Devakshi FS: 'In Sickness & Health' (Part 3+4 UP)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Okay guys. Am writing after so long. I had started a FF, but then writers block. :( Though am still working on it.

For this FS, i have already completed it, so no writers block and an incomplete story. Hope you guys like it. And please do ignore errors, i have typed in in my phone. Lol

Do comment and like. If i get a good response, I'll update the parts regularly.

Index
Part 1- Page 1
Part 2- Page 2
Part 3 & 4- Page 3


Part 1

Sonakshi was unwell since the last two days, and Dev was away on a business trip to Pune. It was first time in the 6 months of their marriage, that Dev was away from her, and she missed him teribbly.

Everybody was tensed at home as Sonakshi was not listening to anybody. She didn't want to take rest, she was either taking care of Ishwari, or helping Nikki with her studies. She refused to take any medications, stating that she was fine and that she is feeling a bit unwell due to the weather changes.

She had told everyone to not too tell Dev that she was feeling unwell. Firstly, because he'll get really worried and rush back home, and secondly because she knew if he gets to know the reason of her sickness, he'll be royally pissed.

Whenever he used to call, she talked to him normally and in a chirpy manner. Sonakshi didn't want Dev to find out that she was sick, because if he finds something different in her voice he'll ask questions, and she won't be able to lie to him.

The day of Dev's arrival

Sonakshi was working in the kitchen and instructing Kichu bhaiyya about the day's menu, when she suddenly felt darkness in front of her eyes, and she fainted.

Doctor didi...doctor didi, calls out Kichu bhaiyya.

Maaji..doctor didi behosh ho gayi hai. Maaji jaldi ayiye, Kichu bhaiya calls out to Ishwari, panicking.

Ishwari and Nikki quickly run to the kitchen and see Sona lying on the floor unconscious.

Maa yeh bhabhi ko kya Hua, says Nikki in a concerned tone. Ishwari goes and tries calling out to Sona by slightly shaking her.

Heh bhagwaan, isse toh bahut hi tez bhukaar hai. Lagta hai issi liye behosh ho gayi. Pahele bhi Kaha Tha ki doctor ko dikha lo, magar nahi, mutters Ishwari in a concerned and panicked tone.

Nikki, jaldi se doctor Sinha ko call karke ghar bulao. Kichu zara meri madad karo Sona ko kamre mein le jaane tak.

By the time the Doctor came and checked up on Sonakshi, her fever had gradually increased, she had become a bit pale also.
He gave her an injection and prescribed some medicines. When he started to leave after giving instructions to Ishwari and Nikki, Dev entered his room.

Maa, kya Hua? Yeh doctor Sinha yaha? Dev asked confused, when he suddenly saw Sonakshi lying on the bed looking pale and weak.

Sona...Sonakshi ko kya Hua maa? Nikki? Koi kuch bol kyu nahi raha, Dev shouted.

Mr. Dixit main apko batata hu. Aap chaliye mere saath, said Dr. Sinha.

Magar Sonakshi, mutters Dev.

Thodi Der ke liye aapke maa aur bahen nazar rakhlengi Unke upar. Aap mere saathiya chaliye.

Dev and Dr. Sinha walk out of his room.

Woh Doctor-...Dev starts to speak.

There's nothing to worry about Mr. Dixit. Sonakshi ko kuch serious nahi Hua hai. I think weather changes ke kaaran, aur thik se khaana na khane ke kaaran yeh sab Hua hai. And also it seems that she hasn't been sleeping well since a few days. It's just a case of weakness and cold & flu. Kuch din aaram karegi aur thik se diet follow karegi toh she'll be back to normal. You just make sure ki woh yeh sab follow kare, Dr. Sinha explains to Dev.

Thank you so much doctor. And I'll make sure that she'll follow all the instructions properly. Thanks once again, says Dev shaking Dr. Sinha ' s hands.

No problem Mr. Dixit. Agar aur koi problem ho toh mujhe call kar lijiye ga. Main chalta hu abhi.

After Dev sees doctor Sinha out, he returns to his room and sees Ishwari and Nikki sitting on his bed with a morose looking face.

Ab mujhe koi kuch batayega ki kya Hua Tha? Asks Dev.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Itni sari Hullabulla main u managed to write a story!! Hats off to u yar!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A nice start!!😃
Cont soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monaleojan

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Itni sari Hullabulla main u managed to write a story!! Hats off to u yar!!


Hehe. Thank you. This is what happens when you have read all Devakshi married stories, and looking for more. (You write one for yourself. Lmao!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

A nice start!!😃

Cont soon😊


Thanks alot dear. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi dear...
Very nice start...
Plz update soon..
Can u pm me Ur writings...
A ridiculous request...
1 request plz update all the parts together, no patience left...
N Ur story is jus on the current tract which makes more eager...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice one
i liked it
update soon n pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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RES..
will Read after Fully updated 😉

and them will comment...

anyways keep it up...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start, pls update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ab mujhe batoge ki aage kya hua
Update soon

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