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Posted: 8 years ago
niceee...I hope Elina finds a match for Sona soon and Dev gets all jealous , insecure and above all starts acting "protective" abt Sona...😉😆
update the next chapter soon...getting addicted to this story ...awaiting eagerly ...


Edited by WeRockTheWorld - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Di!
Sorry for the late comment!
Actually I had terrible network where I'd gone for a small weekend trip.
Returning now and read the chapter on the road!
Wow!
New twist.
Dev does not want to marry but is in love.
And Sona is in love too but heartbroken :(
Dev, jaldi se theek karo ye sab!
Amazing chapter Di! :D
Can't wait for the next one!
Updateee soon! :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hii...I am so sorry for the late comment
The part was amazing as usual😳
But, Dev doesn't want to marry Sona??😲
Hmmm...lets see aage kya hota hai...
Waiting eagerly. Please cont soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dev tells Mama ji he wants to marry Surbhi and not Sonakshi as she is not his type and a marriage is build on trust while Surbhi knows his past
Ishwari informs Bejoy and both he and Asha are furious but Elena is thankful only to find Sonakshi in such a broken state
Elena wants to know if Sonakshi knows Dev and she tells her sister that she gave Dev all her love that she possess and she does not care about his image while he declares not to meet Sonakshi again as she deserves a better man in her life
waiting now to see what will happen
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry guys ,i am not able able to reply u as i am busy somewhere else.Plz give me some time ,will reply to all ur sweet comments and also comment on the posts of the forum asap.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanks dear once again😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh


Maine bhi encourage kiya 😭😭😭
Woh toh bolo
And khatam kar deti toh katti kar deti 🤔🤔🤔
Anyways... Mazak tha... 😆😆😆

Arey di ss toh waise hi 10 ya 11 parts ka hota hai... Usme kya pareshaani... Likho hum hai na padne k liye... Aur main toh hu hi... 😉😉😉


tum sabne encourage kiya...thanks dear tumhe toh pata hai main emotional chapters likhne nahi aate still u all are tolerating my SS.😊

🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

THANKS A LOT🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Note: As u guys know that i m writing the same story for another forum too..so first few lines are taken from the song of that serial.

Sorry ,agar koi uss forum ka yahan bhi hai...i knw u guys love me 😳


BEING CRAZY IN LOVE

Tug Of War

CH 7

Chupke se aahista

Ho raha hun laapata

Uljha sawaalon mein

Ab tere hi khayaalon mein

Kaisi yeh chahat hai

Roke yeh naa ruke

Tanha na raahat hai

Dhadkan gavaa chuke

ISHWARI NIWAS

Dev's Room

"When are you going to talk to Surbhi?" Vicky asked

"Tomorrow she is coming to the office then may be" Dev replied unconvincingly.

Vicky left to his room.

Dev got up from the bed and began to pace around the room. He was continuously thinking of Sonakshi. How he became familiar, all too familiar with her, how he put all his meetings on hold ...or everything aside and used to wait for her, just to see her, talk to her and sit with her. But why he squandered his precious time so carelessly for Sonakshi. He never did so for anyone else, not even for his family member, ever in his life.

But he somewhere had a strong feeling that something very precious was slipping from his hands. Why he was craving for Sonakshi? He never got such a feeling ever before.

There were so many questions running across in his mind about his feelings for her. He tried hard not to answer any of them. Becoz he knew them.

He squeezed his eyes shut so as to release his endless anxieties but for his astonishment, beautiful face and charming smile of Sonakshi flashed inside the dark. He quickly opened his eyes but again same beautiful face came in front of his eyes.

What's happening to me? She was my game then why is she playing with me.I doesn't want to be trapped in this feeling.

Bose House

"Come back to your senses Sonakshi" said Elena in a soft tone, placing her hand on her shoulders.

"Di, I want Dev., I want to be with him, I want to touch him, hug him, kiss him, and want to do everything with him...I just need him..." pain and sufferings were very much evident from her face. Sona was so much yearning for Dev that she didn't even realized what she was saying .Elina knew Sona was not just fallen in love with Dev but was also sexually inclined towards him. She was staring Sona in disbelief. How Dev could do that and how could Sona be in love was beyond her comprehension.

My dear little sister, what are you asking for!

Half an hour later, after so much of crying and yelling, Sonakshi laid in a restless sleep.

She woke up at 7 o'clock in the morning. She got up and headed to the washroom and got ready for college.

"Maa, I'm going to the college"

"Beta, breakfast?"

"Mann nahi hai maa, college main kha loongi" Asha knew what she was going through...she didn't force her.

After 2 days

Sonakshi got ready and after breakfast she left for college. But instead of going to her college, she went to Dev's office.

At Dev's office:

Sonakshi was standing in front of Dev's office. She went inside.

Answer me... I want to know the reason behind your refusal.

She went upstairs.

"Mam your name" asked the receptionist.

"Sonakshi Bose"

The receptionist started checking the appointment register.

"Mam there's no appointment by this name? Plz leave your message here, we will convey it to boss." replied the receptionist politely.

"Yaah, I haven't taken any appointment before coming here. Actually it's personal and I want to meet him right now." Sonakshi replied, the last sentence without hesitation.

"Sorry mam, he is in a meeting."

"Tell him my name"

Receptionist looked at Sonakshi and assumed her as one of Dev's girlfriend.

Ab boss ki gfs bhi yahaan ayengi,unka alag se register maintain karna padega

Bose HOUSE

"Yaah...plz come in," Though Bijoy was much angry but still he stayed calm. "Tell me"

Ishwari came to Bose house with Baldev and RadhaRani.

"Bhaisahab,main bohot sharminda hun par kuch kar bhi nahi sakti.Galti meri thi, mujhe pehle Dev se pooch lena chahiye tha. Ashaji main samajh sakti hun aap pe kya beet rahi hogi. Main bhi do betiyon ki maa hun. Ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dijiyega."

"Nahi koi baat nahi...bachhe bade hone ke baad apni hi chalate hain. Kya kahein."Bejoy replied.

Dev's office

"Sir, here's a girl who want to meet u ..." receptionist called Dev., who was in the middle of a meeting.

"Don't you know I'm in a meeting ...don't disturb" he shouted on her.

Surbhi toh nahi...wait karne ko bolta hun..giving a pause, he continued, "what's her name?"

"Sir, Sonakshi Bose" Sonakshi!! Dev didn't expect Sonakshi at his office.

Why is she here...what for? He was confused, a little shocked but at the same time was happy too as he would get to see her after two long days and two longest nights.

"Let's postpone this meeting... you all may leave now," saying so he called the receptionist.

"Send Sonakshi Bose in"

"Mam you may go"

Ab toh sahi mein boss ki gfs ka register banana padega; waise hi office load kam tha

Sonakshi went to his cabin. She opened the door and saw Dev sitting on a big black chair. Sona went inside his big cabin. On seeing her, Dev got up from his chair.

"Hi Sonakshi. How are you?" He saw anger, frustration, love, number of expressions on her face.

How can I be without u??

Sona came near to him and tightly grabbed his collar.

"Why Dev... why me? Main hi mili thi tumhe...meri zindagi se khelne ke liye? Look at me. See what you have done to me...why'd you do that?"

"Sona"

"Do I look like any random girl... do I look as if I am mad for you like any random girl...do I look like all those girls who follow you crazily...do I look like any random girl who love you like insane...do I look like any other girl who want to hug you, kiss you ...who want to have sex with u...do I look like any those random girls???" tears were flowing from her eyes.

Whereas Dev was continuously saying "no no Sonakshi NEVER".

"NOOO...NOOO...NOOO...I am one of those now, I want everything...I want to be with you...not just for now, or today, I want you with me every time...always...forever I want to see you when I open my eyes, when I close my eyes ,want you always by my side...I want you to ravish each and every inch of my skin."

"SHHHUHH...Plz Sona ...tumhe pata hai tum kya chahti ho?"

She left his collar and threw herself into his arms and cried heartily. "Look what you have turned me into...I hate this...i hate myself...i hate u for all this"

He left Sona, picked up the receiver of the intercom.

"Cancel all my meetings and appointments for the day...I don't want to meet anybody today and don't disturb me till I am in my cabin" Dev ordered.

He came back to Sona "what do u want?"

"As if you don't know" Sona replied looking at him. She forgot why she was here.

Dev wrapped Sona tightly in his arms. They stood still, no breathing, no movement, there was nothing but a feeling of helplessness was there. She was staring into the never ending depth of his eyes.

She was here with him, for him.

Sona plz don't do.

"Sonakshi, you know why I refused for the marriage" Dev wanted to tell her the truth.

"No...Dev main yahaan aayee toh yahe janane ke liye hun...lekin aaj main tumhare mein sama jana chahti hun.Phir pata nahi yeh pal waapas mile yaa nahi. Can't you make me yours today forever?"

Dev got little scared to see Sonakshi's boldness." Kya hua,tum bhi toh yeha chaahte the ...ab mein chahti hun"

But what about Surbhi? I can't do this,

"Sonakshi, main tumhe sab batana chahta hun".

Ignoring him, she tried to get closer to his lips. This was the first time he saw raw passion within her eyes; she had tried to turn him on through her beautiful begging to be kissed lips. Her offer was tempting.

His head reeling, Dev battled for composure. But with plain features but soaker hair and tempting figure, Sonakshi was lovely in that way. These killer considerations were enough to make him aroused. He was imagining himself feeling her wetness and then finally claiming her.

Dev couldn't take it anymore. He bent a little and touched his lips against hers. Both of them trembled a little...no, not because of fear but because of love and yes also because of good amount of lust. Sona rubbed then pressed her lips against his.

"Dev touch me ...plz,"Sona begged.

How could i love her?? How???I can't destroy everything.

He didn't touch her but let her touch him. Against his will, he hoped it would please her and help her move on. But somewhere he was sure he too was in love with this girl who was bent on destroying him. He knew he had fallen to the Dark side of her. He knew he was betraying Surbhi and his family - for her.

Reception

"Hi, I have an appointment with Mr.Dixit today." Surbhi was here to meet Dev.

"Sorry mam, boss is busy today and has cancelled all his appointments for the day. Shuld I reschedule it for tomorrow."

"OK."

"Mam, excuse me, I just come back"

Receptionist got up from her seat.

Taking advantage of the situation Surbhi went towards Dev's cabin just to surprise him. She opened the door very slowly but the scene inside the room was unbelievable for her. She was shocked to see Dev lying on the couch with all his shirt buttons open, beneath a girl who was kissing his naked upper body obsessionally and sucking his lips.

Only thing that Surbhi found strange was Dev wasn't even touching that girl.

Dev is lying beneath that girl??? Is he in love???

She closed the door slowly and came out of his cabin and office. She had tears in her eyes.

Surbhi already knew everything about Dev and his flirtatious nature .But still she always loved him.

She sat in her car and hummed a song with a croaked voice while driving.

Love and devotion, baby I can't get enough

of all that love and devotion in my life.

Love and devotion, baby love and devotion,
You are the sunshine of my life.

"haha..." Surbhi remembered how she and Dev used to make fun of this song.

Only devotion in my life.

Dev's cabin.

After some more than 1 hr .Dev got up from the couch, buttoned his shirt.

"Dev "Sona hugged him from behind.

"Plz marry me and make me yours forever."

"That's not possible Sonakshi. You know I have decided to marry somebody else"

Sona was already heartbroken.

"Who is she? Do you love her more than me?"

"She is my childhood best friend, Surbhi."

She came in front of Dev."Sonakshi, plz don't look at me like this. Surbhi needs me more"

"And I don't need you and what about you? Don't you need me...come on Dev, we both know the truth...I don't understand the reason why can't you marry me."

She asked "Ok why her only? Just give me a genuine answer and I promise you I will never come back to your life ever again."

Dev learned to keep all his emotions under control from a very young age. So, he was good in showing those emotions which he want others to see and successfully kept his actual emotions under wraps. But this time it was difficult for him to hide his emotions from Sonakshi.

"Surbhi has seen the exploitation and I have gone through it"

"EXPLOITATION?? main kuch samjhi nahi"

Bose house

"Wat ...I don't get you ..."Sonakshi's marriage with Vicky..."

"Lekin"

"We r not in hurry...aap soch lijiye...hamare bachhon ki khushi ke liye"

"OK...aap jaisa theek samjhen." Bejoy at last gave his consent for Vicky and Sona marriage.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Miaprincess

Cute!! Please update soon.. Thank you!!


i am latelatief...

thanks a ton

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