OS - Say you believe me!! Part 5 Pg 39 Sept 25

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..juhi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#221

awww...that was sweet...now will ishwari start getting insecure again...

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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Wow... Credit... Super...

Only in the Dev Sona Conversation...
you need reading glasses. I said ESPECIALLY that convo. and this part (as in the whole part 4) wouldn't have come out the way it did without you.

One thing I couldn't help but notice...
Fresh out of shower, clean shaved, hair-trimmed and neatly brushed, every inch the savvy entrepreneur ready to start his day and take on the world

Perfect Example of CVs if you don't give us... We create our own...

😆 I just couldn't resist, I swear!!! I so wanted to get the episode one wala Dev Dixit and lo behold.. here he is!! 😆

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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: fanktlk
Btw this OS is already 27 pages... Can we have the last part quickly please

27 pages?? My word doc is showing 30.

Last part - itni jaldi kya hain?? Let everyone read and digest this one. I'll THINK about the next part after a couple of days 😈

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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: LiveLife321
Amazing. 👏
When will be the next part? Cant wait yaar...post it soon...Pretty please.

Thanks Lata. 😃

Next part... don't know. I am still

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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: Malvika07
Suviii🤗
I had a lump in my throat while reading both the Dev-Sona convos, the one in the restaurant and the one in the rain. OMG, this so so amazing!!

Awww

WHY CANT THEY SHOW THIS ON THE SHOW😡😡😡

I don't know.

This makes so much more sense than the crapfest going on currently. Each and every character is behaving exactly the way they should in your story.
Dev scattering her face with kisses is the reaction Dev should rationally have when they get back together , considering all they've been through.

Haina... it's natural. Almost instinctive. There is nothing bold or obscene about it. Don't know what the makers had been thinking!!

Arghh I'm so mad at the makers now!!
Can't wait for the next part
Thank you for writing this suvi, it's the only thing keeping me sane right now.

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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: ..juhi..
awww...that was sweet...now will ishwari start getting insecure again...

Thank you.

Well.. yeah. Her insecurities are not going to disappear just because she wants Dev to be happy.

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deepaligupta197

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Posted: 8 years ago

#227

Tears are words that need to b written...you hv gently picked up each tear Sona n Dev had shed...moulded it by ur thoughts...result this beautiful update...gradual yet beautiful clearing of vision...layer by layer...rebuilding of trust...only u can bring that sense of satisfaction ...something so believable.

It was so important for Dev n Sona to talk n clear up d mess .Lingering, bottled-up anger never reveals the 'true colors' of an individual. It, on the contrary, becomes all mixed up, rotten, confused, forms a highly combustible, chemical compound then explodes as something foreign.

The talk was the first most beautiful part of this update.

Dev took one step back into the rain when his arm was held and pulled. He turned and found Sonakshi in his arms. His Sona. In his arms. Hugging him...

Love knows no limit to its endurance, no end to its trust, no fading of its hope; it can outlast anything. Love still stands when all else has fallen. Dev n Sona feeling at peace, however fragilely, made it easy to slip into the visionary end of the dark-sight. The rose shadows said that they loved the sun, but that they also loved the dark, where their roots grew through the lightless mystery of the trust again... outstanding expression , got me totally choked.

Maybe because of the food habits. I don't know. But I always thought she did. She told me she did. But that night I realized she would rather end her life than live with my choice." His eyes filled up at the memory.

For any parent , love for a child, it seems to me, must include a desire for his maturity and ultimately his independence. Watching a personality unfold is perhaps the deepest pleasure of parenthood. But Ishwari seems to operate under the illusion that if she can just get Dev to act according to her wishes , they will be a perfect family.

As for Dev it was much harder to handle the sense that he have to live up to the mark someone else had set for him. The grades became too important, the competition too frantic, the fear of disappointing his mom became an overwhelming nightmare. This is exactly wat happened to Dev. The successful entrepreneur who cud make business dealings in d blink of an eye without questioning his ability failed to stand up for his love...merely due to the fact that a deal... success or failure his mother was there to stand by him , support him , embrace him n so he also believed that she wud accept Sona but the fateful nyt where he saw his mother fight for life n death made him question his own decision abt Sona

The fact remains he was torn b/w love for ma n love for Sona...only d burden of his mothers womb outweighed Sona's love.

Now that's what I call a perfect closure to d loops we are witnessing in d show. A heartfelt thank you for maintaining d sanctity of d characters n giving us such beautiful updates.

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Mohi99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Awww this is what shud happn on show... R cv s reading suvika s OS?????... I wanna scream... Lol... Superb... Please pm me ur next.. I cant wait

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mona5524

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Posted: 8 years ago

#229

it is written so beautifully. I can't stop myself from reading it again and again. u portrayed every emotions every word so beautifully. I just so much loved it. plz update soon I can't wait...