Devakshi FF: Small Moments (Completed) - Page 55

Originally posted by: simplesweety1

One Word That Can Describe This Chapter Is ; Wow! Wow! Wow! Seriously Yaa! You're An Awsm Writer! This Chapter Was Marvellous Like Any Other Chapter Written By You! And Muje Na Lagta Hai Ki Muje Telepathy Pata Hai! 😆 Coz You Know, Muje Pehle Hi Shak Thha Ki Dev'll Be Jealous Seeing Ritwik And Sona's Bonding! And Dusri Baat That Riya - Ritwik Ka Kuchh Na Kuchh Chakar Toh Chalega! Lagta Hai Mereme Aapka Dimaag Padhne Ke Shakti Aa Gayi Hai Lol! Jokes Apart, I'm Loving Your FF And The Possessive Avatar Of Our Very Own Mr Aubhodro! Hehe! And Phirse, Sona Ki Outfit Batane Ka Koi Plan! 😆

The Moment I Loved The Most From The FF Is When Dev Stopped Sona From Taking Her Hand Back! Haaayyye! Just Love Shaheer Yaar! I Imagine Everything Na, Toh Aur Bhi Maza Aata Hai Padhne Mein! Oh! Comment Kaafi Lamba Hogaya! Sorry! Hehe! Just Update Soon Man! I'm Loving Your FF A Lot! 😆

P.S: Aakhir Isse FF Mein Convert Karaane Mein Ka Idea Bhi Toh Mene Diya Na! 😆

Originally posted by: GERUA

excellent update

Originally posted by: Rhy2015

Mishti...why did u stop???ek baar mey story likh daalo na...I can't wait to read more of it...make sure u update as sona as u come back from ur vacations.
Awesome story 😛

Originally posted by: vinoguna

Thanks for the pm dear... lovely continuation... now eagerly waiting for next part... hopefully more of devakshi scenes...

Tere kandhe pr rakh kar sar..Yuhi kat jaye saari umar..
Love is in the air!! Oops!! Love is in the aeroplane!!
I love Dev's jealousy towards Ritwick and protectiveness for keeping Sona away from Kushal.
And tell me one thing why are u portraying Sona so afraid and like a poor girl? Can't she deal with that Kushal on her own? She is a stong girl..I would love to see her tashan with that Kushal. #JustMyThought
But u r very brilliant writer..That see-off seen was also a lovely one! Keep it up!! :)

Lovely update...very beautifully written

Originally posted by: FanOfCreativity

Tere kandhe pr rakh kar sar..Yuhi kat jaye saari umar..
Love is in the air!! Oops!! Love is in the aeroplane!!
I love Dev's jealousy towards Ritwick and protectiveness for keeping Sona away from Kushal.
And tell me one thing why are u portraying Sona so afraid and like a poor girl? Can't she deal with that Kushal on her own? She is a stong girl..I would love to see her tashan with that Kushal. #JustMyThought
But u r very brilliant writer..That see-off seen was also a lovely one! Keep it up!! :)

Hahahaha 😆 Oh, there is a reason for portraying her like that when it comes to Kushal. You'll get to know soon. 😉 Thank you so much dear! ❤️

Originally posted by: sa1234B

Lovely update...very beautifully written

Thanx for pm...continue soon

Thank you dear! :D No problem! Yes will do! :D

Hii mishti di

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Hii mishti di

I have continued reading ur ff. But nowadays due to some work I am unable to read all the parts.

But I'll read all chapters very soon and then I'll comment

So sorry ...😊

Hello Anjali! No problem dear. Take your time! Koi jaldi nahin hai! :D