma Sirf Tumhe janti hai

Ye Log Aur Buddhu Dimaag Kya Jane

Mere Jine Ki Wajah Ban Chuki Ho Tum

Mere Marne Ki Wajah Ban Chuki Ho Tum

Par Tumhari love Story ki Wajah Ban Chuka Hoon Main

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SOME MONTHS AGO...

Sona: Waah Maa, Aaj kal aap bohot acche se apna dhyan rakhti hai, kon hai iske piche ka raaz? Haan?Batayie kahin...

Asked naughtily whereas Maa had already started glaring her that she got quiet...

And once again resumed at her work of BP checking...

She had just got over with BP checking and was writing some results in her note pad as someone came and closed her eyes and immediately Sona recognized as she said, Uncle...

Raghu: Hmuph! Main tumse gussa hoon, tum Ishwari ko Maa bulati ho aur mujhe Uncle...Not Fair Sona...jaaao ab main tumse katti...

Sona: Awww Ok Papa, ab khush...He didn't smile, so she held her ears so cutely that one can't resist... As he held her hands saying her not to...

Sonakshi who came as nutritionist, fell in love with Dev and vice versa and even Dev's family can't stop loving this adorable girl and are happy to know that both, Dev N Sonakshi are very happy in their relationship...

Its been 1 month since Sona joined Dev's company after his mom's personal nutritionist but manages to comes 2 to 4 times in a week after this also...

Ishwari; Accha Shona beta, Nikki ka B'day aa raha hai, tum toh janti hi ho toh phir hum soch rahe the ki hum Goa main ek farmhouse hai wahan jakar manaye...

Sona: Ye toh bada accha plan hai toh phir main iss main kaisi help karoun?

Raghu: Tum bas ye help karo ki tum aur tumhari family humare saath aaye iss trip par!!!

Sona: Kya? par Maa, Papa, main kaise???

Ishwari: Kya main par wo lagake rakha hai?

Sona: Maa aapke personal time main, Main kaise?

ishwari: Kya personal time? Kaan pakad kar tujhe maroungi, toh ye final hai ki tu aa rahi hai aur aanhann han han koi bahana nahi samjhi nootrishan...

Sonakshi couldn't help but smile at the warmth of their love, as she nodded her head and then stood up bending down and touching both's feet and taking aashirwaad.

Walking out of the room, engrossed in her mobile as her hair were open in glamorous curls with blue jhumkas and blue anarkali type cotton kurta with Dark blue and purple shades with as usual looking fantabulous in it like everyday...

Sonakshi

She didn't realize that she just passed by a room that before she can move ahead, a hand hold hers from back stopping her in her tracks with a voice coming along with it...

Tere ishq ka ye kitna haseen ehsaas hain,
Lagta hai jaise tu har pal mere paas hain,
Mohabbat teri deewangi ban chuki hai meri,
Aur ab zindagi ki aarzoo sirf tumhare sath hai

As she smiled over the lines and turned to see her man of dreams standing in front of her eyes in white shirt with black dots and dark blue blazer on...

Dev

Sona: Kitni baar kaha hai Dev, ye poetic wali image aapko suit nahi karti...

Dev: accha baba thike par kaisi thi lines, bolo?

Sona: Bohot sundar ekdum humari tarah...

Dev smiled as he brushed his thumb over her hand on which he was holding... He was leaning with his back on the door of room at entrance and Sona outside the room...

Dev: Aap mujh se bina mile jaa rahi thi Ms. Bose? As he stared her...

Sona: wo mujhe yaad nahi tha...Actually main busy thi main mere phone main kuch mails check kar rahi thi toh it happened, shotti Dev!!!

Dev:Main bhi bohot busy rehta hoon toh main toh tumhe nahi bhul jaata hun na? Kaho kuch?

Sona glancing at her mobile and looking up at him saying: Dev main late ho rahi hun, mujhe bohot kaam hai, please jaan do!!! As she turned to leave, Dev tugged her hand lightly towards him only for herself to get crashed at his chest...

As she moved her head up to look at him, her curls falling at back and hands on his chest... Dev's intense eyes stared at her prefect features of her face, not even blinking for a second ...

Both had a very long eye lock, where none wanted to back out...

Sona shyly broke the eyelock looking down...As she struggled a bit to get out of his arms... But Dev brought his hand to her elbow, grasping it softly, he pulled her more closer eying her not to do this...

Dev: Koi Fayada nahi...

Sona: Not fair, tum mujhse jyada strong ho iska matlab ye nahi ki tum zabardasti karo mere saath...

Dev: Zabardasti? Jyada bholi mat bano haan!!! I can't belive tum mujhe bhul gayi, kahin tum apni shaadi ki date na bhool jao? Kyun??

Hearing the word Shaadi she lowered her eyes thinking how to say that I have just...

Dev: Sonakshi kya hua? As he asked seeing her lost in thoughts...

Sona: Kuch nahi as she looked up to him... Accha ab jane do na ya yahi khade rehne ka plan hai??

Dev: Plan? Plan toh main bahut kuch karta hoon par tum allow karo execute karne ka toh na!!!

As Dev winked at her saying this...And Sona blushed but composed saying...

Sona: Kya pl..plan? Haan? Tun bohot badmaash ho gaye ho, ab chodo bhi dev mujhe...

As she struggled but got frozen when dev started tracing her features, from her forehead, eyes, nose, slightly grazing cheekbones as she had her eyes closed and lips slightly open and coming forward he planted a kiss on her cheek and then stopped his finger at her lips as he traced them and gave a light peck, as his hand slipped more tightly on her waist... in all this Sona was blushing more than ever, this got her into whenever Dev touched her...But as she opened her eyes, she look to only see Dev staring her as his head was on the door leaning...She smiled and hugged him and even he too, holding more tightly...

Sona: Dev I love you, she said slowly...

Dev; I love you too Sonakshi...He too responded her in same emotions...

They were enjoying this moment of peace and wanted it to last for forever...As Dev kissed her forehead hugging her...

The hug, is a place for them where they will forget the world only to blessed with each other getting lost in it...The feeling of love oozes out...When they would hug...

They can fight every disaster but when problem arises when one person in relationship lets another outside person affect it not bothering to share it only thinking it'll hurt the person in the relationship brings down their world crashing down when power, money, lust, games, lies and cheats come in lives only to die inside loving you... For You, Only You...

PRECAP:

Dev: Sona hum parso, ek din baad, Friday ko Goa ke farmhouse ke liye nikle gain aur wahan par khoob masti karenge...

Nikki: Bhaiya yahan sirf Sona di nahi hai..Main bhi hoon...

Dev: haan thike!!!

Riya: Dekha nikki bhaiya toh hume bhul hi gaye Sona Di ke aane ke baad...

Dev: Areee tum log bhi na...

Sonakshi laughed at the Dixit sisters teasing and was about say something that a message popped on her phone from unknown number...

The message which Maybe stored something unknown trouble for her...

She was about to open when...

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A Song For The Overall Chapter:

PHIR KABHI From M.S. DHONII:

Yeh lamha jo thehra hai
Mera hai ye tera hai
Yeh lamha main jee loon zara

Tujh mein khoya rahoon main
Mujh mein khoyi rahe tu
Khudko dhoondh lenge phir kabhi
Tujhse milta rahoon main
Mujhse milti rahe tu
Khud se hum milenge phir kabhi
Haa.. phir kabhi

Kyun bewajah gungunaaye
Kyun bewajah muskuraaye
Palkein chamakne lagi hai
Ab khwaab kaise chupaaye

Behki si baatein kar lein
Hans hans ke aankhen bhar lein
Ye behoshiyan phir kahan

Tujhme khoya rahoon main
Mujhme khoyi rahe tu
Khud ko dhoondh lenge phir kabhi
Tujhse milta rahoon main
Mujhse milti rahe tu
Khud se hum milenge phir kabhi
Haa.. phir kabhi

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Hufff...So I just wanted to write a normal life episode...And TADA it is done...

Sorry first time writer so hope U all will like it... And if it was not up to mark, please suggestions are welcome...

Socha nahi tha, ki ye bhi likh paongi but OK...

Hoping to have some comments, please your comments encourage me to write, even likes too...

First Shayari in chapter is written by me and the one which Dev speaks is by original makers posted on internet...

Song is mentioned at last only because for me that Song will depict the scene in chapter of DevAkshi...Story is not copied of serial...

Love,

Anushka

Originally posted by: srilotus

Interesting start

So Dev and Sona jaldi hi shadi karne wale hain

and i think there is no -tive character

situation negative role play karegi

update soon:)