Devakshi FS: 'In Sickness & Health' (Part 3+4 UP) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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hai dear nice start..likd it vry much...waitng fr nxt pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey nicely written dear...do update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you all for your comments. Hope you enjoy the second part as well. :)

Part 2

Woh bhaiyaa...Nikki says and nudges Ishwari.

Woh Dev, Sona tumhare jaane ke baad se thodi Bimaar lag rahi thi, jab humne doctor ku baat ki ya tumhe batane ki, toh usne saaf inkaar kar diya. Hume nahi Pata Tha ki woh itni kamzor padh jayegi, Ishwari says.

Lekin maa, mujhe ek baar batana toh chahiye Tha nah.

Magar Dev, Sona ne mana Kiya Tha. Upar se tu usse janta hai, woh tumhe kaam ke waqt pareshaan nahi karegi.

Acha chal koi baat nahi, tu jaake fresh hoja, tab tak Sona bhi uth jayegi. Phir tum dono kuch kha ke aaram karna. Chal Nikki, says Ishwari and walks out of the room with Nikki.

After they leave, Dev locks the door and looks at Sonakshi. He goes and sits beside her, and caresses her face.

Kya karu main tumhaara? Pagal ladki! Dev mutters and kisses her forehead. He then leaves to freshen up.

By the time Dev returns from the bathroom, Sona had woken up and was trying to sit properly on the bed. She was having difficulties in doing so, and she still felt weak. Dev quickly rushes up to her and makes her sit properly. Sonakshi then realises that Dev is home, and hugs him quickly.

Dev tum Kab waapas aye? Mujhe Pata bhi nahi chala. I missed you so much, chattered Sonakshi happily, forgetting all her pain and sickness.

Dev slowly detangles himself from the hug, and looks at her with a stern face.

Dev, kya Hua? Asks Sonakshi.

Hona kya hai? Kuch khaas nahi. Sirf yahi ki aaj jab main ghar lauta, toh mujhe meri biwi behosh mili, aur doctor usse dekhne aye the ghar. Uski tabyat thik nahi thi, aur ussne mujhe batana zaroori nahi samjha. Aur toh aur usne baaki sab ko bhi mujhe kuch bhi batane se mana kardiya Tha. Bas yahi sab Hua, par Mera kya? Mujhe kuch batane and nah batane se kya farak padta hai?!! shouts Dev angrily.
To be continued...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Hi dear...

Very nice start...
Plz update soon..
Can u pm me Ur writings...
A ridiculous request...
1 request plz update all the parts together, no patience left...
N Ur story is jus on the current tract which makes more eager...


Thank you. And yeah sure. Though my first writing is still incomplete.
I'll think about posting everything togther. Lol. Till then enjoy. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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dev loves spna a lot and sona too loves him immensely continue soon waiting to read how she will manofy him
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the 2nd part too...
Dev''s answer wow hit on right nerve of sona...
Now how will she Manofy him...
N looking forward for dr. Ans...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please continue...I love the care that he is showing towards her...👏...pls update soone...
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It was lovely!!
Please cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waiting for the next update..good start though!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So guys...Here's the last and final part. I have combined both part 3 and 4 together. Hope you guys like it.

Enjoy!!! :)

Sonakshi listened to everything quietly, with her head down. She was not able to look at him knowing that she was at fault and because of her only, Dev is so angry.

Sonakshi, main wait kar raha hu. Kuch bolna hai tumhe? Dev asks her sternly, but Sonakshi could hear the disappointment and hurt in his tone.

Sorry, Sonakshi says in a small voice.

Woh I didn't realise ki meri tabyat itni bigad jayegi. Phir tum bhi toh nahi the ghar pe. Main pareshaan nahi karna chahati thi, mutters Sonakshi.

Toh kya ab main khush hu yeh sab jaankar? Dev asks sarcastically.

Sorry nah baby, Sonakshi says making a puppy dog face.

No. Aaj yeh sab mujhpe kaam nahi Karne wala. Yeh acha hai tumhaara. I mean khud galti karo, phir aise cute se faces banalo taaki main tumse naraaz bhi nah rahu, Dev complains.

I'm really sorry baby. Pakka dobara nahi karungi, says Sonakshi with a pouty face.

Dev smiles shaking his head.

Tum bhi naa jaan...and quickly hugs her, kissing all over her face.

Acha yeh sab baad mein, abhi tum kuch kha lo, phir take your medicines, and uske baad you're gonna rest, Dev said strictly.

After making her have her food and medication, they both lied down on the bed for some much needed rest.

Sona quickly kept her head on Dev's chest, held him across his chest, and also tangled her legs with him.

Aaj bahut pyaar aa raha hai kisi ko, Dev says in a teasing manner.

Haan toh. Haq hai Mera. Mera kamra, Mera Pati, main jo chahun karu. Tumhe kya? Sonakshi replies haughtly.

Acha baba. Thik hai. Mujhe tum yeh batao ki tum Bimaar kaise huyi?

Sonakshi quickly hides her face in his chest.

Uh...woh..Hum nah kal baat karenge. Thik hai? Sona quickly mumbles.

Nope. Mujhe abhi jaanna hai, Dev says sternly.

Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai Ki tumne koi gadbad ki hai issi liye mujhe nai bata rahi ho.

Nahi. Aisi koi baat nahi Hai. Tum thak Gaye ho nah. Hum kal baat karenge nah.

Sonakshi!

Listening to his no-nonsense voice, Sona gulped.

Ab toh tu gayi, thinks Sonakshi.

Woh aaj kal bahut thand hai nah, i think iss liye.

Oh really? Dev asks sarcastically.

Sonakshi cutely pouts and says.

Woh main baarish mein bhig gayi thi.

Dev looks at her sternly.

Fine! Woh itne din baad baarish ho rahi thi, toh mera mann kiya baarish mein bhigne ka.

Aur thodi ice cream bhi kha li thi...Sona mutters slowly, hoping he would not catch that.

WHAT?! Are you serious? Shouts Dev.

And please, I know tumhaara thoda sa kitna hota hai. Dev says disapprovingly.

Sonakshi hides herself more in Devs chest.

Maine tumhe mana kiya tha na. Tum baat kyun nahi samajhti Sona. Abhi pichle mahine hi tumhe halka sa cold huya tha. Phir bhi tum... Says Dev frowning.

Sorry na baby. Woh main tumhe bahut miss kar rahi thi. Lekin galti tumhari hain. Kyun mujhe akele chodh kar gaye tum.

Haan. Ab saara ilzaam mujhpe daal doh. Khud ne mana kiya tha saath jaane se. Woh kya kaha tha, 'Main waha akele kya karungi. Tum toh saara din kaam mein busy honge. Tum jao. Main ghar par rahungi.'

Haan- haan. Thik hai. Meri hi galti hai. Maine sorry bhi bola hai. Ab yeh sab bhul jao, aur baby me or something.

Kitna miss kiya maine tumhe. Sona says making a baby face.

Aww..my baby. Come here. Dev says and hugs her tightly.

Just as he leaned down to kiss her, she put her hands in between them.

Sonaaa..whines Dev.

Nahi naa Dev. Tum bhi bimaar par jaoge.

Haan toh. Achi baat hai nah. Main bhi tumhare saath bed rest pe rahunga. Whispers Dev naughtily and winks at Sona.

Badmaash...says Sona and hides herself in his chest.

Dev laughs, and kisses her forehead.

Ab so jao baby. I love you.

I love you too. Says Sona and quickly pecks his lips.

Sonakshi falls asleep in his arms, feeling at home.

The end!

Looking forward for your comments!

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