Devakshi FF: Small Moments (Completed)

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

aww It was so cute both devakshi are attracted towards each other please continue soon

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Dr Neelima Menon

@neelima_menon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Ahh such a cute os :) plz continue it:)

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: GeekSquad
Beautiful piece of writing, can imagine the moment and I expected something like that during their breakup...I can imagine the scenario..

keep up your writing..and advance Bday Wishes.

Thank you thank you!!!!

I'm glad you liked it.

I've been dreaming of this moment for a long time.

So thought of writing it down.

Planning to turn it into an SS soon!

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Devakshilover
aww It was so cuteboth devakshi are attracted towards each otherplease continue soon

Thanks Ankita!

I'm glad you liked it!

Thought of it as an OS
But as every one here is encouraging me to turn in into a story, will make this into an SS! 😃

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: neelima_menon
Ahh such a cute os :) plz continue it:)

Thank youuu!

Will try to! 😃

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Soumya

@Soumya23

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Beautiful OS Deepshika...
toh Sona pehle se hi humare Dev ko jaanti hai kya..?

it was so cute imagining Sona with giggles and helmet and Dev looking at her and smiling to himself...

Cont Soonn...😊

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Soumya23
Beautiful OS Deepshika...
toh Sona pehle se hi humare Dev ko jaanti hai kya..?

it was so cute imagining Sona with giggles and helmet and Dev looking at her and smiling to himself...

Cont Soonn...😊

No.
Sona doesn't know Dev!

She just saw him!

She doesn't know him yet and he doesn't know her!

And thank you once again!

Will update soon! 😃

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simplesweety1

@simplesweety1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Di .. This Was Awsm! I Loved The OS .. And When Dev Said That 'Kitni Cute Hai Yeh Latki,Pagal Hai Bilkul' I Was Laughing Like An Idiot! 😆Sabhkuchh Imagine Bhi Kia! Yeh Bilkul Perfect Hai Ek OS Se Ek Ts Nahi Balki FF Mein Convert Hone Ke Liye! 👍🏼 I Want More And More Of It! Please! Update Soon! 😊

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: simplesweety1
Di .. This Was Awsm! I Loved The OS .. And When Dev Said That 'Kitni Cute Hai Yeh Latki,Pagal Hai Bilkul' I Was Laughing Like An Idiot! 😆Sabhkuchh Imagine Bhi Kia! Yeh Bilkul Perfect Hai Ek OS Se Ek Ts Nahi Balki FF Mein Convert Hone Ke Liye! 👍🏼I Want More And More Of It! Please! Update Soon!😊

Hahaha! 😆

I feel so happy Ki tumhey itna pasand aya!

Yes. I am planning to make it into a bigger story!

Itni encouragement milney Ki khushi me! 😃

Thank youuu once again!

I promise to write more! :D

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Adiba Bano

@.kashishbano.

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

First of all... Thank you so much Deepshika for the PM and buddy request.

Coming to an OS... it is beyond beautiful.
Amazing banner...
Thoroughly enjoyed it and loved it with full of imagination that you make us do.

The description of dev's look. Awww...Too good.

And when he said kitni cute hai aur bilkul pagal hai... cute scene it is...

Perfectly penned down the feelings of first sight 👏 .

It deserves to become a TS or SS...

Definitely love to read more and more your work.

Waiting to see that to what this OS will turn...

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