Devakshi FF: Small Moments (Completed) - Page 23

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: raji91

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awesome yaar
character sketch wow...
thanks for pm


Thanks Raji!
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Okay will wait for your comment!😃

And no problem! :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
A Fabulous Chapter

Sonakshi been in Dev's office all confused at the turn of events while he trying to clean his shirt and sacastically tells her that she been unproffessional with her boss that's when Sonakshi realizes Mr Dixit is her boss and she came into his office drinking his coffee which she just assumed was for her
now she has to work with the person that has invaded her mind for the past few days
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jade0001

A Fabulous Chapter

Sonakshi been in Dev's office all confused at the turn of events while he trying to clean his shirt and sacastically tells her that she been unproffessional with her boss that's when Sonakshi realizes Mr Dixit is her boss and she came into his office drinking his coffee which she just assumed was for her
now she has to work with the person that has invaded her mind for the past few days


Thank you so much for liking it!🤗
Yep. It's going to be pretty difficult for her now, to work with him!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally, Finally ... I have finished reading both the 4th and 5th chapter at last.😊

And I must say Mishti you have just nailed the updates.👏

You have brilliantly penned down the updates.👍🏼

I really like the scene, where Sonakshi fall down from the bed, actually i too fall down from the bed on the first day of my job.😉 because of getting up late.

First day, and make sona to spit the coffee on her boss😆

The Devakshi Conversation, Both are mesmerising each other. Dev too somewhere happy seeing her again and the sonakshi still lost in the brown eyes. The nick names sonakshi gave to Dev, dev obhodro style. Loved it.❤️

Like the pictures in the Character Sketch.

You have added rithwic as well as Kushal and Natasha too.

so can i guess there will be a jealousy track too for Devaskshi.😉

Oh. No kushal also works under Dev. You always end your chapters at a point which make us crave for more. thank god i have read both chapters together.

Just with your story, i am thoroughly enjoying the old Devakshi moments.😛

A big hug to you for recreating the mesmerising moments of Devaskhi🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .kashishbano.

Finally, Finally ... I have finished reading both the 4th and 5th chapter at last.😊


And I must say Mishti you have just nailed the updates.👏

You have brilliantly penned down the updates.👍🏼

I really like the scene, where Sonakshi fall down from the bed, actually i too fall down from the bed on the first day of my job.😉 because of getting up late.

First day, and make sona to spit the coffee on her boss😆

The Devakshi Conversation, Both are mesmerising each other. Dev too somewhere happy seeing her again and the sonakshi still lost in the brown eyes. The nick names sonakshi gave to Dev, dev obhodro style. Loved it.❤️

Like the pictures in the Character Sketch.

You have added rithwic as well as Kushal and Natasha too.

so can i guess there will be a jealousy track too for Devaskshi.😉

Oh. No kushal also works under Dev. You always end your chapters at a point which make us crave for more. thank god i have read both chapters together.

Just with your story, i am thoroughly enjoying the old Devakshi moments.😛

A big hug to you for recreating the mesmerising moments of Devaskhi🤗

Hahaha :D

Thank youuu Adi!

I'm so happy you are liking it!
Haan. Abhi toh kahani shuru hui hai!
Agey agey dekho hota hai kya!

I'm trying to keep the Devakshi moments realistic but with my own touch! :D

Arey waah. Bina janey hi I created your first day of work for you!😆
Yes. I like keeping an ending with a little bit of suspense!😆😆😆

Thank you for the hug!🤗
Hope I can continue to make you happy with the next chapters!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aaj tak post nhi kiya par aaj karti hoon
It's just brilliant
I am actually liking this
I was waiting for the story to unfold so that I can post
Waiting for next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyGirlRashi

Aaj tak post nhi kiya par aaj karti hoon
It's just brilliant
I am actually liking this
I was waiting for the story to unfold so that I can post
Waiting for next chapter


Thank you so much Rashi!

I'm glad I could impress you enough to comment!👏

I'm so happy!

Next Chapter will be up on Saturday! :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its Awesome... 👏 Dear.Ye x bf wala angle Was unexpected. BTW Thnx for the pm.. update soon... waiting waiting waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update deepu..
I loved it ttly!!
The coffee part ws damn funny nd hilarious..
I hope we get to see more nok jhok of devaakshi..really miss it in the serial...
Bt i dint like the cliffhanger..ex bf nooo...
Plz update soon..sat is too far :(
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Posted: 8 years ago
y entry of ex so early...

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