OS - Say you believe me!! Part 5 Pg 39 Sept 25 - Page 20

Originally posted by: Jade0001

I really don't know how I missed this thread

Parts 2 & 3

Just Mind Blowing updates

Thank you. I will PM you when I post my next date, to make sure you don't miss it. 😉

Understandable that Sonakshi would still be angry at Dev but the moment Asha finds Dev's letter she realizes just how much he loves Sona and Bijouy did the right thing by calling Dev and speaking to him that is exactly how issues must be sorted out

This show has always kept it natural and low key. Nothing OTT or melodramatic. I tried to maintain the same.

Asha inviting Dev to stay for dinner and he too enjoyed it

The Bose Family once again sees Dev's kindness as he showers concern and care for his employee and family .

Waiting now to see Dev and Sonakshi going out for coffee

😆

Originally posted by: Mohi99

Gal u hv to write more... As i like to read more and more u write... V apt to the current track and nice... Love itt... U hv to pm me ur next... Pls pls...

Originally posted by: randomramblings

suvika, you are an awesome writer. Agree with you that the current track is very melodramatic.

KRPKAB has lost its charm between 100- 150 episodes,... its becoming more monotonous.

Dev is no way on the path of redemption. leave alone redemption, there is no realization on his part .

lets wait and watch , may be a couple of episodes more, we can already gauge where the story is headed to.

Originally posted by: gmgi

I was playing hide and seek in the forum from the past 2 days. Didn't want to read, see or even have a minuscule glimpse of any spoilers so as to retain my sanity. Yesterday was a lost cause. Today I was more determined. And as soon as I log in this is what I found.

I have detached myself from the show. That is the only way I can pen down this OS. I watch the episodes of course, but I am keeping the commenting on various posts to a bare minimum. But am so glad my update cheered you up. 🤗

Thank you Suvi. Loved it. I found the original Dev and Sona whom I fell in love with in your OS. The ones in the show are their doppelgangers. Loved the mirroring action of both Bijoy and Sona during dinner with Dev. Perfect father and daughter pair.😆

Yeah. I know what you mean. When Bijoy hugged Sona and say - tu toh meri Pride hain... I was reminded of my dad so much. And the scene I'd written... it was that way in my house more often than not. My dad and I on one team. We cheered together. We sulked together. Best days.

You have made Dev really work hard to get even that small smile from Sona. I am looking forward for their coffee date😳

Oh trust me... even I am looking forward to it. 😆 Thank you. ❤️

Originally posted by: taara113

I want a PM tooo the next time...

Sure Vandita. I have sent a buddy request. Please accept. 😃

Im loving your pace...its not dragged neither is it forced...its a sensible progression...its neither no efforts nor overbearing intrusion...its the perfect balance...the dinners were lovely...shaheer has a beautiful smile and when u make him smile, i can hv a beautiful imagination...

And my imagination is wild with a capital W. I am toning it down for this OS. Divya (fanktlk) will attest to that. 😆

I really liked how u brought that accident incident...he is not a bad guy afterall...dey were all reminded...it took me back to the time bijoy had visited his office to complain and then he saw how helpful dev was to his employees...he is still the same Dev...just caught amongst complex relationships...

True. And as he himself said, relationships are complex. I don't understand them. Business is easy. No emotions messing up the decisions. He is caught but trying to understand and untangle himself. He has to if he wants Sona in his life.

Looking forward for next...

Also wld u focus on clearing out ishwari's intentions and how she is feeling/thinking or focus will be limited tk devakshi (i like the later more, ish anyways gets an overdose of attention on the show)...

Sabr. Sabr ka fal meeta hota hain. I will try my best not to disappoint you. 😉

Thank you so much for the feedback Vandita. 🤗